OS : Revelations (Last Part on Pg 9) - Page 7

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Yash, commendable job done. It was beautiful, and flawless. I loved the way the whole prose conspired, and emitted a soothing feeling, and not those ugly feelings.

You have a upper hand on words, and this one piece was magnificent, laden with emotions! I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for the PM and sorry for the delay! 😳

kash serial me bhi aisa hi ho jaye...

Your junglee billi edited her comment on page 10. Sorry for being late

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Reserved

Unreserved

Woah man!!!!

This was BEAUTIFUL and BREATHTAKING!!!

I love Najma

Ohhh God!! She was in his room😲😲😃

And his confession... His pain, his agony. Everything he went through all those 17 years! He let it out.

He was so vulnerable yet adorable. He's a child.

And then their cute moments together😳😳😳

A perfect family hug🤗

A PERFECT ending to a perfect OS

Flawless!!!

P.S. I'm extremely sorry for making you wait for so long. Didn't intend to reply such a beautiful work so late. I hope I'll be forgiven for the same😭

Come up with more such beautiful works. Your junglee billi would pounce on you otherwise😆

Yours,

Junglee Billli🤗

Aaawww. I loved loved loved it. It was amazing!!!!! Great job!!!

Beautiful os :-) over the family hug at the end

I guess perfect would be s small word

I loved this brilliant pies of master art .

Its superb I loved it