#2 - AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 28 - Page 130 - 31/01/18! A/N Pg 132! - Page 69

Oh my. The wait was worth it. So glad to see Asad and Zoya's changing dynamics..glad they are able to cheer each other and work together to find Dilshad's shooter. Love every bit of it. Their scene with Pari was beautifully written. I think Dilshad and Malik needs to consult ASAP refgrading elections. It is not going go down well. Raza and Gafur tried to kil, her due that only and now is after Asad. I wonder wht skeletons they have buried. Kudos to Azlan for finally standing up to Gafur. can't wait for next updates. Kudos to you.

Absolutely love this story...Asya's dynamic is on point...
Really looking forward to next update where Asad will hopefully find out about Sameer and Zoya cutting herself...

You write beautifully!

Awesome update
Loved it
Asya scenes was nice
Dilshad & Malik planned for Asad as a candidate in election.
Azlan scene with Anaya was good.
Liked the way he stood for her & show mirror to ghafoor
Azlan Asked Asad to help him & he agreed
Waiting for Anaya Asad performance.
Asya decided to find person who attacked dilshad.
Asya dance as zoya won the race
Zoya lost happiness as she saw someone & Asad noticed it.
Time for revelation & sameer to face Asad as this time, it's asad family member who is in problem & especially that member is zoya.
All the best for exams
Waiting for next update eagerly
Thanks for pm

Waiting for next part already😭

Where is everybody else? Unhe part pasand nahin aaya kya?

YAAR Next Part is going to be EPIC!!!!! One of my FAVOURITE parts yet!! Asad is just LOVE in the next one you will love him, laugh with him AND cry with him! Letting you know in advance I plan to end it RIGHT where the Sameer Fiasco is taking off i.e Asad is finding out about Sameer and Zoya's cutting problem in part 28 but god I am just SO excited about this part!!!!!!

true we are excited aswell as you.

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Gosh, I'm so sorry for a late comment but Christmas and work has me in knots right now

The update was amazing. What else can I say. I'm in looove with your characters and how you portray them. An asyalisious update, and what an update. I love how they are progressing as characters and how they are getting closer day by day.
I'm so glad asad told zoya about pari. The little girl really deserves a family. My secret wish has always been that asad would take her home one day.
Loved the update.
I stil can't stand the haveli ppl, want them to suffer for all their ill words and thought.
Can't wait for the Sameer revelation. That will be some intense drama..!!!
Thank u for the pm and the amazing update.
Will b waiting for the next

Excited for next part
Update soon please