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Hello beautiful people! Thanks for your likes and comments. Here's the next update. Enjoy!
Chapter 2
It's night at New York. Zoya and Reehan return home together hand in hand, laughing at a joke cracked by Reehan. Reehan runs his hand through her hair and she pulls his cheeks laughing.
Reehan : Ouch!
Zeenat enters and shakes her head.

Zoya and Reehan together : Hey appi! Jeeju not home yet?
Zeenat : He will be here in 10 minutes! You two get fresh.
Zoya : Appi a very funny thing happened at office today! S got a..
Zeenat : Zoya first get fresh! We can talk later, okay?
Zoya pouts and says okayyy
Reehan smirks at her. Zoya stomps her foot and goes into her room after smacking him on his back. Reehan leaves for his room.
After a while, both come out of their rooms and sit down chaating with Zeenat. In a short while Anwar joins them. The four of them have their dinner together, laughing all the while.
It is late at night. Reehan comes to the terrace to find Zoya sitting there in tears. He rushes to her worried and kneels beside her.
Reehan : Zoe. ..what happened?
Zoya quickly wipes her tears and fumbles : nothing! Kuch bhi toh nahin!
Reehan cups her face and makes her look at him .
Reehan : Zoe. ..you know you can't lie to me! What's the matter?
Zoya stares at him for some time and then suddenly hugs him tight!
Reehan pats her hair affectionately.
Zoya ( through sobs ) : Rey! I miss Ammi! I want to know about my past! As long as I don't I can't rest! Please!
Reehan finds tears welling up in his eyes seeing her plight. He hugs her tighter.
Reehan : okay baby, we'll find a solution soon! Now please don't break down! You know I can't see you like this. Let's si..
Zoya : No Rey, I want to go ASAP!
Reehan: okay okay you will go! Calm down now! I promise you will go, okay?

Zoya finally calms down but still she remains in his embrace. This is how their Jeeju finds them. He gets worried.
Anwar: what happened?
Reehan and Zoya look at each other and finally Reehan nods at her.
Reehan : Jeeju, let's let her go to India! Because if we don't allow her to do this, it will destroy her self- confidence.
Anwar : I understand but...
Zoya : please Jeeju don't deny. I need to find out the truth. Please!
Reehan: and she won't be alone. I will be with her.
Zoya : what? Are you mad? You are not coming.
Reehan : I can't allow you to go there all alone. It's a totally new place Zoe, you can...
Zoya : So what? Don't be so possessive! I am not a kid Rey! I can take care of myself!
Reehan added sarcastically: of course, we all know you can take care of yourself!
Anwar: stop it both of you! Zoya,Reehan will go with you!
Zoya : Jeeju, you too? No way! I am not letting him leave all his work and come with me.

After a lot of arguents, they settle on Zoya going alone, but on the condition that she will stay at a relative's place in Bhopal. Next they plan to tell Zeenat that Zoya has to go to India for a very important project, because they know she won't allow otherwise. After about one hour, all their plans are done.
Anwar calls his relative in Bhopal and requests on Zoya's behalf, to which the lady readily agrees. Zoya thanks her Jeeju and Reehan and they hug her with a kiss on forehead.
Next morning Reehan tells Zeenat about how Zoya has to leave for India in a week for an urgent project. After some protest, Zeenat gives in. Anwar tells that Zoya should stay at his relative's place and Zoya nods in agreement immediately, thus relieving Zeenat. Zoya feels a little guilty for lying to her appi. Reehan squeezes her hand and gives a understanding look to her, making her calm down.
Around the same time, a plane lands in the New York airport and a man in jeans and white T with top two buttons undone walks out with an air bag. Two people dressed in formals rush to greet him. They shake hands and get into a Mercedes Benz after a while. The car rushes past the city and stops before an exotic hotel facing the ocean. They get out of the car and the man checks into the hotel by the name of Asad Ahmed Khan.

Evening time

After taking a nap, Asad feels suffocated and decides to take a walk on the the beach. He roams around the beach aimlessly. Suddenly he stops dead in his tracks as he spots someone. He sees a girl in a yellow full-sleeved top and black 3/4th leaning against a support and staring at the waves. Her hair is untied and is blowing gently with the wind. She looks like an angel who has descended onto earth directly from heaven. Asad is enchanted by her beautiful yet innocent face.What bothers him more is the tears rolling down her eyes. He has a sudden urge to go to her, wipe away all her tears, cradle her in his arms and console her. Suddenly he realises what he is thinking and looks away immediately. But after a few seconds, he looks back at her and sees her wiping her tears with her tender fingers. As she turns her face in his direction, he looks away immediately flustered, hoping that she didn't catch him staring at her. A few minutes pass and he again looks back in her direction and what he sees shocks him out of his wits.

Is this girl for real, like seriously? Few minutes back, she was crying like a despondent woman, and now she is laughing around like no tomorrow!

Asad feels a tug in his heart on seeing her hugging a smartly dressed man. That person's back is towards him, so he can't see his face but Asad has no doubt that he is handsome. And then Asad sees the girl pull the man's cheek and run away and the man follows her. Asad watches as the man ultimately catches up with the girl and lifts her in his arms and twirls around laughing. Their laughs echo around and the girl shouts: REYYY!!! PUT ME DOWN!
It is quite clear to Asad that both are love birds and strangely he feels angry and walks away to his hotel.

Night

Asad wakes up in his bed all flustered on having the strangest dream he can ever think of. It's the same girl he saw at the beach. She was dressed in a red bridal wear and smiling at him. Asad rubs his forehead.

Asad : What's wrong with me? Why am I dreaming of her? And waise bhi I hate such girls, jo ki aise kapde pahankar ghoomti rahti hain, woh bhi ladkon ke saath aise!tch! I'll not waste my time thinking of people like her.

After this internal conflict, he goes back to sleep.

Around the same time, Zoya wakes up from a dream and holds her head.
Zoya : Allah miyaan, what's wrong with me? Why am I dreaming of a stranger?

Her mind goes back to the evening when she was at the beach, sad that she was going away her family and friends, and had spotted a handsome man. Though she couldn't see his face, she felt a strange pull towards him. But before she could have pondered further, Reehan had joined her and she got busy with him. When she had finally remembered the guy and looked in that direction, he was nowhere to be found.
Zoya had wondered : Is this man for real, like seriously?

Flashback ends and now Zoya is totally baffled about why she got a dream of him. She ponders over it for some time and then goes back to sleep.
Okay, done! How is it guys? Okay okay type at least? Do leave your comments.
Precap
Asad at Zoya's house

Edited by FaultInMyStars - 11 years ago

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Is it so bad friends???? No comments???
Should I continue?

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Hello everyone! Belated Happy friendship day to you all! Herb's the next part. Enjoy!
Chapter 3
It is a sweet warm morning in New York. Asad shifts in his bed as the first rays of sunlight make way onto his face through the large glass window opening towards the vast beach. He makes way upto the window and stands there gazing at the vast unending ocean. Just as the ocean is unending, the pain in his life is also unending. While thinking of this, he can't help recalling the dream and then remembers how the girl was enjoying the guy's company.
Asad (sighs): Sapne kabhi poore nahin hote.
Then he realises what he is thinking and shakes his head to get such thoughts out of his mind. He decides to get ready as he has a meeting. While going away from the window, he can't help stare back at the beach once more, hoping to catch a glance of that mysterious girl once again!

As Asad comes out of his bathroom, he gets a call from his mom who asks him to go meet a distant relative staying at New York. After some hesitation, Asad promises to go meet them after his meeting, ie, if he gets enough time.
There Zoya wakes up lazily as her alarm rings for the tenth time. But her laziness vanishes as her gaze lands on the poster of Salman Khan, and she recalls her dream. Zoya is totally baffled and confused and shakes her head in order to get that mysterious man out of her mind.
After getting fresh, she leaves with Reehan for arranging a party that is to take place in the evening, involving all the famous businessmen of New York. In the afternoon, Asad gets his deal finalised in the meeting and heads towards the address of his distant relative his mother told about in the morning.
Asad at Anwar's doorstep:
Asad rings the bell and waits. After a while, a lady in her late 30s opens the door and looks at him questioningly. Asad clears his throat.
Asad : Salam waleikum! Main Asad Ahmed Khan, Dilshad Ahmed Khan ka beta! Ammi ne kah...
The lady: Oh Asad! Aao.. kal hi baat hui thi Dilshad appi se! Chalo, come in!
She ushers Asad inside and makes him sit in the living room.
Asad: Aaa..Zeenat mumani, Anwar mamu nahin hain?
Zeenat : Nahin woh office chale gaye! Achha tum batao, tum kaise ho, aur tumhari meeting kaise gayi?
Asad: Meeting went well! And I am fine!
Zeenat : okay! Yeh lo, coffee! Tumhari black and bitter waali!
Asad (sips coffee): aapko yaad hai?
Zeenat : of course! 20 years back, bachpan main bi toh tun aisi hi coffee peete the and some childhood habits seldom go!
Zeenat chuckles and Asad smiles.
They talk of random things for nearly one hour. Strangely Asad likes her company.
Asad : Mumani, Ammi bol rahi thi ki aapki sister Bhop..
Zeenat : Haan! Zoya Bhopal jaa rahi hai, kuch dino ke liye! Aabhi bachi hai, pahli baar India jaa rahi hai, and she won't let anyone come with her too! Mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai! Isliye main chahti hoon ki woh tumhare ghar par rahe, kyun ki mujhe Dilshad aapi parr khud se bi jyada bharosa hai! Bus kuch din ki baat hai!
Asad ponders over this for a moment.
There Zoya is feeling guilty of lying to Zeenat and decides to give her a call.
Just as Asad opens his mouth to say something, the landline rings.
Zeenat, who is working in the kitchen, instructs Asad to put on the loudspeaker. As he does so, a sweet,soothing, charming, cute and jovial voice runs across the room: Hey Appi!
Zeenat : Zoya! kya baat hai princess?
Zoya's voice gets more childish: I miss you Appi!
Zeenat : Aww.. why is my princess missing her Appi? Is everything okay?
Zoya : ya everything is okay! Appi, I just wanted to say that I love you sooo muchhh!
Zeenat(beams): your appi loves you a lot too baby!
Zoya : I know! My appi is the best!!!
Asad feels a smile creep upon his face on listening the convo and thinks: kitni pyaari bachhi hai! I am sure Ammi will be glad to have her at home. Najma ko bhi bachhe bahut pasand hain.
He is brought back to earth on listening the last part of the convo.
Zoya : okay Appi! Gotta go! But make sure to make my favourite dish for me today!
Zeenat : okay my darling!
Zoya : okayy! Khuda hafeez!
Zeenat cuts the call saying khuda hafeez and turns to Asad smiling.
Zeenat : Dekha Asad kitni bholi hai! Use main akele nah...
Asad : Don't worry Appi! She can stay at our house. Main aapke sister ka responsibility loonga. I promise I will keep her safe. Aap befikr rahiye!
Zeenat (tears in eyes): bahut bahut shukriya Asad! Tumne meri ek bahut badi tension khatam kar di!
Zeenat and Asad smile at each other.
Asad : Waise woh akeli is tarah Bhopal kyun jaa rahi hai?
Zeenat : Woh actually, uske o...
Just then Asad's cell rings. He excuses himself and attends the call.
Asad cuts the call and turns to Zeenat.
Asad: Mumani, aab main chalta hoon!
Zeenat : aise kaise chale jaoge? lunch toh karn..
Asad : No mumani! I have some work! Phir kabhi! Please!
Zeenat : okay then.
Asad bids goodbye to her and leaves in 5 minutes.
There Zoya's work is over and she is happy too after talking to her Appi. She goes on to help Reehan complete his work.
Evening:
It is a charming evening. There is a beautifully decorated park with lights of different colours and shape hanging around. Few people, dressed in suits, are moving around with drinks in their hands, chatting. A car arrives and a man dressed in 3-piece Armani suit gets out of it, looking handsome as
ever. Some of the already present men rush to greet him. He is ushered into the group quite graciously.
As he moves out of sight, another car arrives and a man with chocolate-boy image gets out of it and goes on to open the side door. A lady dressed in a white simple saree steps out of the car quite graciously. She is looking angelic and hot. All heads turn in their direction and they wave at everyone beaming. Everyone beams back. The duo link arms and walk into the party together. In no time, they are lost in chatting with everyone, happiness clearly written all over their face.
After a while, the lady excuses herself and goes over to get a soft drink. But before she can reach the bar, she feels herself colliding with a wall and instinctively closes her eyes anticipating a fall and her hands circle round hoping to grab something.
A while back, Asad excused himself from a drink and was leaving the bar area absentmindedly, when he felt like colliding with a soft feather type thing. Asad quickly grabbed onto it. A sweet fragrance filled his nostrils and he closed his eyes inhaling the scent, getting lost in the moment.
After a while, he opens his eyes slowly when he feels himself hold onto something soft that sends shivers down his spine. His eyes move down and his eyes widen on seeing his hand resting on a woman's bare waist. He slowly looks up and gets the biggest shock of his life on seeing her face. It is the same girl he saw the other day. He feels himself getting lost in her angelic face again. He has the sudden urge to tuck back the hair falling on her face. Unknowingly, he tightens the hold on her. Asad smiles on seeing her shivering under his touch. All the while, his eyes never leave her face.
Zoya's pov
Zoya feels strange that she is not feeling any pain. She wonders if she has already reached heaven. But how can it be so superfast? In a while, she feels someone's piercing gaze upon her. She grabs onto whatever she has clutched tightly. Then she feels her getting squeezed. Strangely, instead of fear or in comfort she feels quite happy and satisfied, full of happiness. She opens her eyes slowly.

Okay, that's it! How is it guys? Please please please comment! It inspires me!

Edited by FaultInMyStars - 11 years ago