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Posted: 10 years ago
Did I read it right ? DId Tejawat just do the only good thing in his whole life ? Felt bad for Mala incase she shoots her son without knowing and announced it to her ? WoW

Nice update Rithu.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Yeeeh I am first.

The face off of the mother and son.
Sumer is with Rudr. Will not question providence. He was very much needed to even the odds. Mala atlast tried to be loyal to someone. But what is she going to do when she comes to make that the officer she is trying to shoot is her son.


Yay! Face off continues into the next update.
Sumer has a talent of being in the right place at the right time. That's why I wanted him on Rudra's team. Lady luck loves him.
Mala and Tejawat really seemed to love each other in the beginning of the show, so I had to keep her loyal to him.
What is she gonna do? I'll think about it tomorrow.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SPraba

OMG what a nail biting update.
Finally Mala gets to know Rudra in person
But loved how u have skteched down Mala character and I have already told u I love Sumer and Mohini in your stories rithu
So now am eager to know what Mala would do. Exciting and do update soon now
Thanks for the pm dear


Thank you. Mala was actually harder to write than Mohini and Sumer. I knew I wanted them to have a good heart inspite of their brand of craziness. But Mala's only redeeming character is that she loves Tejawat. I didn't want to change that.
Will update by Tuesday if I'm done with by then.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutemithra

Interesting chapter rithu... Mala is now aware of the truth..waiting to see wat she ll do...


Thank you. Mala knows that he is her son, hopefully she will do what he wants her to do.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tinamehta

Wow. Mala is crazy in love with Tejawat. Ummm she is quite callous about the girls. Some of the girls weren't taken care of well. Shouldn't they all be taken care of well. She believes all her husband's lies. I can feel Rudra's pain. I don't know how he will reconcile with his mother after that. Hope she realizes her mistake after she comes to know who he is.


Yup this Khoobsurat aurat finally feels she belongs to someone. She should have checked up on them before packing of the next bride.
I can't see a reconciliation in store for the mother son in the near future. She has to earn his forgiveness.
She will definitely realise what he has been through.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JJKKL

<font size="2" color="#000099">Did I read it right ? DId Tejawat just do the only good thing in his whole life ? Felt bad for Mala incase she shoots her son without knowing and announced it to her ? WoW

Nice update Rithu. </font>


Thanks JJ. The man loves his wife, what else can I say.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! 😲anxiously waiting for more ... what Paro decided on the wedding? do not delay in updating, I'm dying to intrigue you've created !!! fantastic update!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for mala's next action thanks for pm dear.
Super cute update
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Posted: 10 years ago
What the f? Is Mala crazy? Delusional? I so want to slap her right now. God I hope she does shoot Rudra, but you know, only in the leg or arm or totally misses him, so that she can be sent to prison for deadly assault on an officer.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anny14

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#cc3333">Wow! 😲anxiously waiting for more ... what Paro decided on the wedding? do not delay in updating, I'm dying to intrigue you've created !!! fantastic update!👏</font>

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Paro had already decided what to do, she is waiting for the right opportunity to express her desires.
Will update on Tuesday.
Thank you.

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