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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Great Work! I love it!

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

OH GAWD IT WAS 2 GUD

FRM THE START LUV

DILU AND ZOE😉😉

AND THE LAST PRT

WS 2 GUDDD IT WAS SO HOT

ZOE CANT CONTROL AWESOME😳

I WAS EXCEPTING SM MORE BUT FR FIRST TIME

I HATE NAJMA😡 RUINED IT

BUT TOTALLY HAWTTT😳😳😳

SUPER ONE

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#773

i loved it

its nice

cont soon

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

OH. MY. GOD.

Kya update diya hai aapne! MA!!!

I loved the way Asad was confused with Zoya's changed behaviour and he's starting to feel even closer to her now. And the confrontation and jealousy...waahhh!!! And the last romantic bit...❤️☺️ Hayyyeee!!!!

Continue soon again!!!

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Nai

@zoas91

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

i always love intimate scenes between asad and zoya.. and this was was as intimate as it can get but considering it even gave out the reservations of asad towards his feeling, of him being scared of hurting zoya...perfectly written! 👍🏼

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

wow...awesome update...

loved the confused asad and jealous zoya...

and it was so romantic...excellently written...👏

conti asap...

cant wait

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

creativity at its very best..

what an adorable update..

najma still a mystery. .

loved asya attraction towards each other..

zoya opening to dilshad..

thanxs

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#778

amazing update as usual.. loved it...

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#779

That was a quick one considering that i read previous update only this morning

ha what happened to poor tomatar?

Love the way asad always loses control

cont soon