THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 80

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

so NT is Poonam n Jeet's daughter or say Thakur's daughter

poonam's life is not less than a hell

d way thakur family behaved with poonam & Tara is d reason tara's current state

i think Nt had seen her family member in that hotel thats y she ran off from there so quickly

to be honest m loving Dev-Tara track more than Maan-Geet (i know it must be shocking but m loving devtara track a lot)

Originally posted by: heytal

Fabulous update Avi!!!

Starting with a brief idea about Savitri Devi's take on Dev-Tara

Just like any guardian who wishes that her children get serious in life and achieve the best and Tara's influence on Dev doing it perfectly👍🏼

Daadi takes her duties seriously. Both boys gain a good life due to her.

Bambi pushing I-star to thank the wolf😉

The upfront, honest and independent Tara thanking him and also returning the money he spent on her medication making her place in his heart unlike the other girls who are crazy for his status and money😕

She knows his favorite food and also doubled the quantity just for him

Aw! so sweet na😳

She would not have done it without the push from Geet. Her past will not easily allow her to trust anyone yet she has been drawn to him from the start. There is no joy than feeding someone you care for and she got that joy.

Dev digging in his fav food and NT watching all

slowly slowly liking entering their life😊

Dadi watching this give and take😉

and very carefully trapping Dev making him own up about the happenings between them the other day

Loved the way Dev honestly confided in Dadi😊

Pari's call ruined the moment, their chance to talk

Pari is the call of reality for NT. She needs to remain aware all the time that she can't afford to get entangled with him.

Their teamwork doing wonders

Tara's presence and dedication boosting up Dev too

😛

Tara's past out

Oh ! God it was so painful

Her Mom suffered so muchTara's Dad expired and she was forced to marry someone so soon and then he forced her and she conceived😭

Her in-laws so inhuman torturing a pregnant woman😡

Tara ran away from this hell and now struggling to make it on her own niche👍🏼

She nearly bumped into her Mom and fled

Her Mom did feel her presence

Dev appalled at her running away without informing

I guess we will get to know Tara's side of story in the next update😳

Avi very well written

Please don't run into finishing this ff for reasons best known

Its a wonderful concept and give it a well deserved end at its own pace

A sincere request from a reader and not a friend😕

Thanks Heytal. Not going to wrap up as long as I have at least a few readers. This update was my questioning point of whether the remaining will be accepted and the fact that so many did, makes me want to do it properly now.

Superbly written and perfectly blending the past and present

touches of humour, emotions and then the blow

Perfect!!!!

Thanks for the update

Waiting already

Soon...

Love u

🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

This comment is for chapter 20. Shukar hai...😆

First of all, let me tell you that I absolutely love the song you chose for this one. It perfectly added that feel to the chapter. ❤️

The dream left me shocked and pretty much like this ☺️ Haaye! Geet ko kabhi pata chala how Maan dreams about her then she is going to have a shock of a lifetime! 😆 Most of us are shocked by their thoughts...😉

Dadi's seekh was something very valuable. It's true that we sometimes need to hold back to get what we want. Sometimes, we have to stop trying so hard to reach out so whatever comes back to us is what is truly ours...

I laughed at the point when Geet was struggling with the baby and the shehri baby had her choti as well as her apple-like cheek in his qabza. And Maan's comment was sone pe suhaaga after that! 😆
I was thinking it was OTT but then socha, it works for her cribbing...😆
Maan has become smarter, hasn't he? I liked him ignoring her like that, no matter how much laddoos were phhooting in his mann. 😳

I couldn't quite pronounce 'Giiit' even when I tried. How does it sound?
He always says it like that ... esp in the beginning episodes, office wala..
And he is a businessman true to his form. Ek haath do ek haath lo. I likes it! 😆

It was so cute when Maan played with the baby, making him an aeroplane and all. And it is indeed something off the beat that a teenage boy adores babies and babies love him. It isn't very often that we see this scene...😲Every teenage boy I have in my family is like this. They love babies and babies love them..

So Geet is trying to reason out her own reactions to him, eh? It won't take long before she figures it all out and she'll have to accept it.

The picture that the three of them made with Geet holding the baby and Maan makin chu chu sounds while feeding him was absolutely heartwarming for me. Abhi hi pata chal gaya ke aagey jaa ke babies ko khana kaun khilaaye ga aur usse pakdega kaun. 😳

I actually noticed quite a weird thing and I don't know if you intended it to be that way or not but I can't stop myself from telling you. Up until now, Maan was a boy in Geet's eyes, a city boy. But when she sees him sleeping with the baby in his arms, she thinks of him as a man. For her, after this one adventure of babysitting the baby with him, his transformation from a boy to a man has happened...He became a man for her when he carried her up to your balcony. Sapne ka SRK, remember.

Congratulations to Sona ma'am and Yash sir for their good news. And congratulations to Maan for finding the confidence within himself that he'll now be able to talk to Geet, even if she doesn't talk. 😳

The hazels that were watching him with a question have me curious. I'll wait to know what exactly the question is.
The question is ... what will it take to drive him away...😕
Thanks for updating Avi! And the comment for the next one will come soon, I hope. 🤗

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

dat was amazing update dear

loved it so much

thanx fr d pm

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Page 110 it is. 😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kya baat hai...

dead and gone...😆

Maine kaha tha ke aaj comment karungi. 😳

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Hullo Shullo 😃

Hey Naureen! 😃

And Avi madam, itna kamzor dil hai kya? I'm on a commenting spree now starting from your story so dil ko zara thaam lo. 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Naureen...🤗

bacha le mujhe...

Mayyo ne do comment kiye hai...🤣

Mera dil rukne ko hai...😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Hey Naureen! 😃

And Avi madam, itna kamzor dil hai kya? I'm on a commenting spree now starting from your story so dil ko zara thaam lo. 😆