Aarya SS: CHUPKE CHUPKE final part ON page 21 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Hey dear first of all i shud say this chapter has come up so beautifully the unsaid words utter their true feeling and emotions

and then a promise for a blissful togetherness forever its very well written
the aarya connections and hidden feeling o dear its really touching very nice👏👏


thank you so much dear for liking it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Part - 5 :

Jhil the update ..as usual fantastic...introduction and monologue...excellent.😃


thank you...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Jhil,

I'm glad that you are back. Yes we love your stories but we love you too. Health is more important. We will wait. Take your own time and write dear..🤗❤️


thank you so much kate di for the love from you. yeah i know health is important so frm now i am not ignoring for sure..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jhillyarya


thank you so much kate di for the love from you. yeah i know health is important so frm now i am not ignoring for sure..😊

❤️🤗❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

😊 😃🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi there take as much time as you need we will wait health comes first rest is very important 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


FINAL PART



aarti:

Life can be more and beautiful when we both together. I cant find more peace any other place than his arms. Previous few month was the most beautiful time I ever spend and after giving name to our relation, it become more and more beautiful. i don't become tired after using or thinking this word BEAUTIFUL again and again.. from the first I didn't like joint and big families but now I am daughter in law of a family which have 8 members. And I feel myself the luckiest person ever.. I can do anything for being with him only, no matter how much big family that is. I just wanted to be with him and today I feel my dream fulfilled.


yash:

Somethings never can changed and one of them is my happiness when I am with her. And everything can be changed but the universal truth is I cant even imagine my one day without her now. It become so difficult when now she went to meet her parents and couldn't return for heavy rain. I am feeling this night like a decade. Couldn't even talk with her for this stupid network. Waiting is really a horrible thing. I cant wait to end this one night then how then she waited for me 5 days without even knowing me?? Is there any magical power with her? I don't know when I slept but wake up for the sound of knocking door. It was 3 at morning. I became irritated, with so much difficulty I slept now who disturbing at this hour? While rubbing eyes when I opened door then thought I was dreaming..

aarti:

"rain rain go away, come again another day.. aarti wants to go back today.." oh, seriously I was saying this poem only for return back to my dear life.. but what my dear life is doing? No call, no sms. Okay, network problem, but he should come to take me from here na!! ans? Heavy rain, yeah this is also right that how he'll come in this rain? But what about me? How can I stay here? Without him? Now I used to see him beside me before sleeping and after waking u.. yeah, only 8 days 16 hour 52 minutes ago we got married but I cant stay like this, its so difficult. And finally at 2 am I took decision to come back as rain not heavy anymore, I know it'll be risky so I called him also but he didn't pick up the call.. wow, he is sleeping peacefully and here I am dying. Once I thought to drop the idea of return back coz for whom I am thinking to taking risk he is sleeping without any tension, then why? But then thought it will be punishment for me only. I was feeling like running away from home for my boyfriend..huh.

When I reached to the door of house then realized the need of opening the main door to reach my sleeping handsome. I couldn't find any other way so like a shameless called bhabi. I know she can think many things but who cares? In 2 min when door opened and I saw smiling bhabi then started to feel shy. But thank god she didn't say much expect, "how lucky my devar ji is.." I felt more embarrassed, going to give some explanation but understood, no fayda.. so I walked to my destination and as expected my so sleepy husband opened door while rubbing eyes.. I almost pushed him and enter.

yash:

I felt like dream, but when understood its not then no one can be happy than me. After closing the door I ran to her and hugged from behind. Didn't care to know how at this moment she is here? Fragrance of her forced me to loose my control over me. "I missed you so much" I was feeling lack of word to describe how much I missed her. Words are not enough to say so I choose to easiest way to explain my feelings. Started to explore her with my kisses and I think by this I can say her how much I longing for her.

aarti:

Is it necessary now? For god shake, I was about to show my anger to him but now I am finding it difficult. How it is possible when he holding me like this? I already feeling so weak, isn't it enough that his lips also started moving on me? I was feeling like heaven again. Of course I wanted him not to stop it but what about my anger? It already gone.. and I couldnt say him anything nor could fight with him for not receiving call. I don't know when I started to give reply of his kisses and love and allow him to love me more and more, totally surrender myself to him with all my wish again to make the another memorable moment of our life.


Yash:

"aarti.. I want to say something." I become surprised to listen my words. I didn't call her by her name till now. I saved her number as "you" in my phone and as far I know same in her phone also, it's a co incident, and I got her surprise look.


Aarti:

I was little surprised to listen my name from him as before I didn't listen so. But more than that I was thinking what he want to say at this time as we both already late coz of late night, I mean early morning act, I have to get up now. Before I could say anything he said, "I think, I should say you that, I fall in love with you.." what? What he said? I felt like laugh loudly. Whats special in it? I know very well how much he love me, that's why we together. And he is saying it now? After long dating of 4-5 month and after 7 days of our marriage. But seeing his innocent face and lovely expression I had to kiss him passionately again as gift of this fantastic confession.


sometime love can be expressed without word, but words give more essence to it.

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Edited by jhillyarya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jhil!! oh it's such a wonderful end for wonderful SS..
I'm glad to see that you are back with your writing...
Thank you for this lovely ending dear...
OH!Aarthi she's so much in love with her hubby and Yash he's also so much in love with his wife...
At last after 7 days of marriage 4- 5 affair he said those three magical words.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Jhil!! oh it's such a wonderful end for wonderful SS..

I'm glad to see that you are back with your writing...
Thank you for this lovely ending dear...
OH!Aarthi she's so much in love with her hubby and Yash he's also so much in love with his wife...
At last after 7 days of marriage 4- 5 affair he said those three magical words.

oh thanx a lot di.. Yeah aarti is in so much love nd same for yash also.. Finally it ended nd relly glad tht u all liked nd supprtd thts y ths os bcm ss, thanx once again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautiful indeed!!!!!!
Loved this new style of writing...

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