New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given - Page 22

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

When r u updating? Jas

as soon as I finish replying dear😊

Originally posted by: jas91

tabhi toh bola dusre jagah ghum aa 😆😆

Originally posted by: jas91

Oh phir toh kafi bhaga dudi hogi ghar pe shopping ho gayi?

Originally posted by: shonajain

ohhh myyy godd
it was damn cuteee
khan family...sssooo adorable

I totallyyy every bit of it
zoeee ko love at first sight ho gyaaa woowww

she was jealous

n asad najma humera nikhat
awsumeee all of them


update soon

lots of love
shona

Hehe thanx for d sweet comnt dear😃

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Hi Jas sweetheart
I am so sorry, I diseapered for so long that I miss all of you but here I am now.
so coming to the update, I really love how you describe Asad's personnality and how you describe all the persons around him. He is a gem and wonderful human, I feel he is a mix between Ayaan and Asad😃. I really like this bond and it was so heart touching to see that he lost his father however God blessed him with a wonderful family. And this part was really well painted for sure 👏.

Its Ok Rada main bhi toh late ho jati hun life takes front seat sometimes. I m glad u liked Asad characterization u rightly said he's a gem.😎

So coming to our beloved Zoya, she was happy to see him but all vanished when she saw him talking to another girl 😆. Even if I will not agree with Zeenat to say that she is already in love with him but we can see that she is strongly attracted to this stranger, like you know ++++++ (and many more 😆).

Well Zeenat thinking Zoe is in love is becuz she knows her inside out she's a sister cum BFF cum like a mother 2 her so making d judgment. She saw Zoya never reacted after seeing some1 like this even after being a modern 21st century girl plus a celebrity. & its like fashion 2 have BF GF these days u know as soon as u grow a little. I hope I could clear a little bit confusion.😳😆

you didn't forget to mention Nazma and her diet, it was so fun to read that part, I can understand her and I am with her, why diet exist ? Why can't we just eat what we want ? Anyway, I am loosing the train of my tought.

Nahi you r right mostly girls easily fret over there wait & I too hate diet I can never do & never had done in my life. I m happy d way I m or look😎

You know I am proud of you, you didn't play a sadistic with Zoya and you reveal quickly that Nazma is his sister, poor zoya, she didn't eat because of frustration 😆. I want the same because when I am frustrated I need chocolate.
I know when I complain 2 other writers about sad twist how can let sad phase stay in my story 4 long so quickly finished it soon😉

Jas, the story was really going well and the way you painted every bond was wonderful. I hope you will make them meet soon or you will enjoy the pleasure to play hide and seek with them. It can be fun too 😉.
Thanks for the pm and hope to read the rest soon.

They will meet in nxt part till now it was easy to write but nxt part was d toughest 4 me 2 write cuz I was cluless. Hope every1 like that 2😳😳

PS: I talk a lot about food, it's just because I am fasting while I am writting this comment, I need sugar I guess 😆

Eid coming in 2 days u can have all the sweet in d world widout d care of diet is I can say...😆😆

PS2 : happy birthday again 🥳
PS3 : the banner is wonderful, I love it 😃

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Han wo to hai..mera abhi ka kam hogya..ab mai fruits cut krnge after an hour or so to tb tk planning to update LIITA

Nah meko shopping nahe pasand...ami h lati hai sab kch but ma Gaye the ek bar last week sandals lene

Originally posted by: nikii11

teek hain jaati hoon😎 but meri nazar rahegi

iss thread pay

tuj pey🤓

Originally posted by: binuuu

wonderful chapter...
loved the bond between asad's family members...
perfect...
zoya again met her stranger...
she misunderstood najma as asad's girl friend 😆
misunderstandings cleared...
zoya is like a daughter to anzi.. very nice..
zoya is going to take initial steps.. interesting..
continue soon..

Thanx 4 d lovely comnt😃

Originally posted by: Persiko

And I am really sorry I wasn't here for your bday...

i hope you'll forgive me

its ok Affu koi baat nahi Love u muwah🤗

Originally posted by: jas91

Aloo tu hamesha bolti hai na aaj koi nahi yahan so u can take 1st place keep stalking😉😆

Ladki hoke don't like shoping main toh all time ready bas garmi na ho😆