Aarya SS: CHUPKE CHUPKE final part ON page 21 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends this is next part

special request or order of my frind to make it ss. i thought to end it in 2nd part but for her make quite big, it'll be till 5th or 6th part i think.. hope you not feeling much dragged as i loving so much to write this..

give your views please.. will wait for that



CHUPKE CHUPKE


PART 3


YASH:

I was thinking what the meaning of her word yesterday.. she didn't want Sunday then I have to fulfill her wish. So I reached bus stop. Today here not many people only few.. no she didn't say she'll come today. And today Sunday so why she'll come today? But I think today Sunday that's why she'll come today. And see I was right she come.. first time I saw her smiling. In this 2 week we didn't smile at each other may be didn't get chance.. uff, her smile just killing. She smiled slight still I lost easily that didn't smiled back.

Aarti:

I saw him waiting for me. Today Sunday still he is here and I knew it.. first time I couldn't help but smile at him but he didn't.. I was waiting for his reply of smile and finally he smiled. He look more handsome with his smile.. I went near to him and this time gap not and half ft, that reduced. There is silence as usual, but today I decided not to keep this silence so I asked, "will you like to have a walk with me?"

Yash:

Today she was near to me than other days and I was li'l surprise and happy also when listened she askes me., "will you like to have a walk with me?".. I didn't think one moment to give answer then said, "I'll love to".. she smiled again.. we started to walk silently. I don't know where we are going as she asked me.. I waited for her word.

Aarti:

We walked long way silently. I also don't know where to go but I wanted to spend time with him. And I am feeling so good beside him. It may be sound strange that how I can feel good with anyone whom I don't know? I don't even know his name but its true that I am feeling good with him. But I was waiting for him to say something but he didn't. I become irritated and asked, "have you any problem in your voice?"

Yash:

I was really surprised again to listen her question.. but why she asked like that? I asked her, "why?, why you asked so?"

Aarti:

Its really surprising that after saying it alos he couldn't understand I want to hear something from him?.. I just give a irritating look now and said, "one girl is with you and you silent? Nothing to say?"

Yash:

Oh wow,, I was feeling happiness inside me. So she want to hear something from me? I didn't keep this in my mind only speak out, "so you want to listen something from me?"

Aarti:

He asked another question in answer of my question.. huh, of course if I asked like that then definitely want him to speak na!! I become embarrassed now and keep quite when he again said, "I thought you like silence more.." I looked at him. Now whtas this? Why I going to like silence?

Yash:

She looked at me again after listing my 2nd question. And I her look I can see the question so I said, "I said that coz in this 2 week got silence from you and only yesterday you said , not said, scolded I think"

Aarti:

How he read my mind? I read in books or watch in film like this mind reader now seeing mind reader in front of me.. I didn't ask any thing but he gave answer and this answer make me feel guilty about yesterdays behavior. All of sudden I asked like that, "sorry for yesterday.. I shouldn't say like that"

Yash:

I was thinking its not done, after her question I spoke 3 time but she is still silent when I listen her voice in sorry..

I felt bad and said, "hey, its ok, I felt good that someone this much concern for me. I could understand why you said like that?" after saying all this.. I was thinking I am saying all this to her so friendly.

Aarti:

After listing his words I become happy felt so much good, so he understood I was and am concern for him. It give me sudden happiness when he speak a;; this. I felt I am so close to him but still I said, "I am sorry not for that only, I didn't even ask how are you after knowing you were sick.."

Yash:

She looked down after saying her part why she is sorry, I can feel she is so guilty and couldn't understand what to say now so I decided to change the topic, I said, "I am ok now, perfect, that's why here but cant give guaranty how much time can be perfect"

Aarti:

I become worried.. why he said like that? Is he again feeling sick? I looked up and asked "why?"

Yash:

This I wanted her to look at me again.. I just feel so so much good to see her face. When she asked me why then I said, "walked so much and didn't take breakfast, if now wont eat anything then cant give guaranty will be ok or not".. and it made her smile and give me refreshment..


At night...


Aarti:

Then I had to smile after listen him, we went nearby restaurant and ate some light things.. there nothing much to talk. Then he dropped me to home.. yes he know my address now. But strange thing is we still don't know each others name.. isn't it strange? We spend enough time together still didn't ask the names. I am not feeling anything for not knowing his name but feeling I know him very well, from ages. Now waiting for tomorrow when at bus stop I'll see him again.

Yash:

I couldn't sleep properly yesterday. There was magic in the moments with her and I wanted to get back those moments again.. I was living in that breakfast date.. lol, first time may be anyone go for breakfast date.. but is that date? Don't know but wonderful time before that. The concern in her eyes for me and her smile, I cant forget.. now its it time to meet her again..

Aarti:

Returning from office and waiting for his stop also. Today morning when I came then saw him waiting for me and no doubt there was different feeling when saw someone to wait for me specially.. we didn't speak much but when his stop come then he got down and gave me a smile.. my heart skip a beat. I really can do anything to get that smile again. Whole time in office I was lost in yesterday's moment ant the smile of him at morning..

Yash:

I saw her in bus and can definitely say she was restless till now and get relieved when I sat beside her. We come down at our stop and started to walk but don't know where going.. there was again silence from long time. I was thinking how to start any topic and what to say when I felt she held my hand..

Aarti:

We were walking. Again I am feeling so good to be with him. I hardly know about him still his presence beside me make me feel wonderful. Don't know what come to my mind I hold his hand in my. He looked at me and again our eyes met. But then I felt I did right?? What he can think of this about me? I was about to remove my hand but now he hold that..

Yash:

Actually I was shocked when I felt her hand in my. I looked at her with surprise and she also looked at me. Then I saw hesitation in her eyes. She was going to remove her hand but I didn't let her do that. May be she was thinking I didn't like that but I hold that to say her that I also want it and smiled.. got her smile also in response.. like that we walked long way. I think like me she also loving the silence with the hold in hands..

Aarti:

Like yesterday today also cant sleep easily. I am there in that time with him. The warmth of his hand in in my hand I think. I just holing my hand near my heart and my heart feeling his touch

so what in the store next?

where their meeting will go and how??😉

will they able to describe their feelings for each other?😳

wait till next part..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Yay finally the much awaited Sunday came for AarYa and for us also 😳
I'm loving these monologues of AarYa. They are shy, yet so expressive. Aarti is taking first steps in everything. She's the one talked first and she's the one who held hand. Loved this update. Now waiting to see what happens next.
And thanks for converting it into SS 😛
Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Fantastic part dear😳😳😳
Aarya had met😳😳😳
Loved aarthi's hold then yash's😳😳😳
Really Loved This part😳😳😳
Sorry 4 this late comment😳😭
Edited by Guruvishva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hey jhil that was so sweet update ⭐️
wow finally they had a date that too on Sunday... interesting to know that Sunday is playing a key role now 😉 😆
yea yash bhi na so shy but cho chweet 😳
just loving this love story 😉
I m so happy that u thought of converting it into SS 😃
awesome job jhil 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for changing into a SS!! Love the update and their silent romance so beautifuly described how they communicate with each other!! When are they going to tell names/formaly introduce themselves?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! It's superb. Glad that you are extending it. Their silent conversation is awesome. Although they don't know each other's name but day by day their comfort level is increasing. They don't need the formality of knowing each other's name. Liked the way you are showing their ST.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awesome update jhill😳😳😳
Love it 😳😳😳
At last they have hold their hands 😳😳😳
Aarya silence is so divine 😳😳😳
I want many more parts 😆😆😆
Thanks for the pm😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

o its cute he hate Sundays so is she n then she dressed for him which certainly he notice

he is actually measuring distance n then the real distance of 5 days coz of viral oh my my

finally they vocalize perfect after a Sunday to another Sunday so sweet it is beautifully written dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Yay finally the much awaited Sunday came for AarYa and for us also 😳

I'm loving these monologues of AarYa. They are shy, yet so expressive. Aarti is taking first steps in everything. She's the one talked first and she's the one who held hand. Loved this update. Now waiting to see what happens next.
And thanks for converting it into SS 😛


Thanx a lot di..
i had to convert this in SS for requests..
even me enjoying writting their ST'S..
KEEP SUPPORTING.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: annirogc

nice part .waiting for next


THANK YOU..

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