Trust me for once (TS) updt Prt 2 in pg 12 pms l8r

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

very nice ... hope read the next part soon ... 👏

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

You, my dear, have a way with words. This was just so beautifully written.Your words describe each emotion, each action perfectly to a T.

And I'm SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!!! I'm sooo sad for both of them 😭 Zoya hurt emotionally, and Asad's guilt growing.. but he needs to show he trusts her and that she's not the misfit he had convinced himself she was. Just because he's afraid of his feelings did not give him the right to misunderstand her to the point of insult.

I'm glad he could see her fear first hand... so he gets a CLEAR view into exactly HOW BADLY she's afraid of fire and how it haunts her dreams.

Ok gonna stop with the analysis lol. LOVED IT! You are TRULY A GIFTED and TALENTED writer 😃

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

veryyy beautifully described!!

each n evry emotion ws described sooo nicellyy!!

loved it dea!!!

yeaaah !! veryyy good MR.KHAN!! FINALLLY HES ON A MISSION TO GET BACK ZOYA!!

GO 4 IT MR.KHAN!!! I WSH U OL D VRYYY BST!!

GT UR ZOYA BACK SOOON!!

AWWWSMM!!

plzzz continue asap!!

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canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Amazing - Loved it!! Please continue soon!!!

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_Nabeela_

@_Nabeela_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Amazing please continue it soon and pm me

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

That was really nice...nloved reading it 👍🏼

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asma

@Asyadeewani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Wow that was mind blowing u did a fantastic job this chapter was so emotional please continue soon and pm wen u do I wish this comes up in the show I'm dying to watch a scene similar to this