SS - Just One Glimpse #2: Chapter 21 & 22 Pg 110 - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

First of all please stop making my BP high ! 😆 seriously Aapi, while reading these 2 chapters my heartbeat was erratic !! 😆
Double update ! ❤️
So both chosed the same title ! 'Just one glimpse !' 😳
So Zoya at least saw his pic and DID fekt something ❤️
Awww Zoya's sensation on sensing Asad was absoluteky fantastic ! 👏 and finally they came face to face though they had seen each other's faces before ! 😃
Awww they cant take their eyes off each other !! Well Zoya didnt heard his voice yet, right ? So she must recognize him na ? 😕 😆 so now a request to Mr. Leo Ahmed Khan, please kuch toh BOLO (in Zoya's presence please 😆 )
Lovedthe updates Aapi ! ❤️

HIGHLIGHT : Zack doesnt love Zoya ! 🥳 😆

Love u Aapi !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️


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Bano be normal hogaya hai na lol

Thank u so much sweetheart am so glad u liked it

Let's see what happens when she does hear his voice 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey,

Thank you for the double updates Sis. They were amazing.
It really is a trick of destiny to not bring them face to face for so long & not even hear about their circumstances, otherwise they could at least relate or tally information.
I'm really glad that Zack told Asad the truth of his relationship with Zoya. Now he wont feel guilty about taking her away, once he realizes or remembers her. Zack I truly a great friend. He has been with Asad through thick n thin & has kept his possession safe from all the dangers, unknowingly hi sahi but he has.
Oh boy, common Asad thora theek se dekho na, you'll remember her. She always looked up to you with her beautiful eyes shining with love & warmth. I just hope he soon pinpoints & matches the voice & eyes in his flashes from the past to those of Angel's. Please Asad, you've got to, she's carrying the name you gave her.
Sis, you've done a fantabulous job at describing how Zoya felt in both the scenes in having come near him, under one roof. That connection which bound them earlier is still present, what she felt without sight & remembered as him, now she's seeing his face so its hard for her.
I loved both the scenes, not her pain, that is making my stomach knot uneasily. I could visualize how she clutched on to her stomach as the pain hit her, how she looked around frantically for him through the crowds at both places. My heart broke as she stopped midsentence at blurting his name, she shook herself saying he couldn't be here but her heart wouldn't give in. It was her heart who at the first place notified her of his presence even when they were just acquaintances & now that they are soul mates, I don't think it'll be that easy to ignore the vibes its sending out to all her body.
Finally the moment where they get to see each other. It was spectacular. The way she ran through the crowds searching crazily for him, running in all directions her heart was guiding, then colliding into him & inhaling the scent that she associated with him, amazing!
The connection, the pull is felt by both of them. Oh poor babies keep gazing at each other. It truly is their first meet, where none recognizes the other except for the tug at their hearts.
Sis, please ab jaldi se in he mila do. They've been through so much already. I hope their meets at work bring them closer & end this misery for them. Bring Ruby or Jai or anyone who can tell Zoe that he's her Asad.
Update super sooon.
Sis, my comments aren't enough to do justice to what beautiful story you've conceived. The emotions, feelings, love, pain, restlessness, everything described brilliantly but still I'll let you know that:


OMG

Thank you do so much Nim, for your amazingly beautiful words. You don't know how hoy I am, seriously am dancing and grinning like a fool

Love you so much Sis

You are adorable

Big hug a sloppy kisses coming your way 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurchan7


Salaam Saima di...well first of all thanx alot for the P.M and a double update...i know it is very stressful for u to manage all things...and still to update...and coming to the update well Asad Zoya finally met...sighh.. it was a well written scene.the potrayal of zoya's emotions are awestruck ;.zack told asad that he loves angel as a friend they are mutually getting married... ...and Zoya still trying to figure out about Dilshaad's voice...and about Asad's presence...it was like a MAHAEPISODE kind of update...good...continue soon


Thank you so much, am so happy you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fanraya

Very heart warming update.. So beautiful...


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

I love both the update

They think like, select the same name for the album
Her heart can never fail her..she again feel. Him, this time he is also feeling some. Connection towards her
Loved their first meet, but still awaiting at least any of them to recognized other...
Can't wait for that...right now I fuel why only Mona is with asad why not his driver...he has seen n known zoya
Pls pls pls update soon...


Thank u so much sweetheart, am glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: potternerd

Wow

First of all thanks for 2 super awesome updates

Loved em both

Finally finally finally they meet

It felt amazing

I could picture the entire scene

Very beautifully written

They both thought of the same name for the album 😳

Both kept staring at each other...it must have been an emotional roller coaster ride !!!

Gosh I can't wait for next update

I'm glad Zack hasn't fallen in love with zoya...didn't wanna see his heart break...I like him :)


Thank u so much, it's such a relief to know you are all liking their first meet

Will update soon
Lots of love to u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awsum update..!! Beautifully written..!! :)


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Feeling of Love no matter what happens you still feel those currents and a sense of ur love being around and thats wht happened here ... They can still feel eachother ❤️


Thank u so much Niya 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + Intresting Updates...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Amazing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃


Thank u so much 😊

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