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Posted: 12 years ago
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After sooo many rahians I've seen haha, I could stop myself writing an os. Well, this goes here.
I know this won;t turn that good, and after a long time. I writing this.
Okay, so read and tell me how''s it. ?

We are no friends- RaHi OS.

We were that close, yes were so close, I could barely look at her eyes. She was that beautiful, she was ruling my mind. Whenever I fall, she was there to held me upon, I danced she watched, I laughed, she shared, she was my moti and I was her nonu.
The room was dark, we could barely see our faces, and she left me alone in the darkest place for 2 minutes, she told me she'd come and she left me. The candle was been lit by her, I saw her sparkling eyes in the dark room, where she saw mine.

"Jaal gayi batiya, daal gayi raatiya lage tere naino se naina re. "

That was room filled with yellow light of the candle, I kept silent and hold my hands with a tight grip, I could feel the heat of hers . Was she hungry? No, she was feeling cold and she was wrapped around me as a baby, she was my moti. I gave the heat.

"Thampi huyi garmiyan dhop huyi saardiya laage tere naino se naina re. "

She was asleep and I was around her hands, I held her in my hands to lift her up and make her sleep in the bed, and she held my hands and never left. I could hear her heartbeats they were in slow motion, though i loved it. Was she dreaming of me? She was calling me out. It was a dream.

"Chalne lagi hai mujhe teri hi nazre saapne dikhai hai tere"

I know, this was it. Was it the end of our friendship, she woke up. "Nonu" the word echoed in my ears, for a period of time, she was my soul mate, my best friend, she was my savior, she was my everything, she meant everything to me. She was it. I could not stop telling that my heartbeats were fast, and hers even I could hear them. Our closeness. We had a eye contact, and we were looking at each other . I spoke up, I just did. "Moti, we are no friends. I LOVE YOU , and I know you do, stop lying". I held her up and kissed her.

"Chalne lagi hai dil mai deeri se teri dhadkanei"
"O re naina, naina kare kare naina , naina matware naye nazar dekhe nazare naina naina".

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Yes, rahians. I'm also one of you.
And this is the art piece i tried to write.
Tell me how's it?
Love, suma. 😊
Thanks maisy, for such an amazing RaHi dp. Love you. 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww! No need to thank me for the dp yaar! :*

And this was good. transcended the innocence and brought out some intimacy which a couple needs to share which friends don't. I liked it! good one! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow totally loved it
it was lyk few words wrapped wid loads of emotions
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww suma this ws too good..short bt very very sweet...... keep writing more on RaHi..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it,super cute the way u expressed the ending of friendsip and starting of a new reltionship,*sigh*
loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww suma👏
fabulous one👏
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriti094

Wow totally loved it
it was lyk few words wrapped wid loads of emotions

Thank you so much, btw whats ur name ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

awww suma OMG! How do u know my name., how silly me i wrote on last. :P this ws too good..short bt very very sweet...... keep writing more on RaHi..!! thankyou so much i will for sure. btw, whats ur name. ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Loved it,super cute the way u expressed the ending of friendsip and starting of a new reltionship,*sigh*

loved it!

Thank you so much. first try at rahi..
btw nice meeting you..
i'm way to new to the people whats ur name?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

woww suma👏 Haha, aishhu. :*

fabulous one👏 awhh.. thanks
lovedd ittt😊 thanks kya haal chal these days?

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