FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

oh...beeni beeni..just luvved it yaar...

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

omggg... so heart wrenching !!!!

Read it with a lump in my throat !!! The way you wrote it beenzzz...it took my breath away...
Awwwieee, why did you make Shantanu cry so much rey !!! on one side I hated to read that he was upset and crying and on teh other hand I wished if I could see this track on screen...beautifully written !!!

Am worried for Shantanu more than Khanak...especially when Khaanak has just gone through a surgery, baby loss, amnesia and poor girl is going through the trauma of re-visiting Suraj's accident...
I think I am not normal...!!!

Kudos sweetie...well written...will follow and keep commenting though sometimes, lack of time can delay the catching up !!!
Thanks for writing such beautifully !!!!

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Sigh... Beeni darling,

What can I say...I could see it all play right in front of my eyes. Beautiful told and with such sesnsitivity and care.

My jaanus...love them...you have written it just the way I wanted this track to play out...sigh...

Oh and by the way darling "HAPPY Belated Birthday " Darling...loads of hugs and kisses. God bless

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

I will bow down to you sweetheart!!That was the most realistic and beautiful ever part written!!!Just wow!!!Speechless!!!!OMG!!!So ShaNak like we knew and loved and still love!!!!AMAZING!!

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

When was your B'day???OMG so sorry!!!Why didn't FB notify me?How did i miss!!Sorry hon!!Happy Belated Birthday!!!Love you!!

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minnu345

@minnu345

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Hey beeni😊

poor shaan 😭cant see him in such a state

update was really emotional with a adorable memories😊

Waiting for the lovebirds to fall in love all over again😍

waiting for the next update😊

Love you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by minnu345 - 14 years ago

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IshBin

@IshBin

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

amazing...u r an awesome writer!!!
update soon!!

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Priyasree

@shonai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

the way u hv written this is jast awsm

luvd the update...& luv u

continue soon

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Beenz... *Jess bows...* Beautiful is the only word that comes to my mind at the moment...

So many relationships so beuatifully penned in a few words...

The sweet FB... was simply awesome... Mwaa for that.. memories refreshed... and I sigh with each word...

Khanak's partial amnesia more than screams of their painful journey together but the silver lining in the cloud is that they will fall in love all over again... Destined they are to be together... nothing else matters... and I for one am looking forward to this journey... haaayyy

Kudos Beeniiee... Lovely!!!

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