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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


I DO???


Well I'm sure I do...coz a reader and source of neutral inspection I am I READ like plenty of stuff here haha..


But...

I have no idea that there's such an occurrence...which story!! Tell me! (or is it like hush hush? PM me!)

I mean the only exceptional stuff around here is by suds and I follow her every post every comment and readers' comments too * they are mostly mine so it's not that difficult keeping tabs ;)*


TELL ME!


I NEED to read exceptional stuff.



🤣


You are totally on another tangent!


I don't think its appropriate, to list authors or their fiction, amongst this matter of discussion. Will share that info via PM, though these nothing "hush hush" about it. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: p_s05



❤️ 🤗


I hope my virtual love is accepted!



Absolutely it is always 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: p_s05



🤣


You are totally on another tangent!


I don't think its appropriate, to list authors or their fiction, amongst this matter of discussion. Will share that info via PM, though these nothing "hush hush" about it. 😆


Now I get why you said off tangent.

Okay so...


Clearly this is not about eroticas or explicit scenes or sex.

I understood wrong the post!


Ooops Choco mom (to follow miss P here hee)!



But still.


I stand by my first comment.

Keyword?

VIRTUAL.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
The main essence of the story lies in its plot

Not the romance or sex !!!

It's sad you writers have to face such readers
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Dearest Berry,
I adore you. You know that. I have high regards for what ever you say and I love to hear your opinion. Be it your comments on my stories, your constant motivation and encouragement and your loyalty towards your friends.
While I understand what you say. I read a few comments on this thread that I don't agree with and here is my response to their cluttered drains, I mean brains.
Apologies in advance Berry, if our views don't match...
So here it goes...
While I get that there will always be reader who will prompt their comments saying " Don't separate the leads. Or I can't read this twist because it's heart breaking." We as writers need to be aware that it is the same 9 year old or 13-14 year old who post such comments. Hence deal with it accordingly as we are grown ups.( Hopefully).
Now I don't agree readers demand sex. Confession yes, But Sex! Really! You need stop feeding me the bull people, gimme evidence if you state something like this.
I wrote a FF with Forty chapters of drama for one year before I got any sex to my readers.
I still got their love, undivided and unbarred. As much as we want comments and likes, we should be open to feed backs and demands too, it is what tells us we are loved. It is what makes this an open forum. You can't take criticism then you need to close shop. OPEN FORUM! Get it?
Finally coming to me... I write sex, I write erotica, I write it bloody well. I am proud of it. I don't shy or hide, that is who I am. It is not every bodies cake to write sex or art of love making as the more prudes like to call it, So deal with it.
Don't go tell --- I don't write sex because I like to play " Moral Police"
If you create a shitty Zoya or Sanam who takes shit from Asad or Aahil. What are you promoting then to the younger generations. Creating a weak heroine who is bonkers in love is a bigger sinister crime in my opinion... So Puhhhleease! Quit saying it is highly inappropriate to write this and that. What is inappropriate is "YOU" crying like a wuss and throwing a tantrum.
Another cockamamie---- Sticking to character sketch because it is supposed to be a Fan Fic. Yawn Yawn*** now I am bored.
I love to write various shades and emotions of human nature. No story of mine is the same. I call it progression. My imagination spreads wings and legs. I don't contaminate in a muddy clogged drain. I like flight and height.
Yes I have ranted. And yes this is a response to people who say sex sells.
Criticism makes us better, My readers polish my skills to refined. And I am thankful to each one of them good bad and ugly.
Berry, I love you because you are just so so straight and you must know by now this comment was not for you..
Love
Juliet!
Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
NOTE:

Ok, I think most of the readers have misunderstood what I said in the post. Let me clarify a few points.

1) I didnt say dont give negative feedback. I said dont start complaining as soon as a twist is introduced

2) If a reader can enjoy 10 chapters of romance, they should let the writer develop the story too, and for that twists are required.

3) THIS IS NOT ABOUT MY STORY OR WHAT I FACE. IT IS WHAT I HAVE READ ON OTHER THREADS AND THOUGHT NEEDED TO BE ADDRESSED.

4) People want to read stories, but what is a story without twists. Why do writers get complaints for introducing twists? No one was complaining for the first 10 when there was only romance.

5) Give the writer some time to smothe things out after a twist is introduced.

6) I too love reading romance but what is a love story without any drama. You need to have some ups and downs in the story for it to feel complete and then enjoy the romance.

7) MOST IMPORTANT. I AM NOT TALKING ABOUT STORIES WITH MATURE CONTENT OR SAYING THAT THEY ARE NOT GOOD. JULIET AND TAMARA KNOW I LOVE THEIR STORIES.
MY POST WAS TO HIGHLITE THE PREVIOUS 6 POINTS.



Please people stop making my post a place to vent anger against a certain type of story, mature or not I dont care.

If still the reader is unhappy with this post and felt targetted, then theres nothing I can say more to make my stance clear.


Edited by ChocoBerry - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Tamara27



Haha Azraa! Like you keep asking to continue ended stories?! 😆

Yes... Tamara, you the only one that understands me... *sigh*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dearest Berry,</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I adore you. You know that. I have high regards for what ever you say and I love to hear your opinion. Be it your comments on my stories, your constant motivation and encouragement and your loyalty towards your friends.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></em></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">While I understand what you say. I read a few comments on this thread that I don't agree with and here is my response to their cluttered drains, I mean brains.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Apologies in advance Berry, if our views don't match...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So here it goes...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">While I get that there will always be reader who will prompt their comments saying " Don't separate the leads. Or I can't read this twist because it's heart breaking. We as writers need to be aware that it is the same 9 year old or 13-14 year old who post such comments. Hence deal with it accordingly as we are grown ups.( Hopefully).</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Now I don't agree readers demand sex. Confession yes, But Sex! Really!You needstop feeding me the bull people, gimme evidence if you state something like this. </font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I wrote a FF withForty chapters of drama for one year before I got any sex to my readers.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I stillgot their love, undivided and unbarred. As much as we want comments and likes, we should be open to feed backs and demands too, it is what tells us we are loved. It is what makes this an open forum. You can't take criticism then you need to close shop. OPEN FORUM! Get it?</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Finally coming to me... I write sex, I write erotica, I write it bloody well. I am proud of it. I don't shy or hide, that is who I am. It is not every bodies cake to write sex or art of love making as the more prudes like to call it, So deal with it. </font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Don't go tell --- I don't write sex because I like to play " Moral Police" </font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">If you create a shitty Zoya or Sanam who takes shit from Asad or Aahil. What are you promoting then to the younger generations. Creating a weak heroine who is bonkers in loveis a bigger sinister crime in my opinion... So Puhhhleease! Quit saying it is highly inappropriate to write this and that. What is inappropriate is "YOU" crying like a wuss and throwing a tantrum.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Anothercockamamie----Sticking to character sketch because it is supposed to be a Fan Fic. Yawn Yawn*** now I am bored.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I love to write various shades and emotions of human nature. No story of mine is the same. I call it progression. My imagination spreads wings and legs. I don't contaminate in a muddy clogged drain. I like flight and height.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Yes I have ranted. And yes this is a response to people who say sex sells. </font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Criticism makes us better, My readers polish my skills to refined. And I am thankful to each one of them good bad and ugly.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Berry, I love you because you are just so so straight and you must know by now this comment was not for you..</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><em>Love </font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Juliet!</font>




Hi Juliet my butterfly...I miss butterflies 😳

Yawn yawn I am bored had me laughing 😆

Come up with another asya ff soonish 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hi Choco..
I really dunno whether u know me or not..
But i felt this post as targeted post...
I thought to ignore this post.
Bcoz i wont post any -ve comments or any demands - y coz i know everyone's story is a fanfic story n a writer have their own views n ideas..
I understand ur view. But i wont agree ur points completely.. Bcoz i felt somewhere u targeted a reader who asked for erotic content blah blah..
U know choco when readers give suggestion? they give only when they consider a writer as a friend.. Well here u are saying not to give suggestion not even in a friendly manner..
as a reader i would like to tell something...
ie,. a matured writer should accept the criticism. up's n downs are common here.
I know how writers put their effort n how it will hurt when 1 give -ve comment.
If anyone's negative comment hurts then it should be better if they neglect it.. That's called maturity.
Many writers accept criticism. Coz they took it sportively and it will surely increase the readers.
Even many writers ask the readers to give suggestion.. Y coz It'll improve the reader n writer rapport..
I know other than romance there is lot of emotions messages are needed in stories..
But there is lots of difference between mature content n normal romance..
If any1 ask the writer to give mature content than y can't the writer calmly explain them the actual fact n need.
without explain it - if they plan to quit then completely its their fault.
See i always give positive comments..
But If i found any update is not okay then as a reader should not i have the rights to suggest something..
Accepting or nor accepting is next...
Also demanding n giving suggestion is different..
Its all depends upon the word we use, thats it..

Y can't the writers tell them frankly their opinion... Follwing nor follwing is upto them..
Ps: even im not okay with erotic part.. But romance i love it yaar..
Ps: If anyone ask u to write mature content plz tell them straightly ur view.
See many writers are here who love to write mature content even many readers are here who love to read mature content...
Its all depend on their own view...
Ps: my post is not mean to hurt anyone..
If its hurt then im sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: pinky06




Hi Juliet my butterfly...I miss butterflies 😳

Yawn yawn I am bored had me laughing 😆

Come up with another asya ff soonish 😊

Hugs Cuddles, Kissies. Haha!
This thread is become my fav bonding thread.😆
Miss you too.

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