The Nib & The Ink ~ AsYa SS *Part3 Up 22Dec/Pg24 [ON HOLD]

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Beessst part!! ❤️

For a fraction of a second their eyes met, and something went wrong, maybe the loud speaker's blared an off-beat theme, or the mist had suddenly started to fall, cause it didn't seem a normal meet, when as his voice echoed his name in her ears and her voice seemed nothing but a sweet melody of the chills to his.

"Hi . . . I am Asad Ahmed Khan!'

" Zoya, Zoya Farooqi!'

In a reflex they extended their hands for a shake and all the missing pieces of puzzle called as life seemed to fall in their correct place.

A completely magical moment 👏

Lovely update. 👍🏼

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Maybe I was awake till now for ur update only though I dont knw that u r updating today!😆
Nice update...I liked the way they told their sibblings "Ese phizool ki baate hum se na hi kiya karo tho behtar hai!"
Loved their first meet and intro...The attraction they felt from the very first moment they saw each other is magical!❤️
Waiting for next part!Update when u feel like writing...😃

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Aww lobe at fusht sight!

Yaar ankie, aap ne asad miyaan ko bada achcha veyheekal diya hain! Unko bahut pasand aayega! 😆

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

awesum update wid sum magical moments ...luvd it ...

perfect description of asad ...wowww

accept my luv n cookies ...

sorry baby main wait karte karte fone haath me pakad ke hi so gayi ...

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Ankie.. That was a very cute update... Something totally different... Thanks !! I just love reading whatever u write ... And this is brilliant ... Yes please update next part soon ... 😊

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Awesome ankie

I love da whole update..bt bst one is

"Hi . . . I am Asad Ahmed Khan!'

" Zoya, Zoya Farooqi!'

In a reflex they extended their hands for a shake and all the missing pieces of puzzle called as life seemed to fall in their correct place.

Da way asad zoya attached each othr in their frst meeting..its fabulous. ..

N LATER ASAD description on harley ws very nice..

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

awesome update Ankie...
loved it
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm...

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subhkisonu

@subhkisonu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Hey Ankie I am a new reader. And I must say that this TS is very much interesting. I have read your previous TS "Tabeez" and I loved it. Please update it soon. The story seems different from the other TSs and OSs. Please please update soon...

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

beautiful story so far and I'm sure it'll only get better from here 😃 I really love the whole situation and how it's different from going on in the show. please continue soon!