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Posted: 14 years ago
read last 4 parts together...that was well written...
its not leukemia...then what's wrong with her? why is she is dreaming things..? that too weird things...
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Sonali
Read the last three parts together
Good job 👏
well written
please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aww missed so many updates!! Sigh never mind, shall keep myself abreast now!!😊

Part 3:
Oh.. I do hope nothing is seriously wrong with her!! Loved Dharam!1 Miss them and Akshay and daadi too!! Well nicely written and now off to read the next part!!
Part 4
Sigh.. am still sighing!! So so tender and warm. So loving and his concern for her so natural. Yes things should have been so!! Beautiful update. 👏 I am sure it is not leukemia!!😊
Part 5
Hahaha, lovely update again. Loved th fun filled lovey dovey moments!! Atta and towel were the two highlights of the match!!😆😉😳
Part 6
Wow, Knight and Day!! Good thinking Shantanu!! Atta boy. Now you can elaborately explain to her in detail with actions!! Hero ne heroine se kya kahaa!!😉😛 Great update!! Yeh tumhaare update thode lambe karo pleej. They are lovely and leave me hanging for more!!
Part 7
I knew it! Good God!! he is tom and She is Cam!! For sure! Aur wow, he got to see her in a swim suit!! Well almost!! But another sweet update!! Grr to R!1 Well at least Boo was with her so ok. But he better watch out. loved the references!! Keep writing !!
Part 8
Ahaa.. good girl !! thats what I also want to see Khanak do!! Take charge of her life. Well you made my dream come true!1 good update!!
Conphused about the end!! I hope not anything bad!! I can't handle memory loss!!😕😊
Part 9
Gosh girl you have my head spinning now!! Kya hua aur kya nahin seems more like a mystery FF!! But superb!!!👏👏👏 Aww touching scene when she meets Suraj. Sigh so sweetly she tells him that she loves Shantanu!! Good and even more tender when she returns to him in the hospital!! Loved it!!
Continue soon. finally made it through the whole FF!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc one shona!!..
though a lil confused still!....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful girl!! I like the thriller element!!! 👏 Put more of them in !!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei,
its really u made us confuse with wat is real n wat is dream..oh god..such an writer u are..hope no one wud hav guessed things like this..oh god u made us worry a lot for her test results which was her dream...oh girl...ok now continue soon with shanak n fully shanak...tat is for making us worried in all the parts..
luv,
ramani..
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks everyone for the tremendous support!

sshriyaa84: Hopefully will have more positive scenes for you in the next one!

angel_9 glad you liked the update!


Shiksha glad you like the update.
loveshanak: Thanks for reading and glad you liked the updates, EEG is a test to check the brain waves, but there is no research or test that I am aware of that determines what we are thinking while one is sleeping or in a coma. When we dream some bits are confusing and some are things that actually happened to us. I guess I was inspired by Inception a bit there lol. I have to go finish watching that one actually.

k.krithika: thanks so much for reading the updates and really glad you liked them

jparker: Thanks for the in depth analysis and really glad you liked it!

Ammu_SunshYn: glad you liked it, What can I say cannot write just romance, I like to add some spice into the storyline every now and then. I have a few strange dreams in the past and I love dream sequences every now and then.

Simiv: Glad you liked the thrills.

RB81 aka Ramani: You want Shanak you will get your dose hopefully soon.







Edited by adventure_gurl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
uff sonali dear that was surprising but interesting too.......it was all dream?yar ye kia but any ways gud going till now so keep updating it............



luv zara
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Posted: 14 years ago


Ok here is the next update fresh off the press or should I say off of Miicrosoft Word lol😃

Part Ten

" The EEG is clear. Khanak can go home today itself if she feels well enough for it," the doctor said.

Shantanu looked at Khanak and they exchanged a look.

" Hum aaj hi ghar jayenge," Shantanu said as he reached for her hand.

" All right then, I will tell the nurse to have the discharge papers ready for Khanak to sign," the doctor stated.

After the doctor left, Khanak turned to Shantanu.

" Main itni dino ke liye behosh kyun thi," she inquired.

" You hit your head hard. You had a pretty bad concussion. Everything should be fine now. Are you sure you feel all right?," he inquired with concern.

She frowned as she ran her hand through her hair.

" Ek musbait toh hai," she muttered. ( There is one problem)

Shantanu got concerned.

" Woh kya hai?," he asked.

" How am I going to get this stuff out of her my hair?," she exclaimed.

Shantanu started to laugh.

" Don't laugh, my hair is all stuck together now!," Khanak quipped.

" I am sure Khushboo Bhabhi will know how to resolve that issue," he said assurlingly.

Khanak washed up as well as she could and got dressed in the magenta suit Shantanu had fetched from her cupboard at home. Everyone was glad to see her well again.

" Now Khanak please don't scare us all again like that. Tumare bina yeh ghar soona lagata hai," Sunil said to her with moist eyes.

Khanak hugged him and assured him she would be more careful from now on.

Akshay came to greet her and said," Khushboo has gotten you a salon appointment for tomorrow. I am sure you will need your rest," he joked.

Shantanu tried to stifle his laughs.

" Kya hua?," Khanak inquired.

Both brothers stopped laughing for a second to tell her that a day at the salon for Khushboo meant pretty much the entire day.

Khusbhoo arrived from the kitchen with some snacks and flashed them both a stern look. They stopped laughing and stood up straighter.

" Behave you two, otherwise I am sending these yummy snacks with Dharam," Khusbboo threatened.

She took Khanak aside and sat her in a chair in front of a mirror.

She took a closer look at Khanak's hair and grimaced.

" What have they done to your hair? You'll need some strong shampooing and conditioning to get rid of this glue!," Khushboo exclaimed in horror.

Madhvi was also aghast.

" Khusbhoo beta make sure Khanak has the best hair stylist tomorrow. This will not do," Madhvi stated.

Khanak looked up at Khushboo puzzled.

" Kal kahin jana hai kya?" ( Do we have to go someplace tomorrow?)

Khushboo was flustered. Why couldn't anyone in this family keep a secret?

" Nothing like that Khanak. Just that you are a Khandlewal. We all need to look according to our actual status right?"

Khanak smiled.

" Woh toh hai Bhabhi," Khanak stated.

The next day Khusbhoo said she was taking Khanak to L' Oreal for her hair appointment.

" It will be fantastic! We'll get our hair done and facials too!," Khusbhoo exclaimed.

Khanak was confused why were they going for facials and the whole works when she only needed her hair to be fixed.

" Enjoy it Khanak and you will look and feel great after it," Shantanu said.

" So I don't look beautiful now?," she inquired.

He shook his head.

" Tum hamesha sundar dekti ho. However getting freshened up every now and then is a good thing," he stated.

" All right I will go. Are you busy today in case I get done early?," she asked.

Shantanu bit his lower lip thinking what to say. He hoped Khushboo would keep Khanak out for most of the day. She needed to relax and feel better. She was planning to go back to college tomorrow.

" Nahin aaj main bauth busy hoon aur Dharam bhi Dad ke saath jaara hai. I am sure you will have a great time Khanak. Mujhe abhi late hora hai. I will call you later, love you bye!," he said as he hurried off.

( No today I am busy and Dharam is going with Dad today)

Khanak sighed. She grabbed a few things and went to go meet Khushboo Bhabhi downstairs.

The hairdresser had the same reaction as Khushboo and Madhvi. A team of experienced make up and hair stylists worked on Khanak and Khushboo.

Khushboo politely explained whatever Khanak was unaware of. Khanak could not help but laugh at wearing cucumbers on her eyes. The facial felt funny to her.

Meanwhile at the Khandlewal house, Dadi arrived.

" Maaji aap ka safar kaise tha?," Madhvi inquired. ( Mom how was your journey?)

" Woh toh aacha tha, lekin Khanak kahaan hai?"

" Khushboo ke saath parlor gayi hai. She will be so happy to see you!," Madhvi declared.

The girls finished at L' Oreal by six pm but Khushboo had to make a stop first.

She returned and handed her a package.

" What is this for Bhabhi?," she inquired.

" It's a ritual after most beauty parlor appointments, a girl needs a new outfit. I am sure you will like it. Just don't open it until we get home," Khushboo stated.

Khanak was puzzled but agreed.

When they reached home , the whole house seemed dark. Khanak walked ahead of Khushboo and put on the lights.

As soon as the lights went on, everyone screamed " Surprise!"

Khanak was stunned.

Dadi came forward and Khanak took blessings from her.

" Aap kab aayi Missed you so much Dadi!," Khanak exclaimed.

" God bless you Khanak. Kya tuhme pata hai yeh party kyun rak hi sub ne?," Dadi asked. ( Do you know why everyone has thrown this party?)

Khanak shook her head.

" Actually today marks the day Shantanu and you first entered this house after marriage one year ago. This also means it is your first anniversary," Sunil stated.

" Yeh bauth aacha surprise tha Ada, lekin Shantanu kahan hai?," Khanak inquired. ( This was a great surprise Dad, but where is Shantanu?)

" Khanak , Shanatanu will be here soon. Why don't you go get ready?," Akshay suggested.

" Theek hai Bhaiya main bus abhi aayi," Khanak said happily.


Edited by adventure_gurl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww such a cute n fun part loved it............. can wait fr d next part superb sweety love it

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