SaHil AU SS- The Meeting - Chp 1-11! Completed!

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Nice update

I didn't understand why sanam was so offended by ahil's comment
I reread it thinking I missed something but nope don't get why they split ways

Anyways glad sanam came back to him
Ouh let's see where it leads...exciting :)

Every time the pool is mentioned I want them both to spontaneously decide to go swimming
Hmmm

Liked the update
Thanks

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sahil333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Beautiful update.

Love these two so much. They are challenging each other without knowing that they hurt each other silently. After that "little time out" I'm glad that they've confessed to each other that it is not easy for either of them to open up to one another. At least they are on speaking term now.

Loved it. Waiting for next chapter.

Thx for the pm.

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Very nice story! Intriguing! I enjoyed reading it.

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Hey. That was brilliant. But, I am utterly confused... What are the two talking about? Sometimes, I get confused as to who is saying the words... And that muddles the whole thing... Can you explain to me, what they were talking about in the end and why they had a mini break up or whatever initially? And, she is in her house... Where did HER bedroom come from?

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ANNA

@ANNA90ALEX

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

It was wonderful dear !! Thanks for the PM

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Wow just read all 4 parts! This is amazing!!! I love the intrigue factor u have in ur writing! Its almost like we cant tell what will happen next... There is a certain aura in the story! I loved it! Plz do update soon! I cant wait to read the next part! Love SaHil in this story... Very unique!

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hey guys!

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely comments. <3

I've just edited the last part, as I could easily tell there was a bit of confusion. I hope it makes sense now. 😳

My point of the chapter was, that Sanam wasn't ready to open up to Aahil, as he knew she was hiding her true self from him. He, on the other hand, was ready to share almost everything with her. - So that's why they had a sort of argument. ..

Well, I hope it made sense, if not, then do let me know and I'll try to do something with it. 😳

Edited by mahwash22 - 11 years ago

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Hey, stumbled upon this now and it is an amazing read..
Please pm me when you update again..

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Cool. Now its clear. Btw, when Seher called up as the security person it was not the dinner with Aaahil right? It was with someone else...

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: najma123
Cool. Now its clear. Btw, when Seher called up as the security person it was not the dinner with Aaahil right? It was with someone else...

Hi darling! Thank you for the lovely review. And no, it was not the date with Aahil. It was before she met him, where Sanam had been on a date with someone else. 😊

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