AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37]

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Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

OMG! What an update! 👏

I was reading on and on like my life depended on it 😆 MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! 😲

Please update soon 😃

Beautifully written by the way, as usual 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Oh God, I couldn't believe this, I went through the last part again thinking, I had missed on a part but nopes.

Yaar was this originally your plot or u've changed it now? well it was really sad & trust me I was crying reading it. you've mentioned Asad's emotions & condition through the past 11 months so brilliantly.

I'm really looking forward to the next part to see what was written in the note further & for Asad to get his best gift, his Zoya back on his b'day.

take your time sweety, I know life can be seriously unnerving at times. hope you get the courage to face everything. May Allah bless you.

Love.

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: awesome
Awsome update...
Looking forward for nxt part

Thank you for your appreciation 😳

xxx

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
OMG! What an update! 👏
I was reading on and on like my life depended on it 😆 MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! 😲

Please update soon 😃

Beautifully written by the way, as usual 🤗

Awww that is so sweet of you ❤️

Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation and I will be updating soon. 😳

🤗

xxx

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Oh God, I couldn't believe this, I went through the last part again thinking, I had missed on a part but nopes.
Yaar was this originally your plot or u've changed it now? well it was really sad & trust me I was crying reading it. you've mentioned Asad's emotions & condition through the past 11 months so brilliantly.

I'm really looking forward to the next part to see what was written in the note further & for Asad to get his best gift, his Zoya back on his b'day.

take your time sweety, I know life can be seriously unnerving at times. hope you get the courage to face everything. May Allah bless you.

Love.

Well I initially was going to write a simple sugar sweet birthday ss.

I commenced writing the original chapter 4 a few weeks ago but one fine day all the angst that I had build up and stewing for the past month took it's final blow so I decided to let all that angst out via my writing.

The original plot still remains but I decided to replace the original chapter 4 with what I wrote on that day and put into the context of Asad and Zoya, only because I wanted to add a little more depth and a few dark layers to the story.

So the original plot still remains intact but will be unraveled in upcoming chapters from both of their (AsYa) respective point of views. I hope that makes sense without giving too much away.

Thank you for kind words, and May Allah bless you for your kind words which are for me the best act of charity and kindness.

🤗

Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Hey All 😳,

Hope you are all having a great week.

Just a quick note: I have edited chapter 1 and added a few extra elements because I simply felt it needed improving, and might I also add it is still a work in progress as I have yet to add a more appropriate intro paragraph for that chapter ... apologies for that - so if you want to have a re-read of chapter 1, you're more than welcome to do so or you can wait till I next update.

Chapter 5 will be up by the end of next week, so please be patient.

Keep smiling,

Fatima aka Ambreen

xxx

Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago