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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

My story is bit differen from others but he characters are same.

In this story Virman are married and have one years old daughter name Priya.Manvi was suffering with Cancer today was he operation and there were only 50% chances for her to stay alive.

In hospital

Manvi was ling on hospital bed and was waiting for the doctor to take her in the operation theater.

Everyone came and kissed Manvi's forhead and went away leaving Manvi,Virat and priya alone.

Manvi gave a weak smile to Virat and then looked at Priya who was staring a her with worried eyez however she don't know what was happening.A tear scaped from her eyez.Virat wipped away the tear and hugged her tightly not letting go.

So what do u guys think should i continue or not i want atleast 10 comments to gain courage for next update.Plz comment and thaks for reading

Part1&2

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3092832

part3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3092832&TPN=2

Part4

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3092832&TPN=3

Part5

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3092832&TPN=4

Part6

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3092832&TPN=5



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Posted: 13 years ago
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ha ha continue nd pm me if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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he he LOL

continue...and ya plz dont make manvi die...
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Seems interesting..
Do continue and pm me when you update...
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Manv:Virat.

Virman:hmm

Manvi:promise me that u will take care of Priya if i di

Virat:Shhh nothing will happen to u.U me and priya will all life a happy life till end.

Before Manvi could say something The doctor called her.Virat gave her passionate kiss on her lips and after that the doctor took her away.

It has been 2 hours and there was no information about Manvi.After some time docor came ou and said.

Doctor:I'm sorry but only a mirical can save her.She has just 20 mins to live.Ever one start crying especially

Jeevika but Virat was standing numb.He didn't cry nither outer a word.

Everyone went inside the room and meet Manvi and came out side now it was Virat and Piya turn.

Hope u guys like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one but next tym longer update nd thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, loving ur story been reading it on myeduniya forum it's rlly good u should continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i have some time so i'm updating it after this update i will update after 1 or 2 days .one more thing Piya was 6 months old not 1 month.

As Virat entered the room with Priya in his arms Manvi looked at them and said

Manvi:Virat i said i will not live any longer plz promise me u will take care of Priya after i left.

Virat:I promise manvi i will not only give her father but mother love also.

Virat laid Priya on Mavi's chest .Manvi kissed on Priya's head and took last breath

After sometime every one came inside the room Jeevika suddenly faints after watching Manvi laying lifeless on the hospital bed.Viren quickly pick her up and take her outside.While everyone was crying something happened

Stay tuned to know what happened.Okey Okey i'm not that selfish i'm telling what happened next in precap

PRECAP

While everyone was crying a low voice cam saying mama

Every one looked at Priya who was still laying on Manvi Chest once again said

Priya:Mama

And a tear escaped from her eyez because whenever she laid on Manvi's chest she hears her heartbeat and she loves her heartbeat but now Manvi's heart wasn't beating.

Q:Will Priya Bring Manvi back?

Ans:Ur comments and plz tell me the answer and the reason behind ur answer.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg manvi died plzz noo dont let her die nd yes priya will bring her mama back i dunno how y but she gonna bring...she will bring na???

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Mannu can't die...
Priya should definitely bring back her mumma...
Otherwise What'll happen to Virat and priya??
Great update.. Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Edited by vadhera - 13 years ago

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