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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wonderful update
Both selected same name for her album
Zoya felt his presence again & ran out to find out. She collided with asad & both looking each other for seeking answers. She always believed her heart but this time it's difficult for her.
Sorry for late reply as I was too much stressed but now by the grace of Almighty, everything is ok
Read next parts soon
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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First of all please stop making my BP high ! 😆 seriously Aapi, while reading these 2 chapters my heartbeat was erratic !! 😆
Double update ! ❤️
So both chosed the same title ! 'Just one glimpse !' 😳
So Zoya at least saw his pic and DID fekt something ❤️
Awww Zoya's sensation on sensing Asad was absoluteky fantastic ! 👏 and finally they came face to face though they had seen each other's faces before ! 😃
Awww they cant take their eyes off each other !! Well Zoya didnt heard his voice yet, right ? So she must recognize him na ? 😕 😆 so now a request to Mr. Leo Ahmed Khan, please kuch toh BOLO (in Zoya's presence please 😆 )
Lovedthe updates Aapi ! ❤️

HIGHLIGHT : Zack doesnt love Zoya ! 🥳 😆

Love u Aapi !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey Sis,

Firstly I'll begin with a BIG apology. I'm honestly Sorry Sis, for not following the story for so long. Please don't be upset, next time se I'll try n be regular.

Now I'll post comments as I go on.

Chap 12:

Well, what should I say? This chapter was so you. Simple, realistic, emotional & lovable. Such a sweet confession from Asad. Aww..

Zoe has really taught him how to express his feelings in words now.

Zoya's concern for his safety & well being was heart warming. Like always, the way she ran to the entrance on sensing his presence left me dazed. How does she do this?

Oh my heart went out to her as she said these lines:

'in all my life I have never felt sorry for not being able to see Asad, I have never let my blindness take over my will to live and be normal. But today...for the first time I feel this pull right here' Zoya placed her hand just below her heart 'for the first time Asad I have wished that I could see, so that I could see you. For the first time I wish I could see you for just one moment...Just One Glimpse'

I wish her eye sight returns soon so that she can see her love.

Chap 13:

Sis, gosh, you've taken my breath away with this one. Honestly, I had goose bumps all over as soon as I started reading the song. I think this was the story it was ever written for. Each & every word was as if made to describe her feelings. I am lost for words here. 👏

Ruby is right, dese two aren't just lovers but soul mates, send down to complete & compliment each other.

Asad is a darling, fulfills all his words. I am grinning crazily on having the doc confirm that Zoe would be able to see again. The wait seems long to me just like Asad but if Zoe is being so patient then so can we.

Oh there first kiss...

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Amandeep

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey Appi🤗

Tnx a ton 4 the double dose😳😆

It was beautiful❤️

Both choose the same name Just One Glimpse

Happy that zack love zoya as a friend only pheww *relief*😆

She was looking 4 his Asad 😳😳

Amazing update😃

Loved it!!

Can't wait 4 the next part😃

Tnx 4 pm

Love Aman❤️

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi Sis,

Chap 14:

Well it really was as perfect as it could be for both of them this day. They got t spend so much time together plus Asad brought her home & she got to speak to his Ammi as well.

You know I really appreciate & salute Zoe for the way she takes things in life, without a complain. Even a normal person does that when they are unable to accomplish something but like Allah has already alerted her senses to make way for her so that she can go on with ease. I just love her.

Oh my goodness, was Asad really joking with her? That's a first. N I loved it. These two are made for each other only. Ok I've been awing since the three chaps. I hope it stays this way, happy & loving, for them.. always.

Chap 15:

Asad really does think things through, a true businessman. His gesture of taking off for her was endearing. She's his world, he would do anything to make her smile. Zoya is an Angel, sent down for Asad.

I'm glad Asad will be there with her throughout. So hoping for all f it to go well, for both of them. It was really sweet of Zoe to ask him to promise to not get disheartened if the surgery didn't go successful. Her words touched my heart. I hope they stay together for eternity. But I don't know Sis, there's something making me feel uneasy over here. Please let all be okay.

Chap 16:

I knew something bad was coming but never this. My heart's sinking right now. I don't have words for this part, its not bad Sis, not at all, but I wont be able to explain. Maybe after a while.

Love..

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi Sis,

Sorry wont be giving individual replies to the remaining chaps because I couldn't stop at one, I read through all of them. You've made me cry so much 😭.

I don't know where to begin with, sort of speechless.

Sis, you know all of this is very sad & heart breaking but not for a single moment did it cross my mind that there was something wrong with the story or its characters. You've taken all of them forward so well post the calamity. I wont be able to talk about that day in particular. My eyes tear up everytime I visualize Asad buying the ring for her, at her first sight of him. Its just too touchy.

Do you think fate is cruel at times? I mean just look at the two, even with being so close they are miles apart. When he could see her, she didn't have the sight. N now that she does, he doesn't remember her. Its painful.

I'll begin with Zoe. She is someone who has been deprived of love & family all throughout. This time around she lost her soul too. Its killing. I don't know how for a second could anyone doubt her love for Asad or question her behavior? She has been through hell after that day. Seriously, anyone in her place would question, why did she get her sight back when she was to lose her world. 😭😭

Everyone has a way to cope with things & her way is to store everything inside her. She shut herself for as long as she could. Not to forget, she has always lived alone, she knows what loneliness is, what it feels to have people around you but not the one who's meant just for you. She hasn't spoken of Asad with anybody, not because she's forgotten him or got so involved with her new life & family. Its because she doesn't want to share this part of her; meant only n only for her, with anyone. She's holding onto his memories. Before I forget, Sis, does Zack know her name is Zoya?

I wouldn't question her decision to marry Zack either because anyone in her position would feel indebt to the people who helped her survive. The equation between both Zoe & Zack is clear, they are aware of the dynamics they share & what their wedded life would be like. They are doing this for their parents not more.

Asad.. Well where he first found it difficult to express himself in words has not literally no feelings at all. All the things once close to him, ones he considered his life have been taken away from him. The impact of the emotional & physical trauma he went through that day left him in a place where he identifies no one, including himself. His condition is no better than Zoya. She has lost him; her world. But he has lost himself along with his life. I don't know whose better of.

I can understand why he's become like this. With most of his memory gone & no idea of his past, he wants to control & rule his present & future. Where once he was a soft hearted person, helping everyone in need, now he has turned into a rude businessman.

It surely is a test for Dilshad too. Having lost her husband & now her only son is in this state. Allah would listen to a mother's dua, I know soon enough she'll have her Asad back.

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey,

Thank you for the double updates Sis. They were amazing.

It really is a trick of destiny to not bring them face to face for so long & not even hear about their circumstances, otherwise they could at least relate or tally information.

I'm really glad that Zack told Asad the truth of his relationship with Zoya. Now he wont feel guilty about taking her away, once he realizes or remembers her. Zack I truly a great friend. He has been with Asad through thick n thin & has kept his possession safe from all the dangers, unknowingly hi sahi but he has.

Oh boy, common Asad thora theek se dekho na, you'll remember her. She always looked up to you with her beautiful eyes shining with love & warmth. I just hope he soon pinpoints & matches the voice & eyes in his flashes from the past to those of Angel's. Please Asad, you've got to, she's carrying the name you gave her.

Sis, you've done a fantabulous job at describing how Zoya felt in both the scenes in having come near him, under one roof. That connection which bound them earlier is still present, what she felt without sight & remembered as him, now she's seeing his face so its hard for her.

I loved both the scenes, not her pain, that is making my stomach knot uneasily. I could visualize how she clutched on to her stomach as the pain hit her, how she looked around frantically for him through the crowds at both places. My heart broke as she stopped midsentence at blurting his name, she shook herself saying he couldn't be here but her heart wouldn't give in. It was her heart who at the first place notified her of his presence even when they were just acquaintances & now that they are soul mates, I don't think it'll be that easy to ignore the vibes its sending out to all her body.

Finally the moment where they get to see each other. It was spectacular. The way she ran through the crowds searching crazily for him, running in all directions her heart was guiding, then colliding into him & inhaling the scent that she associated with him, amazing!

The connection, the pull is felt by both of them. Oh poor babies keep gazing at each other. It truly is their first meet, where none recognizes the other except for the tug at their hearts.

Sis, please ab jaldi se in he mila do. They've been through so much already. I hope their meets at work bring them closer & end this misery for them. Bring Ruby or Jai or anyone who can tell Zoe that he's her Asad.

Update super sooon.

Sis, my comments aren't enough to do justice to what beautiful story you've conceived. The emotions, feelings, love, pain, restlessness, everything described brilliantly but still I'll let you know that:

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Salaam Saima di...well first of all thanx alot for the P.M and a double update...i know it is very stressful for u to manage all things...and still to update...and coming to the update well Asad Zoya finally met...sighh.. it was a well written scene.the potrayal of zoya's emotions are awestruck ;.zack told asad that he loves angel as a friend they are mutually getting married... ...and Zoya still trying to figure out about Dilshaad's voice...and about Asad's presence...it was like a MAHAEPISODE kind of update...good...continue soon