Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14* - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!!!
Who is helping aryan!???
Could it b Anwar???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eshita, it was a good gripping story. read the entire 6 chapter in one shot.
Asad - all dark
Zoya, the same good sweet innocent girl
Well, I could neither imagine KSG nor RV as the Asad in your story. Only SRK in Anjaam came to my mind.😆
Its quite an intense story, thanking the moths and butterflies for the light moments.
Initially, I thought Zoya and Ayaan are in love. But alas, they are not.
Maybe for the first time, I don't want zoya to fall for asad. I would prefer Zoyaan in your story.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Eshita, it was a good gripping story. read the entire 6 chapter in one shot.

Asad - all dark
Zoya, the same good sweet innocent girl
Well, I could neither imagine KSG nor RV as the Asad in your story. Only SRK in Anjaam came to my mind.😆
Its quite an intense story, thanking the moths and butterflies for the light moments.
Initially, I thought Zoya and Ayaan are in love. But alas, they are not.
Maybe for the first time, I don't want zoya to fall for asad. I would prefer Zoyaan in your story.



Hey m glad u liked it 😊 N lol SRk..!! 😆 Well.. I don't mind, He's my first love!
Asad is dark..!! But I have planned some thing different here! I wish I could make it Zoyaan but m so deeply in love with Asya that my mind wont get a plot only.! Anyways, I have a complete story in mind and i'll try justifying all your questions regarding 'why zoya fell for asad' 😊

I hope you'll stay tune 😊
Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing storyline
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey thanks for d PM.. already reading ur story and
I love it 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you every one! 😊 M really very very touched!
Here's the next part! I hope its long, 😆

Regarding my T.S , my laptop crashed yesterday. 😡

I thought of writing it again but didn't feel like. So ended up writing this part. I loved writing it! I hope you'll like it too.!

I would really appreciate patience guys. The plot is only 'dark'. I dont want to write a normal love story.






KUCH DOORIYA..NAZDEEKIYA PART 2


The butterflies and the moths at once ceased the war, hearing the strange voice. DANGER?' The elder moth twisted his black thin moustache. Guys, be alert!' all the butterflies shouted in unison and all the moths prepared themselves for a new fight. Massal ke rakh denge sabko' Said Pui, the moth leader.
Zoya, however unknown of this inner tumult , held her breath uptight as she felt an intruder of opposite sex so close to her. Her eyes tightly shut and fingers piercing her fist. His breath on her neck was of no help either. She opened her eyes and hoped to see asad. Why?, she didn't know. But her luck! Alas, it was no asad. ok zoya relax, what if he's not Akdu! He's equally hot. Isnt he?' Said madam butterfly! But the moths were not very pleased with such closeness. Excuse me mr. One arm distance please!' Pui and chui demanded.

"you are really pretty."


Whispered the man. However, the proximity was now becoming an awkward situation for zoya to deal with. She slightly pushed the man and tried to excuse herself. The man held her wrist and pulled her towards him.

"Excuseme?" Zoya questioned.

"I said, will you dance with me.?" He asked again.


Was he nuts! Didn't he get it already?' crispy, the younger fly said in astonishment.

"No thanks."

Zoya again tried to free herself but the pull grew harder.

"leave my hand" She said, gritting her teeth and annoyance now.

"What if I don't!"

The man said. A wicked grin spreading all over his face. Ok. He IS H.O.T' the teeny hormones once again kicked in. focus zoya. He's your boss's..no..that jackass's guest.'


"well, in that case , Don't blame me for the consequences!"

she retorted, confidently.
M so proud of you zoya. The elder moth couldn't control the tear that trickled down his eye.


"Impressive! Then, if I say I know your brother and the reasons why you are here." The man said as his corner lips twisted in an evil grin. But his statement made zoya gasp!


"Who are you?"


She asked. What on earth was happening!


"Don't bother yourself with that sweety. M here to help you. Keep yourself moving and smile to avoid suspicions. Your hell of a boss would bury me alive if he gets to know why m here! And yes, Don't be afraid. I wont hurt you. M not asad."


Zoya didn't know what was happening and had no clue what to do. She let herself move in the way this stranger guided , Unknown to the fact that two brown eyes were hurling fire.



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Asad Ahmed Khan was not happy. Not happy At all. The sight caused sudden rush of anger filled blood flow through his every nerve. His jaw clenched tightly as he seethed in rage. Asad didn't care why. He didn't care why he felt this abrupt and hasty rage, seeing zoya with a guy, dancing all happy and merry and. S.O C.L.O.S.E. He didn't care what was there in this girl which had always attracted him to a level from where didn't how to come back. He didn't care that she was way too young. He didn't care that she was mere a 18yr old teenage girl who, he had brought for his own purpose.
At the moment, all he cared about was zoya was too close with a man and he wanted miss farooqui, away from that man. And Khan had always got what he wanted. Without waiting for sec. more. Asad took swift steps towards her and pulled zoya from her elbow so harshly that she lost her balance and bumped hard on his chest. Zoya wriggled under his grip till his deep and stern voice was heard.

"Stand still."


He glared. Akdu is back! Akdu is back!' there was chaos all over! Butterflies flew in every direction holding there head in panic and moths, well..they were already hiding! No one messed with asad!
Zoya was having a hard time, holding herself together as immediacy with Asad did weirdest of things to her. She tried to calm herself down and gathered all her wits to glare him back. As much as she couldn't deny the fact that asad was a perfect specimen and defined perfectness, she didn't forget how much of a tyrant he was with her.

"What were you doing with him."


Asad asked and his grip hardened on her hands, making her wince in pain. Zoya bit her lips and waited for the pain to sooth in. She was not the kind of girl to take all torture, but she didn't know why she always went weak everytime she looked in his eyes. His eyes always betrayed his actions. He was hurting her. Physically. But his eyes showed a complete different emotion. But what exactly, she couldn't pin point. Ignoring her erratic heartbeats and irregular breathing, She snapped back.
"I A.M N.O.T. Answerable to you"


She remembered each and every word written in the letter clearly and her temper rose. She jerked his hands and stood there, staring him with disgust. The Dj lights dimmed a bit more making the environment even more quixotic as the system played the hit romantic songs.


Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..


Asad saw the anger and disgust in her eyes. He loosened the grip and pulled her closer. He didn't know why but he wanted her close. Closer than ever. His anger subsided as he took in her scent. She smelled So good' A feeling of calmness surrounded him for the first time in ages. All the evilness, anger , all the harsh realities of the life took a back seat for that moment as he closed his eyes trying to sooth himself. As if, covering all his wounds with her.


Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..


Zoya at first was surprised with the not so harsh pull but her feet didn't let her move an inch as she saw the change of expression on his face and She for some reasons, relaxed herself under his hold..Before he withdrew, the fullness of his lips pressed to the spot just below her ear. Her eyes fluttered closed and she gripped his neck tighter. She released a gasp as he very slightly bit her ear lob and whispered huskily


"Dance with me zoya."


Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye,
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye,
Nazrein hi samjhe yeh guftagu saari,
Koi arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad...


His dark gaze fell down to her heaving chest. Zoya's fingers dropped from where she held his nape. She was in a daze. She dint know what was going around. This weird feel of sensation was something she had never experienced and her mind was blocked. Her thinking abilities went on hold and her body moved with the flow. The urge to touch his cheek with palm was growing. But she restrained, still fearful of the towering male. Her hands rose up to shove him away a little as they were too close, in the midst of a business party but he caught hold of her wrists. Asad ever so softly tuck her strand of hair behind her ear and moved an inch forward, leaving a negligible gap between their lips. Air was squeezed from her as she anticipated the obvious.


"Stop. Please!" She weakly pleaded.


Kehna hi kya, mera dhakal naa koi,
Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,
Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,
Bukhaar hai, kyu beqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Pyaar hai shayad..



It felt as if the time had stopped. The heart talked with heart, The eyes talked with eyes. Asad and zoya, stood there looking deep into each other. Searching for the answers to their unspoken questions.


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Posted: 11 years ago
oooh a jealous Asad, thats always a treat to read
nice update, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow full of romance ans suspense ...joust love your story eshita...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow so beautifull.. Loved it.. Thnks for the pm.. Continue soon..

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