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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
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*This is the the first part of the 8th chapter of the next part will be updated by the following week.*

THE RAGE OF THE PAST[part1].

Raichand residence.

His slanting , villainous eyebrows furrow further in concentration as he contemplates with himself through the thin sheath of a mirror.

"You've been a monster from the beginning of time .Killing is your solace and your most prized possession cause it makes you feel... powerful."

Before , his multi spectrum brown pools knew , hi alter ego appeared as a hazy shadow taking form in front of him within the slate of mirror , "Who are you fooling , Abhay? As much as you dramatically feel there is humanity left in you , *dramatically rolling his eyes* , you are technically half human , and thus you have an alter ego to irritate you whenever it pleases."

Abhay's face transforms into a maze of menace as his rough sculpted hands cut through the ice cold water from the sink below. "Cut the crap." , he growls

"Delving and destroying other people's lives to feel you have an existence, a reason to make your existence seem purposeful in order to feel needed in the world is what is absolute crap here , Abhay." His alter ego pressed mercilessly, with a seriousness that lacked any form of complacence.

"You are scared, and so devoid of feeling needed that you kill every other life that has attachment and bonds with at least someone in their life. You are a jealous, selfish, lonely, and psychotic being! That I why you are trying o hard especially now to find one way or the other to destroy that innocent girl Piya don't you? Cause you are cared of her heart, something you believe has died inside you centuries ago?"

Abhay's aggression within himself made his hands break the steel tap out of the fumbling water pipe , "I have a a rational reason to kill her , which I don't need to give any explanation to you about! She knows too much , by just arriving at my house.I tried to attack her once and mom saved her.She already knows I'm not human , and logically , I have to kill her."

"Is that really the reason why you want to end her?" , his alter ego sarcastically asked him with a dark , cynic smile , "Or are you scared of what she can make that once Mary had?"

"You are scared after 500 years of being nothing but a mere killing machine, aren't you?"

The mere echo of Mary's name sent his senses, controls and monstrous rationalities fade and he broke the entire thin sheath of mirror yelling at his alter ego to never utter a word regarding Mary ever again. The streams of black coloured blood were on a route of overflow within his bronze , rough hands , but all they were to Abhay was merely a release of liquid. There was no pain , physically or emotionally attached to his physically injuries just as it had been for the past 500 years , because the outflow of blood was a mere flow of substance from a machine who had no soul , and so the mechanical hands like always , just piled themselves on his injuries till the blood instantly clotted , as his injuries never did needed its remains and lines to prove that they exist.

Edited by Escape.My.Love. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited:
yay first :D
OMG OMG OMG. Koyel updated! Breaking news! Call the media, please tell them! :P
ok comin to the update.
Fantastically written as always and I loved the alter ego conversation. And the way you wrote the mirror shattering... Pure power.
So we get the next update in 2013, yes? :P please make it sooner?
Btw congo on becoming a rockerz... The colour suits you :)
Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
koyel.. thank you so much for the update darling.. 🤗
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

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edited:
yay first :D
OMG OMG OMG. Koyel updated! Breaking news! Call the media, please tell them! :P
ok comin to the update.
Fantastically written as always and I loved the alter ego conversation. And the way you wrote the mirror shattering... Pure power.
So we get the next update in 2013, yes? :P please make it sooner?
Btw congo on becoming a rockerz... The colour suits you :)



😆 yes i updated. 😆 glad you liked and thank you. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update.the convo b/w abhay & his ego was good. So deep down abhay has started feelin 4 pia & since she made him feel sumthng so he wants to kill her. Waitin 4 ur nxt update. Thanx 4 pm
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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update.the convo b/w abhay & his ego was good. So deep down abhay has started feelin 4 pia & since she made him feel sumthng so he wants to kill her. Waitin 4 ur nxt update. Thanx 4 pm

ya well for the first time he feels scared..of how she has the potential t feel something that might disarm what he has been for the past 500 years..something even Mary couldn't do (:
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glad you liked it :)
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very lovely , i like your writing very descriptive :)
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Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

very lovely , i like your writing very descriptive :)

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