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Hey guys mannu asked me to write an os because she gave me a lot on my bday she wanted a romantic one but jo bhi dimaag mein aya wahi diya , sorry mannu agar accha nah laga but it is a long update do enjoy ..😛

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Kr os

TUM HI HO

It had been 6 months since taani had left , rey was just living in her memories , everyday would be the same , he would wake up in the morning , get ready for college not looking forward to it now that his love of life had gone away , and the nights he would just sit there looking at her photographs remembering the best moments he shared with her .

But then a day came which changed his life ... want to know what then put your seat belts on and get ready for a bumpy ride ...

As usual rey got ready to college with his fake smile that he would keep in front of his friends he didn't want to share the pain with his friends because he knew all his friends would say to him ' move on rey kitne mahine hogaye wagera wagera' he knew what they would say is true but he was finding it hard for some reason , he was finding it hard to forget taani , and kriya , KRIYA kitne saal hogayein mein usse mila nahi pata nahi kaise hogi ? kaha hogi ? mujhe yaad bhi karti hogi ke nahi ? he had never been hurt this much in his life he was wishing that he had never fallen in love, this word LOVE had ruined his life .

'Hello rey ? hey rey kaha ho tum ?' Vicky was trying to get his attention for the past 5 minutes , rey wasn't just listening HELLOOO!!! Vicky screamed in his ears, it made rey come to his senses 'KYA??mere kaan mein kyun chilla rha hai idiot!?' 'sorry yaar tu sun nahi raha tha pata nahi tu kis dunya mein hai sab theek toh hai na ?' Vicky asked worried for him rey just nodded and plan to go off from there , he was going out when princi came in 'hey guys kaise ho tum sab ?' he asked the gang they all replied back and smiled at him 'well mere pass tumhare liye ek news hai ' 'kya hai news sir ?' swayam asked 'umm yaha ki ek x student thee shes coming back .. umm i don't know if you remember her.. KRIYA!' as soon as this name got to rey ears it felt like zameen uske per ke neeche se nikal gayi thi , he didn't know what to say he just ran off from there straight to the rehearsal hall .. princi saw this but he still continued 'guys she will be on her way now , shes your friend please do look after her she has been through alot' princi smiled and went off from there. Everyone was still standing their shocked , right now they never knew if they should be happy or angry on kriya but before that they had to go and find rey 'guys rey kaha hai ?' Sharon asked worried for him,' shayad rehearsal hall gaya hoga lets check there', swayam replied and they quickly ran to the rehersal hall .

Rey was sitting thinking of how much pain he has gone through his life , why does she want to come back? i don't want to take the pain anymore , he was thinking why can't he just be left alone , why can't he just live a normal life tears were continuously coming out his eyes why couldn't universe ji, leave him the way he is , he got up

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3UHfi9vpbc (listen)

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

He got up walking toward the mirror , kriya was standing behind him (imagine), he took out his hand to take hold of her but she was gone , he walked back with tears falling out


Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Kriya came behind him and hugged him from behind he twisted her around and then moved away from her , kriya ran up to him and hugged him like a baby and he turned around with her , she got off and started to go away whilst rey was standing there with their hands out .(imaginery)

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)


he sat down crying with his hand on his heart , pouring his heart out of how much he was hurt he put his head on the floor , all the moments were coming in front of him , the times he spent with kriya he had not forgotten them , he did a roll on the floor and got up ,

The gang outside were really sad seeing rey in this condition

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Yaaraa...(end of song )

He got up to put water on himself, water falling down from his face mixed with his tears , he chucked his bottle and did some cart wheels and heavy moves showing his pain in his moves , he turned around seeing kriya standing there, he went close to her , closer to her face as soon as he was going to touch it she disappeared , he sat down there with his head in between his legs crying away.

The gang ran up to him and hugged him , they started to cry with him , they tried to control rey and calm him down after a lot of efforts he calm down, 'rey i think tujhe taani ko bhul kar agein barh jana chaiyein ?' swayam told him in concern for his friend rey just looked at him 'mein kaise age barhun jab mera ateet wapas arha hai tu bata swayam kriya wapas arhi hai mein kaise agein barhun ?' 'mera matlab kriya hi tha ?, kya tu usse pyaar nahi karta ?' 'woh usse kaise pyaar karega swayam jab woh khud usko chor kar chali gayi thi' Vicky answered annoyingly 'mujhe nahi pata swayam i just need time to think about it please' he got his stuff and went off from there.

Kriya had joined college but she would keep herself away from her friends she didn't know how to face them , especially after what she had done , even though she had a reason but she thought they wouldn't be bothered to listen to her . she kept to herself . kriya was feeling hungry , she had a reason for that (you will find out why), 'phir se mujhe bhook lagi hai , ab kya karun ? ha canteen jati hoon waha kuch kha lungi ' she went off to the canteen the gang were sitting there too, rey was there too , she walked in and her eyes fell on rey , they were looking at each other kriya quickly came back to her senses and went to order herself something , she orders herself a cheese sand which with juice and sat down to eat. She was enjoying her meal , she could feel someone looking at her rey was, she tried to ignore him and carried on eating , suddenly neha came up to her with a paper in her hand 'umm kriya yeh paper tumhara hai ?' she asked her kriya looked at it. It was a paper that no one was meant to see 'umm yh ' she quickly took it off her , neha didn't want to create scene she sat down next to her , kriya was hoping she wont say anything right now but neha was neha 'kriya tum pregnant ho but kaise ?' kriya tears started to come out 'please neha mujhe iske barein mein koyi baat nahi karni and please don't tell anyone ' kriya quickly got off from there and went out whipping her tears.

The gang came up to neha , neha was still in shock ,'kya hua ?' Vicky asked , 'kriya pregnant hai guys' it came out her mouth WHATT!!!?the gang screamed , they took neha out from there and brought her to the rehearsal hall 'tumhein pata bhi hai nehu tum kya kehrahi ho ?' rey asked her 'yes rey jo paper meine kriya ko dya tha usne galti se giradiya tha aur jab meine woh paper khola toh wahi likha hua tha' neha answered him everyone was standing their shocked. 'ha guys mein pregnant hoon !' they all turned around finding kriya standing there 'mujhe pata tha neha tum logon ko bata degi , toh mein khud batarahi hoon mein pregnant hoon ok' kriya told them rey didn't know why but he was getting angry on her its like she never had a guilty face or anything he went up to her 'tum pregnant ho ? but kaise ?' he asked her feeling angry 'kaise matlab ? rey larkiyaan pregnant kaise hoti hai tumhein yeh toh pata hoga na ? yeh kaisa sawal tum mujhse pooch rhein ho ?' she answered him back rudely , rey knew she was faking it but he thought he would go along with it 'ha obviously tum jaise larkyon ko pregnant hona acha lagta hoga na , mere baad tumne kisi aur larkein se pyaar karliya hoga aur uske baad yeh !' pointing at her stomach he was being so rude with her , there tears in kriya eyes 'tumhein isse matlab ? aur ha mere peth mein kisi ka bacha hai , tumhari tarah nahi hai woh CASSANOVA' she had crossed her limits but rey was still trying to control himself 'really tum yeh mujhe kehrahi ho khud aisa kaam karke ayi ho aur mujhe tum kehrahi ho ' he replied back to her this made kriya really angry and she slapped him one, the rehearsal hall started to echo with the noise .. and she sat down there crying .. she started to tell them why she left college ? what was her reason to break rey heart and how she never meant it ?and then how her mother got her married off a few months later ? and then how that guy left her and went away with another girl and when he was gone it was too late because she was pregnant , she sat down crying her heart out because like rey she had gone through a lot and she was heartbroken rey ran up to her and consoled her , and he promised her he would look after her and the baby.

It was 9 months , kriya would get a lot of cravings and mood swings , poor rey was going mad behind her , but he still loved her and cared for her just like he always did 'rey mein itni moti hogayi hoon kya tum mujhse utna hi pyaar kartein ho? ' she asked in her kiddish tone rey was sitting next to her reading a book he started to laugh and he came closer to her ' agar tum isse zyaada bhi moti hogayi tab bhi mein tumse utna hi pyaar karunga' she smiled at him and hugged him , but her stomach would come in the way 'accha kriya tumhein kya lagta hai larka hai ke larki ?' rey asked her bringing her closer to him 'pata nahi agar larka then mein chahti hoon ke woh tumharein tarah ho aur agar larki toh phir meri tarah , but mujhe lagta hai larka hi hai ' she replied to him,'accha kriya mein soch raha tha ke larki ke liye abhi se shuru kardetein hai he said coming close to her' kriya started to blush , rey was moving closer to her kriya got the pillow and hit him with it 'whatever rey pehle yeh wala toh ane do' she smacked him one. Rey smiled at her , 'theek hai lekin mujhe abh kuch chayein kriya ?' kriya looked confused at him , then she saw him looking at her lips , she smiled and closed her eyes , rey came closer slowly , he put his hand on her stomach and gave her a small smooch 'i love you baatcutter' kriya smiled at him and kissed him on his forhead 'i love you too'


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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os
rey n kria had gone through so much
but at last they are happy n together
love the concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

unres😳

d os was brilliant👏👏

kria's past was sad

rey accepted her😳

d ending was cuteee😊

looovveedd ittt😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

jaaan love u yaaar...

its simply mindblowing

loved it yaaar...

beautifully penned!
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres on pg 1 and i ll send the pms by nite..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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emotional os... that was just amazing and fantastic loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...

it was cute...

loved it..

i wonder tu apni har story mei Kria ko pregnant kyu kar deti hai... 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simple,cute,sweet and lovly. . .
All in all. .
Awsome OS. .
Superb it is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww ...that was cute ...
the ending was soo sweet ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great OS
Its so adorable :)

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