As Long As I Live Thread 1 - Page 50

haila- kahani mein twist 😕

OMG!!! Saffi, That was fantastic!!! I loved how you portrayed Aarti! Very realistic!!! 👏 👏

Saffi - first of all, my apologies for getting to this story so late. But thank you for continuing to pm me - that's how i finally tracked it down!!

And second - oh my god!!! I totally love the way you do the promos - that is so cool! Great idea and even better execution. Must say i am impressed.

And now on to the best part - the story!! Stealing a line from McDonalds - i'm loving it!! You write beautifully, capturing the emotions and showing their effects. And i really like the story-line. I read all 5 chapters this past weekend, and am hooked!

You depicted Arti beautifully - with her past in multiple foster homes (how difficult must that have been for the poor girl!!) no wonder she has low self-esteem. And clung on to Prashant as a best friend-fiance combo. She needs at least one person to call family - and she has been seeing Prashant in that role.

Prashant - i feel sorry for him. Confused, unsure, timid - and ends up making himself a jerk. He had/has the potential to be a nice guy - to be the person Arti projected him as, but no. As always, he chooses the easy route. What a disappointment he must be to all his loved ones - and what a sorry life to have as a result.

Yash - ah now, he is intriguing. He came across, to me at least, as desperately in love with Arpita and hence ready to do anything for her. Not used to seeing Yash in this rle - so a nice change. I like the relationship that's slowly building between Yash and Arti. And she trusts him instinctively, even when her conscious brain tells her not to!

Great job Saffi - and thank you for sharing this gem with us.

excellent update again...wow Arpita has a bf?...

waiting for next update

Saffi today I'm simply lost for words

Poor Aarti She's In A Mess.

Arpita has a boyfriend...😕.