Graphic FF ~When Love Calls~ Note pg 84

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: deepalisawant99
Wow Di!! Dis part was fab.. Shanak nok-jhok always amuses me.. Nd da way u wrote was superb... Nw khanak to take badla..!! Can't wait to see wat khanak does to shaan..
Update soon...

@bold: was that not khank's mistake in the morning..she was too adamant..shaan actually waited for her even if he was late n she too said it as his budthalness...
so i wont blame shaan here..

mani..lovely update..
really this idea of graphic FF is simply superb..innovative..i have never seen someone including these many pics..few people give 1 or 2..but this idea if so fresh..
the pics u have chosen awesome to the core..
as someone said we need not picturise anything..
seeing the pics our imagination run wild..
its superb..
waise as i said above i felt khanak is too adamant..
may be as both of them were late for their respective meeting they fought in the morning with each other..
but khanak holding grudge to take care of him is not fair..(My POV)
but had they not fought over they could have saved some time..
hope in their next encounter both behave sensibly n get their work done on time..
if they fight again n get late for their appointment i personally wish to go with a white flag n call for peace..LOL!!!!

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Priya...don't ask rey !!! *wipes sweat off the brows*...*phew *...😆😆...

PS -- Anybody who wants an info on which Shanak pic is on which page in Pic Gallery...can turn to me now...!😳!!

really mani??
if i need any info i'll contact u..as sometimes i search to pics to make some siggies..
but u know wat..do u remember i promised u that once i become an expert i'll make siggies for ur FF..but sad part is u discontinued it for now i didnt get a chance to make one for u..😭😭😭

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

OMG Manitaaa ... This is brilliant ..

Just caught up with the Intro on page 5 !!!!!

Wowwwiee .. the Pics and Snaps .. SIGH !!!!

RBO .. Memories galoreee !!!!

I am sure gonna cry seeing those pics ;))))

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

OMGG ... I am ROFLing in Office ... LOLLL !!!!!

Just read part 2 ...

The Rickshaw Scene was Brilliant ... LMAOOO !!!!!!

Perfect Picturesss !!!!!!

Sigh ... What Great Days ... I miss RBO !!!!!

She called him a jerk ??
LMAOOO !!!!!

Yaaay ... Another Masterpiece from a Great Narrator ...

Manitaaa .. You rock girl .. U really Do !

God Blesss !!!!!!

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

🤣 AWESOME

i know it and for the first time my imagination in ur ff comes true 😳 , that they r in lift and would definitely fight , for lift where to go , 😆

love the part and their tiff in the lift and auto 😛

" Jerk " 😍 * dreaming * did i really seen it somewhere again 😍

awww i m missing my older sweetheart and jerk sooo much 😭 but , u came with the new life line through this ff *sigh *

* edit *
forgot to tell the pics selected is apt for the situation and sooo lovely 👍🏼 , though , i can see only few of them through cell as memory gets full after 5-6 photos 😆 😆

love u
suchi

Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago

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Pooja

@candy84

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Hey Manita,

This is seriously a brilliant stuff ... the way you are playing with those pictures, according to your story is just mindblowing.

I'm lovin it 😃

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Superb manita... luved it👏

Full shanak style yaar... their argument or conv was fun to read😆

but still at first he was mesmerized at her beauty... the auto part was super cute😍

finally he got a chance🥳

awww poor khanak ... but she is ready to teach him a lesson and another meeting 😉

amazing em luvin it

"how burthal of you"... cute

continue soon... waiting eagerly.

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Thanks a lot gals...love ya !!

Priya -- Hope I keep getting pics according to the story, as writing story according to pics is difficult...you can't think of better dialogues than those which were actually used in the show !!

Deepali -- Wait n Watch 😉

Bona -- Thanks sweetheart...I really hope I can go on with this format !!

Shonai -- It has to be more than a bomb when Shantanu and Khanak meet !!

Jyothi...loved your comments totally !!!

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: RB81

@bold: was that not khank's mistake in the morning..she was too adamant...

Exactly Ramani...it was HER mistake but she is used to having things HER way !!! According to her a decent guy should have waited and politely agreed to whatever she said ...afterall she had left her phone and she is no less than a Her Highness !!
Though she is still struggling for her career but she is confident of her mettle !!!
Now she is upset that if Shantanu would not have argued and behaved nicely ... toh she could have saved some time.
You will learn more about her character slowly... she accepts her mistake too but has to vent on someone for that gone project...so it's Shantanu !! 😳😃😃

shaan actually waited for her even if he was late n she too said it as his budthalness...
so i wont blame shaan here...
Even I don't blame him...poor guy got late because of her !!

mani..lovely update..
really this idea of graphic FF is simply superb..innovative..i have never seen someone including these many pics..few people give 1 or 2..but this idea if so fresh..
the pics u have chosen awesome to the core..
as someone said we need not picturise anything..
seeing the pics our imagination run wild..
its superb..
waise as i said above i felt khanak is too adamant..

She is not always like that...she is more cranky today as she was already late and did not want to go down first and then up to take her phone !!

may be as both of them were late for their respective meeting they fought in the morning with each other..
but khanak holding grudge to take care of him is not fair..(My POV)
That is the whole point...she is trying to meddle with him though he was not wrong... she feels that he is not a Gentleman...and because of his mannerless attitude , she got late

but had they not fought over they could have saved some time..
hope in their next encounter both behave sensibly n get their work done on time..
if they fight again n get late for their appointment i personally wish to go with a white flag n call for peace..LOL!!!!