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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

😭 that was so sad! I think my eyes are forming tears after reading this, it was so emotional and it was great!!

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Yo, not cool. I'm crying. Thank God I'm under my blanket lol! That. Was. Absolutely. Beautiful. Of course Zoya would be selfless and not want Asad to get attached to her. She couldn't see him suffer so she suffered alone. Asad's reaction to the idea of her dying any day, killed me. And I'm not even in love! Hehee. You showed such depth in their relationship so simply. You my friend never fail to amaze me. I just can't with you! Amazing surprises all the time! Haye, the ending is what just took my heart. The tears began when Asad found out about the truth but I bawled- kinda happier tears- when Asad was embracing death for her. Alright now I need to wipe my face haha. Beautiful job. Just beautiful.

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Jalebi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This one killed me... Literally.😭

Why? Every time I read a work of yours...

There's a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes...

You drive me crazy with your works girl! You really do.

You are one of the most refined writers I have ever read till date.

My heart went out to zoya. The way you described her was... oh my!!!

That street light thing reminded me of O'Henry's Last Leaf, though there's a bit of a change in here.😊

And the way she was pleading to Asad for the light to stay on... Masha Allah!

It was not just a Street Light to her... It was her ray of hope, her light of life...

Gosh... This is one of your best works, hun...

And and and... How could I forget the confession Part??

"U shouldnt love me Asad..."

Ya Allah!!! My heart skip a beat at that. You do know how to play with words, Don't you?

I am so glad I am your friend!! This is... uh... I wanna write more Jalebi...

But I cant find words.

And the ultimatum was so so so good.

This is the only thing I want to say after reading this master-piece...

Love just Happens. unknown to you. And this was magical...

Love...

Yashi

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very sad story... 😭 😭 i just dont like anyone killing Asya... 😭 😭 how could you?

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

You made me cry faiza! it was beautiful! loved it! any amount of words will be less for this os!

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

a very very beautiful os!

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Oh my God! Fuji you are amazing!!!😲 I don't have enough words to describe you. It was wonderful👏🤗 Keep writing more and more... Waiting eagerly for all your works.❤️

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

👏only somone like u who is such agr8 writer culd write
something as big and as adorable as this
i felt crying after reading this bcuz i
can really connected to it😭 i knw how
it feel whwn some dear one is gona leave u
zillion applaud fr u👏👏
👏👏👏u are a writer who evoke feelings in reader mind
just luv ur wrk

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

I have tears in my eyes...just loved it...so beautifully written...thumbs up...

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Faiza Babes!

Only one thing.. And that one thing is that THAT WAS SO FREAKIN SAD AND YOU MADE ME CRY. Okay maybe a few more things. 😆 It was beautifully written and i just loved this OS. It was so sad how she had cancer and her pain. OMG! WHY DID YOU MAKE ME SAD? I am taking my revenge next time by teasing you. 😆 but honestly amazing amazing amazing!

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago