TH#3 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted TH#4 PG.140 (29/08) - Page 31

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

WAITING

awesome story

I want to spam the thread but at the same time I wonder if I will be able to read the update anytime soon...

Jo pehle hua na.. Ab hone laga hai...
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Presenting Our Jalebi Bai with non other than Our Jalebi Raja!! :p

This Diwali, I don't want to see this... ;(

As this is my first ever spot just after your update and I am sure this will be my last as this was by sheer luck so I would like to take the opportunity to thank your for being such a lovely person and a talented writer who can weave magic while expressing every emotions..there are lots of talented writers but for me you are amongst the very few who always manage to make my heart go dhak dhak while reading your updates and leave me yearn for more...

As you know I am not very good with expressing my emotions but I will try to write a few more words this time..

Just loved the way you have incorporated the dance sequence not as a means by Khushi to make Anjali happy also the subtle way of portraying Arnav's emotions to see Khushi dance...the gradual change in his attitude towards Khushi from thinking her as the annoying girl to a beautiful mature woman has been perfectly developed...just the simple moment of seeing her without her dupatta and him averting his eyes as it is not right is so beautifully written...it just didnt portray the emotions of a man while seeing a beautiful lady but it expressed a lot more..it expressed the gradual yearning , the prospect of the start of something new, something fresh...like wise as Arnav while approaching Khushi felt like touching her and while he did collide with her you used the word "touch"..a perfect blend of just one word to express the beauty of the situation..the sensation of touch that had touched both Arnav and Khushi leading to a new sensation altogether...

Loved the flirtatious Arnav...the way he teased Khushi, the way he took the ghoonghroos off her feet, the way he asked her to accompany him for the party significantly added to my happines..I would say it started with a smile and the chapter went on it took the form of the widest possible grin...I could almost see the scene with Barun and Sanaya in it...gosh how much I miss those IPK days...

The Raizada's are one lovely clan..Arnav is right that are not very subtle but their every actions just a giggle or a raising of their eyebrow or dadi giving ma's kangan to Arnav all point to the fact how much they want Arnav and Khushi to be together...

Indeed life is full of surprises ..there was once an Arnav who would resort to any plans to keep Khushi away and there is now an Arnav who would again resort to any plans to keep her with him...plans are indeed meant for modifications according to the changes in situation...