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Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Wow! I just read both the parts! Its amazing, fantastic👏

Please continue soon!


yeah i will

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Beautiful!:) waiting for the next one!:)
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Loved the update. It was amazing!!!!!
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You said you will update today *pouts*

Aapki update toh nahi dikh rahi *puppy dog face*

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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

You said you will update today *pouts*

Aapki update toh nahi dikh rahi *puppy dog face*

Jaldi update karo na😭*more puppy dog face*

P.S. I think you're busy with your boards preparations🤔 Will wait then but try to update soon🤔😭


the whole day i was writing it but my mind was blocked!

i've sorta completed it

only 2 paras are left!
ill update 2mrw! pakka wala promise!
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Part – 3

"Woh aaj discharge ho jayegi? Yeh toh bohot acchi baat hai. Ammi was very worried for her." Ayaan said excitedly to Dilshad.

"She is not going to that house again." He heard the stern voice of Asad.

"but bhaijaan…."

"Ayaan I'm not sending her to a place where no one can take care of her and where her own abbu is after her life."

"But bhaijaan, how can you be so sure that it's the work of mamu and mumaani? Not that I don't already know how dangerous can they be and I even know that mumaani is capable of hatching the most dangerous of conspiracies but what if this hunch is wrong?"

"Ayaan I don't have a hunch. I'm freaking sure it's them. And Zoya is staying with us and that's final. This conversation is over." His voice had the finality in it and even Ayaan didn't say anything further.

IN THE KHAN MANSION –

Asad helped Zoya to walk to her room. His one hand was on her waist and the other held her hand. Dilshad was in a dilemma… to be happy or to be sad for her son. She knew he loved Zoya, these past two days were a dead giveaway and even a blind could see it, but he was in shock right now, what will happen once he snaps out of it and he has to lose the only person he ever loved.

"Ya allah, yeh kaisi musibat main aapne mere bete ko phasa diya hai? Zindagi main pehli baar use pyaar hua aur aap use woh bhi chin na chahte hai. Woh toot jayega. itni mushkil se mujhe mera beta ASAD wapas mila tha aur agar uski zoya use door ho gayi toh woh phir se cold hearted Asad Ahmed Khan ban jayega." Dilshad cried and silently prayed to god.

Asad made Zoya's bed. Zoya looked around her room and saw that it was exactly the way she had left it. Asad helped her to settle down on her bed.

"Zoya…. Do you want something?" he asked while caressing her face.

"Mr khan… I want to tell you something."

"Haan Zoya bolo. Kya hua?"

"Please sit…. It's a long story." Asad sat on the chair near the bed.

"Mr Khan I want to press charges against……. Razia and siddhiqui. Woh mere abbu nahi hai, he is a monster. He can never be my father. He is so cruel, he killed my ammi and then even tried to kill me…" Zoya started crying relentlessly. All the tears which were threatening to spill earlier came back, all the pain she had kept hidden from everyone for so long came rushing back. Asad couldn't bear to see her cry. Her every sob hurt him, her tears constricted his heart. He got up from the chair and sat beside Zoya. He took her in his arms and stroked her back while she cried. Her patted her head and whispered sweet nothings in her ears.

After some time Zoya composed herself and told everything that happened before the fire. Asad was burning with rage, these people didn't deserve to be alive. How can someone be so cruel. His abbu had a reason to leave them and although it took him lot of time and more than that a great amount of courage to forgive his abbu but he eventually did, however siddhiqui did not deserve anyone's forgiveness least of all Zoya's, what he did to her and her ammi was totally unforgivable.

He married her ammi for money… f*****g money. He never understood how can people go to horrendous levels to get rich. He left his wife and daughter all alone, he killed his own wife… and he made Zoya an orphan, he made a little three-year-old child go through hell. If it wasn't for her appi, only god knows what would have happened to her. As if this wasn't enough he even tried to kill her. he tried to calm down and then asked Zoya to rest.

"Go to sleep Zoya, I'll help you to get justice." He stroked her palm once and left the room.

"Hello inspector, I want you to arrest Mr Siddhiqui and his wife Razia siddhiqui immediately…."

AYAAN'S RESIDENCE –

"Inspector how can you arrest us like this? What have we done?" siddhiqui asked.

"Why don't we talk in the police station because your crime list reads like a telephone directory. Aaram se lock up main baat karte hai."

"What non sense is this? We need to know why are we being taken away to the police station." Razia spoke.

"I'll refresh your memory." Everyone turned to see Asad standing on their doorstep.

"Murder…Arson and two cases of attempted murder. One on my ammi and the other on Zoya."

"Asad aap yeh kya kar rahe hai? Aap kyun hamari family ke peeche pade huye hai? Pehle aapne Rashid ko jail bhijwaya aur ab bhai aur bhabhi ko. Aapko mujhse problem hai toh aap meri family ko kyun pareshan kar rahe hai?" shireen cried.

"Dekhiye……" Asad tried to clear the misunderstanding but he was cut off by badi bi.

"Nahi nahi shireen. Yeh jo bol rahe hai woh sach hai. Maine tum logon ko pehle bolne ki bohot koshish ki par kisine meri baat nahi suni. Razia ne apna gunah khud qubool kiya tha par isse pehle ki main tum log ko kuch bolti usne mujhe stairs se gira diya." Badi bi told everything that Razia had done and said to her.

Siddhiqui's face had turned white and pale and Razia was sweating bullets.

"I didn't do anything, it was all his plan. He killed his ex-wife, he was the one who wanted to burn the gudiya factory, he sent the shooter to kill Dilshad and he tried to kill Zoya."

To say siddhiqui was shocked was a gross understatement. He couldn't believe his ears. Razia had piled on all her stupid plans on him. This woman is so disgusting.

"Razia…. Tum jhoot kyun bol rahi. Yeh sab tumhara plan tha. Tumne hi toh Zainab (in my story zoya's mother's name is zainab cuz I don't know what's her real name.) ko us raat gudiya facory main bulaya tha, you were the one who stabbed her and then you asked Rashid to burn the factory. Tumne hi toh woh shooter ko bheja tha aur yeh Zoya ki shaadi Ayaan se karane ka betuka idea bhi tumhara hi tha." Siddhiqui was baffled.

"Ya allah, yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Apni galti ka ilzam aap mujhpe kaise laga sakte hai?" Razia started crying her crocodile tears.

"Dekhiye aap dono apna jhagda hawalat main poora karna."

"Inspector you can take Zoya's statement tomorrow." Asad said.

"Leave me…… uff…. But I'm saying it's not my fault…. Leave my hand." Razia protested but all in vain. Asad watched as the police took them away.

Asad was about to get in his car when he was stopped by Ayaan.

"Bhaijaan…. Zoya kaisi hai?"

"She is fine… you can come to meet her tomorrow." Asad turned away, he didn't want Ayaan to see the sadness in his eyes.

"Bhaijaan, I have something of Zoya that I shouldn't have….. can you give it to her?" Ayaan asked.

"Yes…. What is it?" Asad turned to looked at his brother.

Ayaan took his hand and placed something on his hand and closed his hand into a fist. Asad slowly opened his fist and saw Ayaan's engagement ring on his hand.

"Ayaan, what is this? Why are you giving me this?" Asad widened his eyes at seeing the ring.

"Bhaijaan, it doesn't belong to me, Zoya doesn't belong to me. I know that you love her a lot and I'm sure even Zoya loves you and I am no one to come between you and your love." Ayaan placed his hand on Asad's shoulder.

"How can you be so sure that she'll love me back. Why will she love me back. I'm no one. I'm emotionally challenged as she calls me." Asad's voice had become soft as a whisper.

"A girl has to be a total idiot to not fall for you. Unless of course the girl is your sister." Ayaan giggled at his own lame joke but Asad was in no mood for humor.

"Bhaijaan, Zoya is not mine… she never was. She was always meant for you. Bhaijaan don't think that you are emotionally challenged, you are perfect for her and she is perfect for you. If zoya and I get married then our house would become a mad house, we would drive each other up the walls and all the members in our family would go crazy with our stupid antics…." Ayaan saw the disgust on Asad's face when he mentioned Zoya and his name together.

"By the way…….. hum devar aur bhabhi ke role main jyaada fit rahenge, don't you think? Zoya bhabhi has a nice ring to it." Ayaan said with a last attempt to make his bhaijaan smile. That did it, Asad flashed his dimples and said in a stern voice,

"Thik hai thik hai….. lekin yaad rakhna ab tune usse flirt karne ki koshish ki toh…………." He showed him his closed fist as a warning.

"Main pagal nahi hun….. mujhe Mr Mukka Ahmed Khan se milne ki koi aarzu nahi hai." Ayaan laughed.

"Bye….. I'll go home now."

"Oh ho bhaijaan missing bhabhi already?" Ayaan teased while Asad rolled his eyes.

Asad drove back to his house, all the while thinking of how would he say his feelings and how Zoya would react. What if she rejects him? His confidence was slowing going down.

oOo

Zoya felt someone touch her head, she woke up to find Asad with his breath-taking heart-warming million dollar smile. Woah, she would do anything to wake up to see that smile every day. He looked so young, not at all like the enigmatic mogul.

"Good morning Zoya." He said in a chirpy voice.

"Some one's in a good mood today." She replied.

"You can say that."

Gah, his dimples are to die for, I could eat him now. Zoya thought to herself.

"Breakfast in bed?" he placed a tray of in front of her.

Or I could have you for breakfast! Zoya what are you thinking? It's just the medicines, I'm not livid right now.

"Asad I want to tell you something." It was now or never for her.

"Is it bad?" he raised his eyebrow.

"Sorta… kinda."

"Fine let's hear it." He sat down on her bed.

Zoya took a deep breath and blurted out, "I can't marry Ayaan. I can't marry him because I don't love him. Geez, I can't even think about him and me together, it's gross. I love you Asad, I've always loved you and will always love you and how can I marry Ayaan when I'm in love with his brother that's just so ew, I only agreed to marry him because of that siddhiqui but now he is out of our lives. And I know you love me too, don't even try to deny it Mr Asad Ahmed Khan… I heard you talking to yourself when I was kinda comatose. I heard you say I love you Zoya. Asad will you marry me?" Zoya took a deep breath again as she had said this all in one breath.

Asad's eyes threatened to come out. Leave it to Zoya to make a mess of everything he planned. Fan-freaking-tastic.

"Are you out of your mind Zoya?" Zoya had not expected this. She had expected that Asad would fall on his knees or kiss her passionately or sweep her off her feet and declare his undying love for her… but no, her jahapanah will forever be emotionally challenged.

"How can you even say that?" Zoya had tears in her eyes, when he said that.

"Wh-what do you mean?" she asked in a shaky voice.

"Ok pretend it never happened." He came and stood near the bed.

"What never happened?" Zoya asked bemused.

"Let's pretend you never said that." He cupped her face.

"But it did happen. I did say it." Zoya was sad, Asad didn't want to marry her. She felt so stupid.

"I know but….. you stole my line…… how can you steal my line." He asked Zoya adorably. He looked like a child asking the person who stole his candy, why did he steal his candy.

"I don't understand."

"Zoya it's my job….. I was supposed to propose, I had stayed awake the entire night to plan this moment…. To make it perfect for you but you ruined it. Seriously Zoya you have no patience. You stole my line." He pouted.

"You had planned to propose?" she was ascetic.

"Um…. Yeah. Duh!" he rolled his eyes.

Zoya jumped and hugged him. Asad and kissed her forehead and then whispered into her ear.

"Meet me tonight after dinner at the terrace." He winked.

"You've got to be freaking kidding me. Tonight? I have to wait? You're going to make me wait? Why not now?" now it was her turn to pout.

Asad kissed the tip of her nose and said,

"Because I've already made the arrangements and it's non-refundable." That made Zoya giggle.

~ later in the afternoon ~

"Zoya, the inspector has come to take your statement." Najma said to Zoya. She closed her eyes and thought about her ammi, she silently prayed to allah to give her the strength and courage to stand up against her own abbu. She felt Asad's hand on her shoulder, she opened her eyes and looked into Asad's deep blue eyes and she found the courage she needed. She gave her statement with confidence, she had to give justice to her ammi. Asad made sure that they had a strong case against them.

"Asad tell me one thing, how did you know that they were behind all this." Dilshad asked him.

"Ammi, shaq toh mujhe tab ho gaya tha jab gudiya factory ka raaz samne aaya tha. Ammi aap hi boliye jo log itna sab plan kar sakte hai woh log kucch bhi kar sakte hai. Jab hum Ayaan ke ghar ke liye nikale the tab mere paas Zoya ke jeeju ka phone aaya tha, woh keh rahe the that he has some doubts regarding Zoya's abbu as siddhiqui and Razia had asked them not to come to Zoya's wedding."

"What? But jeeju told me that appi is not well and so she can't travel." Zoya was shocked.

"Yes... he didn't want you to get upset that's why he lied to you. When we were outide Ayaan's house and najma asked for Zoya, do you remember what Razia had said?" he asked.

"She is not inside, she had gone out."

"But najma never asked if Zoya was inside, she was simply looking for Zoya. Guilty conscious pricks the mind. When I went inside Zoya's room to get her, I found Razia's phone and I was convinced they had something to do with the fire in Ayaan's house. When the police had come to arrest them, they kept on blaming each other for everything that happened and in the process they ended up confessing their crimes."

Zoya jumped and hugged her Mr Bond khan and said,

"Mr Khan… Lady Sherlock to main hoon phir bhi aapne yeh case itni acchi tarah se solve kar liya?"

"Sangat ka asar hai Ms Farooqui."

~ AT THE TERRACE, later that night ~

Everything is perfect. I hope everything is perfect, everything has to be perfect. Ugh, stop freaking out. You are Asad Ahmed Khan, you don't get nervous. Atleast I don't have to worry about her response. He smirked.

"Ahem….. I hope you are thinking about me because if you thinking about someone else then I will kill her first then I will kill you."

"Zoya……" Asad looked at her and he was mesmerized. She looked absolutely stunning in a beautiful white full sleeved salwar kameez. She looked like an angel, sent down from heaven especially and exclusively for him.

"Asad it's absolutely stunning." She said as she took in the surrounding. The entire terrace was decorated with flowers of various kinds from roses to carnations to orchids to lilies. The terrace was filled with a beautiful fragrance. On the wall were photos of Zoya in different poses, pouting, laughing, frowning, blushing, winking, smiling. Her eyes became teary, she wondered when did her emotionally challenged jahapanah had become so emotionally active.

Asad took Zoya's hands in his and said,

"Zoya I'm sorry ever since you came in my life I've done nothing but hurt you, I tried very hard but I kept pushing you and hurting you in the process be it with my words or actions. Ever since I realized my feeling I tried staying away from you because I'm not right for you, I can never be the perfect husband. I kept pushing you away from me because I didn't want to hurt. I refused to accept these feeling, I was in denial, but not anymore Zoya. I love you and I'm not afraid of hurting you anymore, you are my everything Zoya and I can't live without you. I want to spend the rest of my life with you, I want to wake up every morning with you by my side, I don't even mind listening to your shayaris every day, I want to have cute dimpled babies with you. Will you marry me Zoya?" he knelt on one knee and removed a velvety box from his pocket. The box contained the most beautiful and exquisite ring in it.

Zoya couldn't stop the tears from flowing as she heard the heart melting speech. She nodded a YES and Asad slid the ring on her finger and took her for a hug and spun her around.

"I have another surprise for you." Asad whispered huskily in her ear. He moved behind Zoya and pulled her closer to him so that her back was pressed with his chest. He moved Zoya's hair to her right side and placed a kiss on her neck, he then removed something from his pocket. It was her earring, her 'ammi's akhri nishani'. Zoya saw the earring and looked at Asad. She thought she had lost her earrings but it was with him all the time. Asad helped Zoya wear the earring and kissed her ear, he did the same with the other ear.

"I don't know why but I could never return this earring to you, maybe because I wanted to keep this with me forever as a memory as a souvenir but now that I have you, I don't need, it should be where it belongs." He smiled

"Just like I am where I belong." Zoya whispered and hugged asad.

Zoya knew that their lives would be perfect together, full and complete. They had each other, a loving ammi and the cutest sister and two years later they had twins who refused to sleep through the night. Their life was a mess and Asad just had to deal with his OCD, it was chaos but it was their chaos, it was their life and they wouldn't have it any other way.

THE END

A/N - *sob* another happy ending. It's so difficult to end a story when you get so attached to it. 😭

Here's the last part. I hope you enjoy it. Please leave me loads of comments and don't forget to like it. 😃

Everyone including me wanted Asad to put the earring in Zoya's ear himself so I thought of writing it in this part. ☺️

I have not checked it twice so I'm sorry for any mistake.

@Asyaforlife – yeh le tere liye. And I hope I removed your confusion in this chapter. 🤗

I'll come back with more OS/SS/FF. laters! 🤗

Cheers!

~Sadie! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMFG! It was such a beautiful update. From end to the bottom. I enjoyed reading this chapter, rather this SS thoroughly. One of the most splendid pieces I have ever read up till now! :D
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Awww!! I luv happiiee endingss!

It was awesme! :-P
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OMFG! It was such a beautiful update. From end to the bottom. I enjoyed reading this chapter, rather this SS thoroughly. One of the most splendid pieces I have ever read up till now! :D


Awww! thank you so much! it means a lot to me! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow man that was just amazing
loved the way both of them proposed though i like zoyas because of asad's reaction to it
but it was just amazing
and asad and ayaan interaction was also good wow bond khan really cracked the case this time
just loved it
hope u come back with another fiction soon

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