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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Now that Zoya knows what her statement means, cant wait for the evening :-)


Thanks for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I. Need!




:)



But Imma wait.



Coz I'm a good girl!



Yeah Just wait.

Not writing till I know he is worth it for sure.

right now I have a happy ending planned but I am so tempted to make it sad.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start
Well written emotions
Waiting for next part soon
Thanks for pm

😃 Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

I reread it

Loved the ending

Again😲

Thanks Love!
Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Azraa01

As much as I loved the entire part, the ending was the BEST..
Part 2 soon please


SO glad you liked it Dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks so much for calling it perfect,.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Preet.Kc


Omg i never laughed so much
the end was simply perfect, but i badly and madly want part 2 of it
superbly written
Amazing story
just post part two can't wait
Loved it to the core ❤️


Thanks so such a lovely comment.
Much Appreciated. You made me smile.


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Posted: 11 years ago
" Aahil! Get inside, it is about to rain. " He doesn't respond. Walking over to him I address again." The storm is about to hit, you will get drenched and fall sick." He looks up and his eyes
are blood shot, "Why do you care?" He asks back.

"I...I don't " I stammer turning to walk away but he grabs my wrist.

"And here I was hoping you would at least lie. Pretend to be a wife who cares." He humors himself.




I was looking for just this!!


This kinda happened last night. Well different. But when the scene played out I was reminded of this part. Except there when he asked who are you to stop me...her answer- main aapki biwi hoon.


I don't think she pretended to care, it's just she needn't have to. Still she did.


Hmmm.



That nice giddy feeling when someone shows that they care for you...? I felt just that. Because he wasn't angry there, it was just a question-who are you to care?


Anyway.



I'm in mode hate too. But won't hate truly until the real insult.



Okay! That's all!



Mwahhh!




p/s You doing homework! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

" Aahil! Get inside, it is about to rain. " He doesn't respond. Walking over to him I address again." The storm is about to hit, you will get drenched and fall sick." He looks up and his eyes
are blood shot, "Why do you care?" He asks back.

"I...I don't " I stammer turning to walk away but he grabs my wrist.

"And here I was hoping you would at least lie. Pretend to be a wife who cares." He humors himself.




I was looking for just this!!


This kinda happened last night. Well different. But when the scene played out I was reminded of this part. Except there when he asked who are you to stop me...her answer- main aapki biwi hoon.


I don't think she pretended to care, it's just she needn't have to. Still she did.


Hmmm.



That nice giddy feeling when someone shows that they care for you...? I felt just that. Because he wasn't angry there, it was just a question-who are you to care?


Anyway.



I'm in mode hate too. But won't hate truly until the real insult.



Okay! That's all!



Mwahhh!




p/s You doing homework! :)



OMG! OMG!

Gul Khan Stole my PLOT!🤣

But Then after this scene He quits drinking for Sanam.

And it;s the same on the show as well.
Come ON Gul, Just hire me alright. I will even work on discount rates and Aahil I swear will be not the Cliched Doughe of Harlequin Tales.😆😛

Yes homework time Faru!

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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣

I bang my head to the wall while my ears turn red.

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