Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey,
Thank you for the double updates Sis. They were amazing.
It really is a trick of destiny to not bring them face to face for so long & not even hear about their circumstances, otherwise they could at least relate or tally information.
I'm really glad that Zack told Asad the truth of his relationship with Zoya. Now he wont feel guilty about taking her away, once he realizes or remembers her. Zack I truly a great friend. He has been with Asad through thick n thin & has kept his possession safe from all the dangers, unknowingly hi sahi but he has.
Oh boy, common Asad thora theek se dekho na, you'll remember her. She always looked up to you with her beautiful eyes shining with love & warmth. I just hope he soon pinpoints & matches the voice & eyes in his flashes from the past to those of Angel's. Please Asad, you've got to, she's carrying the name you gave her.
Sis, you've done a fantabulous job at describing how Zoya felt in both the scenes in having come near him, under one roof. That connection which bound them earlier is still present, what she felt without sight & remembered as him, now she's seeing his face so its hard for her.
I loved both the scenes, not her pain, that is making my stomach knot uneasily. I could visualize how she clutched on to her stomach as the pain hit her, how she looked around frantically for him through the crowds at both places. My heart broke as she stopped midsentence at blurting his name, she shook herself saying he couldn't be here but her heart wouldn't give in. It was her heart who at the first place notified her of his presence even when they were just acquaintances & now that they are soul mates, I don't think it'll be that easy to ignore the vibes its sending out to all her body.
Finally the moment where they get to see each other. It was spectacular. The way she ran through the crowds searching crazily for him, running in all directions her heart was guiding, then colliding into him & inhaling the scent that she associated with him, amazing!
The connection, the pull is felt by both of them. Oh poor babies keep gazing at each other. It truly is their first meet, where none recognizes the other except for the tug at their hearts.
Sis, please ab jaldi se in he mila do. They've been through so much already. I hope their meets at work bring them closer & end this misery for them. Bring Ruby or Jai or anyone who can tell Zoe that he's her Asad.
Update super sooon.
Sis, my comments aren't enough to do justice to what beautiful story you've conceived. The emotions, feelings, love, pain, restlessness, everything described brilliantly but still I'll let you know that:
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