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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey all my lovely ladies i m here to update next part of my ff
bundles of thx to all for giving me out standing response and loving me so much ....

part 2

as soon as shaan left for the office madhvi start praying to god that every thing went smoothly
today becoz she knows her son very well

shaan while driving for the office

shaan:uff kya din agaye han yar pehlay to main drive kar k frnds k sath chill karney jata tha
aur ab ..........yar i m just 25 q abi say sub meray peechey par gaye hain let me enjoy my self .....(making very innocent face)

shaan reached to the office ......he parks the car and came out .....

shann is very nervous:relax dude tu itna nervous q ho raha hai just chilllll lets just think k ye teri pehli date hai
hmmmmmmmm now i m feeling confident ohhhh

shaan enter in the office and first thing he start searching was gud luking girlz ...
shaan see's a beautiful girl standing on the reception....and shaan decided to go and talk to her

shaan to the receptionist ..
shaan:gud morning beautiful

girl was shocked to listen but when she looks at shaan she feels gud becoz shaan is so hand some after all

girl:hello hand some how can i help u?
shaan after getting gud response started his conversation:hey i m shaan i mean shantanu khandelwal ...
girl:shantanu khandelwal son of sunil khendelwal?
shaan:wow nice iq (shaan said with smiling face)yes my dear...

girl get very nervous to thing that she is trying to flirt with shantanu khandelwal son of the gr8 sunil khandelwal
but then girl thing he started it first .....

shaan:oh hello ?...........
girl coming back to reality:oh i m sorry sir i dint realize that u r MR.SHANTANU KHANDELWAL..

shaan:sorry kis liye line mar ney k liye shaan said it while moving close to her
girl:blush slightly

shaan:any ways yar meray dad ka cabin kidhar hai jaldi batao i m getting late
girl:straight and then first ryt ...

shaan:ok thank u ..........by the way can i know ur beautiful name?
girl:sure sir richa here .......

shaan:nice name but plz call me shaan we are like friends now ...
richa:ok sir.... i mean shaan

shaan wink's at her and step forward to his dad's cabin while thinking..
shaan:kitni ajeeb bat hai yar ye meray dad ka office hai aur mian aj tak yaha nai aya
its very strange

finally shaan reach to the sunil's cabin ...........shaan at the door ........

shaan:may i come in ?
sunil busy in his work not realizing that his idiot son is here

shaan stands in front of table:gud morning dad ?

now sunil look at him he was surprised but more happy:oh sorry i don't realize u my son
gud morning ...

shaan:its ok dad u were buzy in ur work (shaan said while siting on chair in front of sunil)
sunil:shaan i m so happy that u were here today

shaan:get;s happy that his dad is happy to see him in the office
shaan:i m happy to dad to be here .............

shaan:dad where is bhaiya?
akshay come in the cabin and said ................
akshay:chotey i m here

they both greet and after that three of them talk for a while and sunil and aksahy starts telling shaan abt his work
and giving him basic information abt there business

after 2 hours

sunil:ok akshay now that's it shaan ka pehla din hai aj k liye itna kafi hai
akshay:ok dad waisay b shaan kam karey ga tu us ko khud sub pata chal jaye ga

akshay keeps his hand on shaan;s shoulder:q shaan?
shaan was very happy that his bro and his dad really care's abt him:g bhaiya don't worry main
sub kuch seekh jao ga....

sunil was very happy to see's shaan's interest towards his work....


in the evening.........

three of them reach the house ............they r coming with smiling faces .........


madhvi sitting on couch w8ting for them...

madhvi:aray a gaye ap log?kaisay tha aj ka din?or shaan tumhara din kaisay tha beta?
in dono ney tum say zaida kam tu nai karwa ya na?aur....

shaan keeping his both hands on her shoulder's:mom mom mom relax take a deep breath and calm
down ........and now answer no 1 aj ka din bht acha tha i enjoyed working today
ans no 2 in dono ney mujh sey bil kul b zaida kam nai karwaya aj ok mom now u get all ur answers ....

sunil akshay and shaan smiled at madhvi's reaction

madhvi:oh thank god i was worried for u my son(holding shaan's face in her hands)
sunil:oh plz madhvi tum tu aisay behave kar rahi ho jaisay shaan ka office ka nai bal key
is k skool ka pehla din ho?

sunil joked and shaan and akshay laugh madhvi as well

akshay:mom now plz can we get in if u allow us..........
madhvi:oh sorry plz come in ..............

every 1 siting in the living area khusboo and dadi also join them and the all having family
time...............

after half an hour

madhvi:chalo time for dinner ap teeno fresh ho jao phr sub dinner karey gay...
shaan:ye mom plz i m very hungry i m going to change and i 'll be back in 2 min .......


they all have dinner together with light conversation ...

sunil:akshay hamey ik maneger ki zaroorat hai office main what do u think?
akshay:yes dad infect acha howa ap ney ye bat ki main ap ko bata na bhool gaya k
main maneger ki post k liye vacancy b through kardi hai infect kal hi interview hain
sorry dad i was so buzy that i cant able to tell u...

sunil:its ok no problem .......its gud i hope kal hi hamey ik acha ya achi maneger mill jaye ?
shaan:achi?kal girls k interview b hain (shaan get very excited)
sunil and every one smile on his question ................

shaan:dad kya larkiyo k interview main ley sakta hun ......plzzzz dad..
sunil:shaan ye hamari company k liye maneger k interview hain tumhey apni date k liye
larkiyo k interview nai lenay (sunil said in funny tune)

shaan gets upset ....

after dinner they watched t.v all together and then
every 1 decided to sleep
so every one wished gud night to each other and gone to sleep
so as madhvi prayed the day went smoothly


promo:khanak in the office........


so this is it girls i hope u liked it i know it was very boring this time but i promise
next part is going to be fun .....

plz do comment press like button's

and as always criticism are welcome with open arms...

luv zara😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
hi zara..............
amazing update
loved it.............
shan flirting with receptionist...............😆
wow............K family..............loved the way u described about them
loved it when shan said girls ka interview hoga...........
update soon
&
thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Aww Zara dear, not boring at all!! I like the way you are developing Shaan's character..telling us that he is still not ready to take work seriously, looking for distraction all the time!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update soon...like how you have written Shaan...the irresponsible, charming, thinks he's god's gift to womenkind types...very nice...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
superrrrrrrrrb job,,,
simply loved ur ff...
loved shan naughtiness dad kya mein ladhkyo k interview le sakta hun...

the promo is nice...
update it soooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hi zara it wasn't boring at all.loved it and thanks for the pm🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 purvi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
nyc one Zara....read both the parts now!...
Congos on ur First FF!!.... tht too on the best couple ShaNak! *hugs*...
Khanak will join the office....and mayb competition to Shaan?? (i hope so!)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
great update Zara😛
Shaan always flirting with girls hun😆😆
and let me guess Khanak is coming for the job naa?😃
cant wait for that
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Hi Zara
Great Update 😊
Continue Soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
thanks zara..i am soo tired todays soo not read it yet but definetly will be read it and do comments😆

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