FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed)

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

it nice update but rudra he is jallad and totally different from RR BSD officer as jallad .

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@rupao21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oh my gosh. He is ruthless!! Wah wah..
I love how dark this, it's black and grey.. No whites in between, well I'm assuming until Parvati gets in the picture.
Mind blown with Rudra's entry, completely off chart to what he does or how he is on the show. Which only makes me eager to read Paro's entry. I know this might be too soon to say but I honestly have a feeling this is going to be one worth while FF. Keep it up! Thank you for PM'ing Always a pleasure reading your work.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow Rudra is absolutely ruthless

my God Tejawat actually turned him into a stone-hearted monster in return for shelter

but in truth one cannot change one's destiny

awaiting the next part

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Crazy410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

It reminds me of the character from Linda Howard's book where he was a contract killer. He falls in love with the innocent girl that he is supposed to kill.

Love your interpretation of Rudra. I cannot wait for more. Hurry up with the next chapter please...😊

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

OMG...Beautiful update...loved it...Waiting for friday... 👏

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

wow that was incredible.
Rudra here is a dark jallad in true form.
loved it.
waiting for paro's entry now eagerly.
tfd pm.
ur an awesome writer.

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

awesome update.
Rudra already sounds ruthless.
He really doesn't have a heart at the moment.
Waiting for paro's entry to come and turn this stone into a human.

Edited by rashika - 11 years ago

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DevdasiSingh

@DevdasiSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ammara.R
Yar its too good. Countine soon. The description of rudra house gave me goose bump

Thanks. That was the plan!

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DevdasiSingh

@DevdasiSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: rupao21
Oh my gosh. He is ruthless!! Wah wah..
I love how dark this, it's black and grey.. No whites in between, well I'm assuming until Parvati gets in the picture.
Mind blown with Rudra's entry, completely off chart to what he does or how he is on the show. Which only makes me eager to read Paro's entry. I know this might be too soon to say but I honestly have a feeling this is going to be one worth while FF. Keep it up! Thank you for PM'ing Always a pleasure reading your work.

Yes, he has to be a jallad! This was the darkest way I knew how to make him. Thanks for the kind words! 😊

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DevdasiSingh

@DevdasiSingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Crazy410
It reminds me of the character from Linda Howard's book where he was a contract killer. He falls in love with the innocent girl that he is supposed to kill.
Love your interpretation of Rudra. I cannot wait for more. Hurry up with the next chapter please...😊

I actually know the author you are talking about, but I've never read anything she's written. What a coincidence that he story had a contract killer in it as well. As for my story, you'll just have to wait and see how it turns out. I'm working on the next two chapters right now. 😉

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