Virman SS: Line between love and Friendship (pg3) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start...luvd the concept...👍🏼
Plzz cont ...n do pm me wen ya update!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME CONCEPT.
PLZZZ PM ME.
CONTINUE SOON.😊😊
Edited by kusharberry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc start..looking great.. continue soon pls pm me wen u update d next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch

Manvi Sharma - simple yet special girl.. Proud of her family.. Lively and positive.. Understands everyone's needs. And more importantly support system of her best buddy virat.. She loves her family so much and virat as well. Her sister jeevika and virat two most important persons in her life. Viren, brother of virat and to be husband of jeevika also very close to her..

Virat vadhera- handsome and charmer.. Eligible bachelor of the town.. Girls are mad behind him.. Always do whatever he wants.. Very close to his mother and brother.. But manvi always holds special place in his heart.. His best buddy.. He cares for her, protect her, but only as buddy and want to become a great singer

Jeevika Sharma- elder sister of manvi.. Love her alot.. and in a relationship with viren..

Viren Vadhera- elder brother of virat. Love his family, always try to protect his brother virat.. Love jeevika alot and close to manvi

Seema Sharma- mother of manvi.. Elegant beauty.. Love her daughters and only son alot.. And also love virat and viren as his own sons

Dabbu- jeeman brother

Vansikha vadhera- virats mother.. Love him so much.. Always care about virat.. She loves manvi and jeevika like her daughters..

Rest of other family members are just like in serial

soon other characters are going to make their entry...you will meet them soon😆

Edited by nishalrockss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE CHARACTER SKETCH
PLZ UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

First of all a big thank you for giving me your feedbacks😊.

Today is very special day of my life.. from today everything is going to change in my life and new relations are going to bound and this day never come again in my life. The most important day of my life. I'm on cloud nine now. Ohh I forgot to introduce my self to u, I'm manvi sharma and this is my story, story of my love and life. Simple yet complicated :P .. But i dont have any complaints. Its my life and i love my life because this life gave me so much, a lovely family and a over-protective friend like virat. Virat's family also love me alot, I'm happy that i'm blessed with love of two wonderful family. Sharmas and Vadheras. Virat and me are childhood friends, we are best of buddy. Both the families are very close to each other and thus how we became a best buddies.

There is lot to know about my sweet family but for now i'm gonna tell you importance of today.

Today is the day, me and virat are going to be bind in a new and forever relation and our marriage is fixed . And roka going to held today.. M nervous yet excited..

Exactly after 15 day we will be a couple..

Eekksss I'm so excited.. Cant express my feeling.

Everyone were busy in preparations and excited can be clearly seen on their faces

"Manviii...", jeevika di entered my room while shouting .

"Yes di", i replied while hiding my diary from her. If she will get to know that i'm writing this diary she's gonna kill me on this special day itself.

"What r u doing??" jeevika di asked while coming closer towards me.

"Nothing di", i replied and I know she caught me. Nothing can be hide from her.

"Manvi dont u know, today is ur roka and u again writing ur stupid dairy",jeevika di yelled

"No di, I'm not writing but...", I said trying to give her explanation with some silly reasons and before I can do that she spoke in middle

"Manvi, dont act smart plz get ready or otherwise i'm going to throw this stupid diary out", jeevika di said while taking an exit from my room..

"Di" I shouted to stop jeevika di

"What happened??""jeevika di asked

"Di, I want to talk to u", I said moving close to her.

"Even i want to talk to u but its not a right time mannu, you should get ready", jeevika di stated.

"No di, plz sit here and its more important", I said and we both moved towards sofa.

"Ok, tell me",jeevika di said..

"Di, are you happy with my roka?? I mean you are elder to me but i'm getting married before u", I asked nervously to jeevika di.

"Are you crazy mannu? How can you even think like that?"jeevika di stated

"No di, i didn't want to hurt u", I said

"Mannu I think you are aware that me and viren will get married after two years since our pandit ji said that its not a good time to get married according to our kundali's",jeevika di said

"No di, I wanted to get married after yours but that pandit ji said its very much right time for mine and virat's marriage", I said while looking down

"Mannu dont be upset, u should be happy that u r going to marry with love of your life virat",Jeevika di said teasing tone

"Di please don't make me more nervous", I said

"Why nervous??"jeevika di asked

"Dont know di", I said with a confused mind

"Mannu, do you know one thing?? you and virat are made for each other. U both r just perfect, the bond u both share is amazing.. U know that successful marriage is based on friendship and u and virat r best example of friendship, u both understand each other, u both share every secret of ur life with each other, more importantly u guys are comfortable with each other. This is called relationship", jeevika di explained

'Di, i know that. But i'm not sure about virat's feeling on me",I said

"Mannu this because its hard for boys to accept their best buddy as their life partner. Virat loves u but unaware about his feeling, now its up to u how u make him realize his feeling",jeevika di said.

"I will di and thank u di for talking to me and also helping me in solving my problems", I said while hugging jeevika di.

"Now no more drama my drama queen, go and get ready", jeevika di said while breaking hug.

"Di but help me to choose my dress i'm confused", I said pointing towards the dresses lying on the bed.

"This blue anarkali dress will be perfect, u will look beautiful",jeevika di said

"Ok di, thank u", I said and went to washroom to change.

In Vadhera mansion

Virat's point of view:

"What the hell is going on?? No it's not possible. Me and mannu nooo never. She is my best buddy how can I marry her? I'm totally confused what should i do?? All of a sudden why all are behind us of this marriage business. How can even they fix my marriage without even asking me?? Really i'm not going to get married this early, its time for me to focus on my carrier, on my dream to become a rockstar. I think i should talk to ma and bhai and i'm wondering how mannu got ready for this marriage. I think she is ready because of our families. I should talk to her as early as possible"

"Virattt", viren bhai entered the room while holding some sherwanis(indian dress) in his hand.

I looked at bhai

"Virat, choose the sherwani the one which you liked and I think this blue one will be perfect and jeevika told me that Manvi is wearing the blue dress as well", viren bhai said with full excitement

"Bhai, why r u not getting married to jeevika and Why me??" I asked

"Becoz of that pandit ji, even i want to get marry but i have to wait for 2 long years", viren bhai said trying to be funny.

"Bhai, its not funny and I don't want to get marry this early, now its time to focus on my carrier not on marriage life, bhai i'm not ready to take that responsibility right now", I said and turned my face to other side.

"What are you saying virat? I know u must be nervous that's why u r saying all this", viren bhai said to clam me

"No bhai, i'm not at all nervous and moreover I dont even love mannu", I said.

"Whattt?? U dont love manvi?? U must be kidding",viren bhai said with a chuckle.

"Bhai, listen to me first", I said being impatient.

"Virat, enough is enough, be serious now as u r getting married no more joke right now", viren bhai said and left the room,

"Bhaiii", I shouted.

Virat has no option left with him without getting ready so he went to get ready.

"Now manvi is only option left with me and I should talk to her and i'm sure she will under stand", I thought.


Note: This is written by my bff. So all credit goes to her😳
Give your feedbacks to this part also

Regarding PM, as a niewbie i cannot send the links, sorry😊
Edited by nishalrockss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update not what he will do
how he will tell her
and how will she react update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pink1

nice update not what he will do
how he will tell her
and how will she react update soon

Hey congratulations for becoming goldie🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
First timr read
the story s amazing

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