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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

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Posted: 13 years ago

I read this line while i was reading a book named- "life is what you make it" by "preeti shenoy". Really loved d title of the chapter so much, i felt writing something on it...
SO here i am, writing a piece on KR (though it has a SwaRon version too).. hope u guys like it!

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Part 1-

*pls imagine Rey talking to the audience wearing his light blue shirt n bakground poora black hain...*

NEVER BELITTLE LOVE

Rey: Log kehte hain that u should not dishonor love...
Kyunki its precious... and u never know when u will find true love again.
And u know what! MEINE WAHI GALTI KARDI!
Teen saal pehle, agar koi mujhse kehta ki "Rey, tujhe PYAAR ho gaya hain!"... i would laugh at that that person & tell him 2 get himself checked!
Par iss bar... Mein galat tha! Woh jaa rahi thi... Woh mujhe akela chodke Los Angeles jaa rahi thi... And the worst part---- MEIN CHAHKAR BHI NAHI ROK SAKTA THA USSEY!
Stranga na... jis ladki ke wajah se aaj meine pyaar main believe karna seekha hain... wahi ladki... Meri Best Friend... Meri Baat-Cutter... mujhe akela chodke jaa rahi thi!
U guys mite be wondering ki mein kiski baat kar raha hu, right? *rubs hands* ohk... here it goes...
KRIYA RAI PRAKASH!!!! *smiles* Sharon Rai Prakash ki twin (fraternal) sister... dono main zameen-asmaan ka difference... jaha ek taraf Sharon thi a bit girly-girly... waha yeh Kriya... uff! ekdum jhalli! U know... dressed up in torn jeans n tees... i had hardly ever seen her in dresses... woah! woah! i'm not sayg short skirts n micro-minis... pagal hain kya! na... woh toh rinni, simmi, neha, vishakha, aashi, taani & sneha (meri behen) ka department tha! i'm saying woh knee-length waali... flowers-type... ha...woh dresses... kabhi bhi nahi pehenti... pata nahi kyun! kabhi itna dress up nhai karti... u know plain n simple rehti... mmm... daance karne ka bahut shauk tha ussey! in fact, humare poore gang main hum sab, that is- me, Kriya, Swayam, Sharon, Neha, Vicky, Simmi, Nilesh, Bharat, Vishakha, Amar, Rinni, Aashi, Sneha, Taani & Shivam... hum sab dancers the... ha! ek cheez dono behne main jo common thi- EGO! uff! unko ek baar koi challenge kare na... especially Kriya ko... toh by god! uss bande ki toh tai-tai phish! kyunki dance main in dono behno ko koi nahi hara sakta tha! KOI NAHI MEANS KOI BHI NAHI! YAHA TAK KI... *looks here n dere, leans a bit forward & whispers* MEIN BHI NAHI! *goes back* but jo bhi kaho... Kriya ko challenge karne main jo mazza tha na... woh kahi aur nahi tha... *smiles*
Swayam: OYE SAALE! Sab kuch tu hai batayega ya kuch hum dono ke liye bhi chodega!
Rey: Aaao tum dono... intense couple...

*SwaRon enter together... Sharon is wearing the white salwar she wore for Nicole ma'am mehendi, has a mangalsutra around her neck, sindoor & red-white bangles & Swayam is wearing a white shirt with blue jeans.. both are smiling...*
Rey: Yeh lo bhai! aa gaye humaare St. Louis college ke *puts his one arm around Sharon & the other around Swayam* intense couple!
Sharon: Abe chuhe kahi ke! *hits Rey on the back of his head* hum dono ki chod aur Kriya ur apni bata... *facing the audience* pata hain... woh mere aur Swayam ke shaadi ke liye bhi nahi aayi... *pouts* kehti hain ki LA meri shaadi se zyada impt hain uske liye! gandi...
Swayam: haa... mein bhi... in fact, hum sab kaafi hadh tak surprised the jab Kriya ne hume bataya ki woh humaari shaadi ke liye nahi aayegi as LA usske liye zyaada impt ho gaya tha...
Rey: i knw... quite strange 4 every1... bcz, Kriya.. Sharon ki shaadi ko lekar bahut excited thi... u knw like hw any other sister wd be! so.. it came as a surprise jab ussne phone pe sabko bataya ki LA usske liye SwaRon ki shaadi se zyada impt hain!
Swayam: well u knw... Kriya... Kriya WAS different than other girls... she knew how to say NO, she knew where to draw the line, she knew when & where to put her foot down!
Rey: and she also knew karate! by god!! *massaging his arm* iss madam se *pointing 2wds Sharon* bet ke harne chakkar main, i wud end up gettg beaten up by Kriya... woh issliye kyunki Kriya ko karate seekhne ka chaska tha... bachpan se hi! n my bad luck... i used 2 drop her, pick her up & her punching bag... classses main jo bhi seekhti, mujhpe try karti! toh usskehote huye, har ladki St. Loius college ki safe thi! Literally main... all thanks 2 her karate, she would never need a "knight-in-shining-armour"...
Sharon: Except for those times when she used to be drunk!!!
Swayam: oh yeah! tab toh either me, Rey, Vicky or Shivam... hum paancho main se koi ek... actually, mostly Rey only hota tha Kriya ke saath! Taaki koi bhi random ladka usska fayda na utha sake...
Swayam: Par us din jo hua...
Sharon: woh bilkul bhi nahi hona chaiye tha!
Rey: n d worst part--- WOH SAB... MERI AUR KRIYA KI EK BET KE WAJAH SE HUA THA!!!

scroll down for SwaRon version...

Edited by izzie_alex - 12 years ago

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

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Posted: 13 years ago

SwaRon Version---

Part 1-

*pls imagine Swayam talking to the audience wearing his light blue check shirt n bakground poora black hain...*

NEVER BELITTLE LOVE

Swayam: Log kehte hain that u should not dishonor love...
Kyunki its precious... and u never know when u will find true love again.
And u know what! MEINE WAHI GALTI KARDI!
Teen saal pehle, agar koi mujhse kehta ki "Swayam, tujhe PYAAR ho gaya hain!"... i would laugh at that that person & tell him 2 get himself checked!
Par iss bar... Mein galat tha! Woh jaa rahi thi... Woh mujhe akela chodke Los Angeles jaa rahi thi... And the worst part---- MEIN CHAHKAR BHI NAHI ROK SAKTA THA USSEY!
Stranga na... jis ladki ke wajah se aaj meine pyaar main believe karna seekha hain... wahi ladki... Meri Best Friend... Meri Siren... mujhe akela chodke jaa rahi thi!
U guys mite be wondering ki mein kiski baat kar raha hu, right? *rubs hands* ohk... here it goes...
SHARON RAI PRAKASH!!!! *smiles* Kriya Rai Prakash ki twin (fraternal) sister... dono main zameen-asmaan ka difference... jaha ek taraf Kriya thi a bit girly-girly... waha yeh Sharon... uff! ekdum jhalli! U know... dressed up in torn jeans n tees... i had hardly ever seen her in dresses... woah! woah! i'm not sayg short skirts n micro-minis... pagal hain kya! na... woh toh rinni, simmi, neha, vishakha, aashi, taani & sneha (meri behen) ka department tha! i'm saying woh knee-length waali... flowers-type... ha...woh dresses... kabhi bhi nahi pehenti... pata nahi kyun! kabhi itna dress up nhai karti... u know plain n simple rehti... mmm... daance karne ka bahut shauk tha ussey! in fact, humare poore gang main hum sab, that is- me, Kriya, Rey, Sharon, Neha, Vicky, Simmi, Nilesh, Bharat, Vishakha, Amar, Rinni, Aashi, Sneha, Taani & Shivam... hum sab dancers the... ha! ek cheez dono behne main jo common thi- EGO! uff! unko ek baar koi challenge kare na... especially Sharon ko... toh by god! uss bande ki toh tai-tai phish! kyunki dance main in dono behno ko koi nahi hara sakta tha! KOI NAHI MEANS KOI BHI NAHI! YAHA TAK KI... *looks here n dere, leans a bit forward & whispers* MEIN BHI NAHI! *goes back* but jo bhi kaho... Sharon ko challenge karne main jo mazza tha na... woh kahi aur nahi tha... *smiles*
Rey: OYE SAALE! Sab kuch tu hai batayega ya kuch hum dono ke liye bhi chodega!
Swayam: Aaao tum dono... romantic couple...

*KriYansh enter together... Kriya is wearing the white salwar Sharon wore for Nicole ma'am mehendi, has a mangalsutra around her neck, sindoor & red-white bangles & Rey is wearing a white shirt with blue jeans.. both are smiling...*
Swayam: Yeh lo bhai! aa gaye humaare St. Louis college ke *puts his one arm around Kriya & the other around Rey* romantic couple!
Kriya: Abe chuhe kahi ke! *hits Swayam on the back of his head* hum dono ki chod aur Sharon ur apni bata... *facing the audience* pata hain... woh mere aur Rey ke shaadi ke liye bhi nahi aayi... *pouts* kehti hain ki LA meri shaadi se zyada impt hain uske liye! gandi...
Rey: haa... mein bhi... in fact, hum sab kaafi hadh tak surprised the jab Sharon ne hume bataya ki woh humaari shaadi ke liye nahi aayegi as LA usske liye zyaada impt ho gaya tha...
Swayam: i knw... quite strange 4 every1... bcz, Sharon... Kriya ki shaadi ko lekar bahut excited thi... u knw like hw any other sister wd be! so.. it came as a surprise jab ussne phone pe sabko bataya ki LA usske liye KriYansh ki shaadi se zyada impt hain!
Rey: well u knw... Sharon... Sharon WAS different than other girls... she knew how to say NO, she knew where to draw the line, she knew when & where to put her foot down!
Swayam: and she also knew karate! by god!! *massaging his arm* iss madam se *pointing 2wds Kriya* bet ke harne chakkar main, i wud end up gettg beaten up by Sharon... woh issliye kyunki Sharon ko karate seekhne ka chaska tha... bachpan se hi! n my bad luck... i used 2 drop her, pick her up & her punching bag... classses main jo bhi seekhti, mujhpe try karti! toh usskehote huye, har ladki St. Loius college ki safe thi! Literally main... all thanks 2 her karate, she would never need a "knight-in-shining-armour"...
Kriya: Except for those times when she used to be drunk!!!
Swayam: oh yeah! tab toh either me, Swayam, Vicky or Shivam... hum paancho main se koi ek... actually, mostly Swayam, only hota tha Sharon ke saath! Taaki koi bhi random ladka usska fayda na utha sake...
Rey: Par us din jo hua...
Kriya: woh bilkul bhi nahi hona chaiye tha!
Swayam: n d worst part--- WOH SAB... MERI AUR SHARON KI EK BET KE WAJAH SE HUA THA!!!

Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 13 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome one
interesting
update soon plzzz...n thnxx for the pm :) :)

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow . . . . Its superb... 😛
maine iss novel ka naam suna hai apni sissy se but kabhi padha nhi . . .
kriya is a karate kid, tomboy . . . . . Itni khatarnak 😆
poor rey . . . . . . Uska punching bag 🤣
& swaron married . . . Gr8 😎
but kriya did'nt care to show up . . . 🥺
on her sis's wedding . . . . Dats rude 🤔

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Hmm.. Interestin!!
Kriya,A tom boy.. A karate champ n Reyaansh her punchin bag..
Swaron r married :) n evn shivam n tani r a part of d gang.. Dance is her passion as always.. N simplicity her beauty !!

I lovd d idea how d story strtd wid Reyaansh speakin abt his lady love..
Kriya went to LA.. Hmmm buh she din turn up fr swaron's marriage.. Dis is so not kriya.. I mean thrs gotta b some reason..

Waitin fr d story to infold..
Do pm me :) wn u update nxt !