Aarya SS: CHUPKE CHUPKE final part ON page 21 - Page 3

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Jhil -- Chupke Chupke...dheerey dheerey...u r finding ur place somerewhere in the list of established writers...Good one dear.😃

thank you so much for the big complement dear. Thanx a lot

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome dear update next part

thank you. Will gv next part soon

aww chupke chupke game 😳
i love arya's silent admiring so much ❤️
no other date has been perfect as this with so much love sweety..
aww i am i love this silent lovers...
soon waiting to see their first talk after this long dating dear..

super cute os continue soon 👏

Loved it Jhil so much. Once again you've shown their feelings so well. From shyness, to hesitation to finally looking at each other.

wow such lovely concept nd beautiful narrration of this beautiful feelings ,,loved it soo much ,,throughly enjoyed soo much ,,waiting fr next part ,,update soon dear,,

Originally posted by: maha9

aww chupke chupke game😳
i love arya's silent admiring so much ❤️
no other date has been perfect as this with so much love sweety..
aww i am i love this silent lovers...
soon waiting to see their first talk after this long dating dear..

super cute os continue soon 👏

thanx maha di. Its really silent date.. Lets see whts in next. Will gv nxt part soon

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Loved it Jhil so much. Once again you've shown their feelings so well. From shyness, to hesitation to finally looking at each other.

Can't wait to read the next part. I want to see who'll take the first step towards the other one.😳

thanx a lot di. So happy to gt u back in cmmnt after long time nd so glad u liked it.. Hope u'l like the next one also.. Thanx once again.. 😊

Originally posted by: vinnas

wow such lovely concept nd beautiful narrration of this beautiful feelings ,,loved it soo much ,,throughly enjoyed soo much ,,waiting fr next part ,,update soon dear,,

thanx.. Thank you so much dear for liking it ths much and cmmnting

thank you everyone for beautifull comments

here the 2nd part.

hope you'll like and comment...

CHUPKE CHUPKE

Part 2

Yash:

why this meaningless Sunday came? I didn't have office and I am sure she also didn't have that work for which she go everyday.. had no excuse to come bus stand and there no guaranty she'll be there. So I had to wait for today means Monday.. but today why she late? Bus time not over but usually she come before than time.. only 10 minute left... oh, finally she is here.. umm today she is looking different. What different? Oh, today she is in shalowar- red salowar,. Before didn't see her in this type of dress. Looking great in traditional get up I can say this from far also.. she gave me a look today.. one minute, whats meaning of that? Yeah, she gave me an sorry look for being late for sure.. and no doubt I liked that, so she understand that I am waiting for her..

Aarti:

Oh, sweta.. what need to get married on Sunday? Cant her family keep her weeding date on Saturday? Yes, that would be best na? this Sunday already come in middle and I didn't come to office, I mean in bus stop also and for attending late night party I became late to wake up at morning.. and when in hurry was getting ready then couldn't get ready like other days. I felt today something special.. I choosed red salowar, its li'l gorgeous also.. will he like it? I thought then.. I don't know his like anyway.. so it take sometime to get ready, and when I reach here then saw him.. I think he is waiting for me.. so I gave an a sorry look to him, hope he understood. And today I didn't go that much far from his place.

Yash:

So today she closed the gap li'l more..i mean 7 days ago the gap b/w us was almost 5 ft, then that became 3 ft and now its not more than 1 and half ft, can be less also..

Next day...

Aarti:

I am waiting here from last 30minute, still he didn't come.. why this much late? Is he taking revenge from me for yesterday? I was late yesterday but not intentionally. How much? I can understand now how it feel to wait for someone but its enough na..

Bus come but he didn't.. I started to find him here and there but no sign of him.. once I thought to wait some more time then think why I'll wait? I waited 1 hour, who said to be late this much? I wnet to my way, but when his stop come then I felt the emptiness so much, today he is not here to get down...

Today is Saturday. I last saw him at Monday.. its 5^th day.. this much long revenge? Or he don't want to see me again? Is he ok? If anything happened to hi? I felt my eyes are wet and then cheeks also become wet.. don't he feel anything for me?? I waited for him in bus stop but he didn't come.. I missed my office and whole day waited for him there,, today when his stop come I couldn't stop myself, just rushed out from bus.. started to look for him with hope, may be I'll get him here.. but after sometime I realized my mistake, why I come here? If he not there then what guaranty that he'll be here? And if here then is he stupid that will wait for me in bus stop for me?? So now I started to wait for next bus that I can reach office..

Yash:

5 day, 5day I didn't see her.. but this viral fever come as my enemy.. had to bear emotional atyachaar of everyone in family.. I couldn't go to office and if not office then no chance to go to bus stop. Today again joining office again.. but today I was late.. bus time over so I used my car after long time, but I decided to return by bus.. will keep car in some friend's resident.. but don't know what she is thinking. I was driving when saw someone from car and yes, its she.. but what she is doing here in this bus stop? Its not her place as I know.. I stopped car in front of her and went near to her.. I can say she didn't expect me there..

Aarti:

I was shocked to see him right front of me after this long time.. how he come to know I am here for him? It was unexpected.. he is looking different but whatever all these days frustration come out and I almost screamed, "why you didn't come these 5 days? Do you have any idea how I was feeling?".. yeah first time I talked with him but usually first conversation of anyone don't be like this.. I realized what I said and how? There some people around. They must be listened.. and how I can ask him like this? I don't have any right to ask like this.. i9 understand and turned to leave from there.. at least have satisfaction that he is ok..

Yash::

Really she talked with me? At first I aws shocked. Didn't expect her firt word to me will be like this.. but then understand there her no fault.. she must waited for me.. so she come here for me?? I couldn't believe but before thinking anything I saw her turned to leave from there.. "I had fever, family members didn't allow me to come office.. today better but become late, bus time over so come in my car..", I said in one breath to stop her.. she stopped and turned and looked at me. After thyat day we looked at easch other like this. Her look chage now.. and I don't know what she wanted to say but she left when bus come..

Aarti::

When he said he was sick then I felt pain in my heart.. how I asked him rudely without knowing the reason? What he is thinking god knows? I looked at him and understand the difference of his face for his sickness.. bus come and I left from there. But how heartless I am? Didn't even ask once how he is? I lokked at him again through bus window but couldn't ask..

Yash::

She looked at me again after getting in bus but she was silent.. I think she is feeling guilty for asking like that..

At the time of returning I got in bus, she saw me. One seat beside her empty, I thought I should sit there or not then saw she moved a little and I understood she also want me there.. whole journey was silent like always.. our stop come.. we come down from bus, I saw ger silent and going to her way, then said, "tomorrow Sunday"

Aarti:

I listened him to say tomorrow Sunday. I know that.. in bus I moved coz I wanted him beside me there, wanted to ask how he is now but couldn't.. don't know why.. and when he said tomorrow Sunday I become aware. I don't want Sunday after 5 days gap.. I didn'tn know what to say, just said, "but I don't want this Sunday", and looked at him to know what his reaction..

Yash:

Its really surprising that her wish same as me, I was thinking what to say when she again said< "I really don't want tomorrow to be Sunday".. then she left before I could say anything and disappeared from my eyesight soon...

what will come in next?

will they have to spend another sunday alone against there wish??😒

will update soon on saturday or sunday..

enjoy this...😊

I'm the 1st😆