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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Beautiful Dippy(I love your name)
I enjoyed reading it
evnev though it was short it was fantastic
Are you sure this is your first on AsYa, because you wrote so purrrfectly <3
Thanks for the PM too

haha, mah actual names sardeep, but everyone calls me dippy :P

thanks love <3

yah it is, so thanks veray much love <3

oh thats okay <3

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Andrea

@DreA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I enjoyed reading this so much. I especially loved your introduction. You had me 🤣 You should do another one :)

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Your an amazing writer!!!! But why seperate asad n zoya:(... Anyways you should really write more.

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JeanieBeanie

@JeanieBeanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

So angsty and heartbreaking. I loved it. Asad's hurricane-like emotions were amazingly portrayed. You write really well, whatchu be smokin girl? 😆 It's gonna be fun but painful at the same time watching this part of the story on the show.

Your intro. 🤣

Edited by JPRules - 12 years ago

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Hey Dippy,

This was a really good OS!

I was actually listening to the song "More than this", while reading this.

And I use to be obsessed with One Direction, more specifically Zayn Malik ❤️. But not anymore! 😔 I had to pay attention more to my studies.

It really was a sad OS, but beautifully written!

~ Sophie 😊

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: QH1fan
I enjoyed reading this so much. I especially loved your introduction. You had me 🤣 You should do another one :)

thanks so much for commenting love <3

oh yeah 🤣

i am known to have a retarded brain :P

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
Wonderful OS :)

thanks love <3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Your an amazing writer!!!! But why seperate asad n zoya:(... Anyways you should really write more.

thanks love, but i can only write angst 🤣

dunno why :D

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: JPRules
So angsty and heartbreaking. I loved it. Asad's hurricane-like emotions were amazingly portrayed. You write really well, whatchu be smokin girl? 😆 It's gonna be fun but painful at the same time watching this part of the story on the show.

Your intro. 🤣

are you sure? 🤣

what have i been smokin'...

dunno love 🤣

haha haha, dont think theyll be putting this sh*t on da show, s'too stupid :P

thanks for commenting love<3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sophie420
Hey Dippy,
This was a really good OS!
I was actually listening to the song "More than this", while reading this.
And I use to be obsessed with One Direction, more specifically Zayn Malik ❤️. But not anymore! 😔 I had to pay attention more to my studies.
It really was a sad OS, but beautifully written!
~ Sophie 😊

thanks love <3

More Than This, i swear, is one of the best songs out there.

and every other 1D song. 🤣

no.

NO.

NO NO NO NO NO.

YOU CANNOT BE NOT OBSESSED WITH 1D ANYMORE. 🤣

stupid studies lol

thanks again for commenting love <3