#2 Asya ff unique love part 18-23 *thread links in the index* @ pg 1

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Hey Sue...a very well written & emotional part...

How much AsYa missed each other...& all the fun & everyone was happy...

but all get ruined with this twist...

How can you stop there...now please continue soonish...

Thanks for pm 😊

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Hi Sue

this time I m not late😆

so haldi ki rasm is going

ASya didn't liked getting painted yellow & were restless 2 see d other

Sibling teasing was nice scene

I m confused knife is tarah tha wahan & no1 noticed its unbelievable😲😕 4 me its error cuz itna bda chaku jo kisi ke seene ke paar ho jaye aasani si dikh skta hai👎🏼

& funny part is CCTV lgane aur tight security ke baad bhi haadsa ho gya😲

phir Zoe ki shoulder pe lga I agree blood lose ki wajah se she must have fainted but raat tak hosh na aana is weird 😲😕

Sue yeh kuch zayada hi creative liberty le li tune😆😆

kher every1 was tensed & prayed 4 Zoe

Eric was just like a baby even Asad realized Zoe means a lot 2 him

& finally truth is about 2 come out

I m confused if I want updt soonish or not cuz I want 2 know d raaz but scared cuz of my guess😕

besides Happy ending hogi who toh I know Sue but physical torture 2 Asya is unbearable 2 read but as u said ab change nahi kar sakte. Agla part main shayad na pad paun😭

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

very emotional update😭

how everything was going well.

but everything happens for a reason

now asad will find out about zoya's past

eagerly waiting

do try to update ASAP

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

ressy

unressy

omg

😲

awesome piece of writing

it was lik I am watching tv show or a film..

I was glued to it till the end

both wer craving for each other

sab teasing nd all fun

thuddd a twist in the tale

someone had placed knife in the center table 😲

nd zoya shoulder was sliced..the aim was her heart...bapre ithni katarnak saziish...😲

and haldi turned red due to her blood

this was bloody update filled wth mystrys...

asad got a shock...

admitted her...

eric was shattered cant liv wthout zoe

asad eric bonding nice

nd eric gonna say abt zoe past

aage kya hoga reveal fasttt jaldi karooo😡

orelse i'll plan to murder u wth invisible knife hehehe🤣😈😈

Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago

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Niki.

@Niki.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

continue fast orelse

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Preetii0005

@Preetii0005

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

superb update
loved it
asad part was awesome
thanks4pm
cont...

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Wonderful update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Cliffy update.

I hate cliffy updates.

But update was awesome.

I just loved it.

Waiting for zoya's past to unfold.

Plz continue soon

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

love it.. plz contine soon...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

thanku so much mayur 😃
u know when i was writing i was thinking ki kya likhti thi me tab aur ab me kitna fark he 😆
Nd i thought aur koi na sahi mayur iss update pe photo ke saath zaroor kuch likhega 😆
nd u wrote exactly wat i wanted to hear 4rm u 😃
U boost up my confidence nd i respect that nd i love u as a reader yar! 🤗
thanks again nd haww! Me nd cruel? Nooo *puppy face out bt inside a devilish grin*
thand rakho tussi 😆
jald hi i love u bhi ho jayega bt again words are mere words! Hehehe...unique hoga na kuch iss story me
wait up! Nd keep track!
Keep supporting!
Keep loving <3

I didn't know i can do telepathy also...but i don't know it stucked me with that..about the difference in your writing style..and it has only been...growing for good can say better update by update.
And I know I have to wait again...still thank you for writing stories the way you write.. i guess... 😆

Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago