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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

you made me cry😭😭😭 a beautiful piece of writing😭😭😭

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This was so sad...Very well written!!

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I noe I shudnt hv read it cuz stories like these do make emotional... bt I juz cant help readin it...!! bt yes its a sad bt a beautiful nd touchin story...!! very well written.. nd especially d way u hv potrayed asad's inner turmoil in d beginning its juz ethereal...!!

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

love it..

one of the best...👏

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
i cried! Grt job

I'm sorry I made u cry! But i'm glad u liked it!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

tis is so heart touching...

i was in tears...

thx fr the pm...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

God, Why? Please never punish anyone with such a fate. He did a very big mistake but a life time without his love this is a very harsh punishment. And, to see a serene angel like her dying that would be the last thing I'll want, Never ever..

But, this was beautifully written. One thing is for sure I'll never forget this story ever. You remember the things which either made you laugh like crazy or made you cry like hell for a life time. And, this made me cry.

Just amazing and beautiful

Dee

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Hey this was sad but beautiful!😊

The way you have depicted the tension between Asad and Zoya when she tells him about her disease is commendable...According to me it's very difficult to write something sad but you've done a fab job here!❤️
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Thank u! I'm glad u liked it! Thank u so much!😃