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Posted: 13 years ago
Just finished reading all the parts... I loved it...
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Okies! I am back! But I cant promise when the next part will be updated :) Thanks all u lovely people :) it really means a lot to me... anyway guys...I have another idea for an FF...it is a psychological story on maaneet...I just want to know how many of you are interested in reading it...please let me know :)
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Originally posted by: bharadwajrad

Okies! I am back! But I cant promise when the next part will be updated :) Thanks all u lovely people :) it really means a lot to me... anyway guys...I have another idea for an FF...it is a psychological story on maaneet...I just want to know how many of you are interested in reading it...please let me know :)



welcome back dear
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Hello guys! I know you all are waiting for the update! So, here it is and me dancing all around the house! 66 likes! WOW!!! Yippie!Thank you all you lovely people! Now, I want whole of that 66 likes back and I mean BUSINESS 😉 So, give me the likes and long comments and I will be back with the update! Though I cant really promise when I am going to update next! So thank ya all! 😃


CHAPTER 13
Search for the damsel…
Maan was really happy that his sister realized her mistakes. She had begun to grow up…he thought. Still smiling, he kept his hopes high and circled around the town in search of the girl. It couldn't be much time since she left the house but she isnt anywhere? Where could she go...thought Maan as he was soon out of the city limits and was heading into the route of the jungle. He knew this was going to happen. That's why he had chosen his never failing jeep. He drove and drove but still couldn't see any sign of her. Now, Maan began to worry. 'Itni raat gair woh ladki is sunsaan jaga mein akeli?? Agar usse kuch hogaya to??' he thought hard but still somewhere, somewhere in his heart he felt nothing wouldnt have happened to her. He just didn't know what kind of an attachment he had with that girl.
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They were happy with the turn of the events. Now they had removed the thorn in their way and thus, wiped the fear of getting their sandals damaged….Seema was over whelmed with emotions that her good for nothing step daughter was dead and her own daughter was out of any harm. Now she could prepare for her daughter's marriage without any ado. But, there was tiny problem: her daughter had fought with the person she wished to marry and bringing him back to her daughter was almost next to impossible. Not that he had any interest in her. No! He didn't give her a damn but it was Rose who had interest in him, his looks and most importantly, his wealth. But thanks to her stupidity, she messed up all her chances of becoming his wife by losing herself to alcohol which he despised. Stupid girl, Seema thought. Yet she had a keen desire of getting her daughter married to that rich family where her rose could spend the time bathing in gold. But how was the question.
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Here, Naina was trying all possible ways to locate Geet: her life, but everything in this world had become a hinderance. She was miserably failing in every attempt she made and there was not a slightest trace of her best buddy. Even Rajiv had done everything he could but there was still no trace of her. If Geet was alive then she would have contacted her by now. Did that mean? No! No way! She couldn't believe that her Geetu was dead! There had to be a key to this lock and no matter how hard it was she would find it! With that determination she called it a night and went to bed.
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Now he had entered deep into the jungle. Thank goodness that he had brought his camping equipment with him. In case he didn't find the girl tonight then he had to camp here in the jungle itself. Maan had lots of practice in camping alone. Whenever he got disgusted with the fashion world and its cheapness, he often would find his solace in the arms of the beautiful nature. He would come camping to vent out all his frustration and the nature always provided him with tremendous peace. That's how he was able to click remarkable photos of the nature and wildlife and adorn the walls of his room and his mansion. But one thing that was really surprising was that no one had ever been into Maan's personal bedroom. Not even Annie (now, isnt tht surprising?) He had not allowed anyone into his room. He thought probably no one in this world would understand the theme of his room. Not even munni. (But little did he know that someone had already stepped into his life, the only one who had capacity of understanding Maan :P). That is why he had maintained the secret of his room. Annie would often be miffed that she wasnt allowed into her brother's personal bedroom (where did they sleep then is your question right? this room was created by Maan when he was like 20 or something and at that time Annie too had her personal bedroom of her choice, they slept together only when they were kids). Daadi often joked that Maan had immense treasure in his room that he feared someone would discover it but she full well knew whatever he had in there was a treasure to her grandson. That was one of the reasons why she respected him so much. He was a man who considered simplicity as beauty. Although he was the richest man for miles and miles around, he didn't have an ounce of ego in him. He was choosy in his lifestyle and that personal choosiness was assumed to be attitude by many who weren't capable of understanding the beauty of the thoughts that clouded the beautiful mind of this man. Daadi knew that you couldn't find another person like him and she was proud that she was Maan Khurana's grandmother.
Well, coming back to the present. The only light that was coming was from the headlights of Maan's jeep. The jungle was very dark and eerie. He was still searching everywhere but there was no sign of her. To make matters worse, there was a heavy downpour all of a sudden and by the time Maan had gone like 20 yards he was drenched to skin. The visibility had become very poor and there was no chance that Maan could drive his jeep no matter how powerful his eyesight was. He gave up his driving, parked his jeep and got down to camp the rest of his night against this thunder. He took out his tent and started pegging it. Finally, his tent was done and when he was about to go in when he was knocked by someone. He fell into the pool of water and that someone fell on top of him. He opened a bleary eye to see himself in front of the girl he was constantly looking for from past few hours. She saw him once with her beautiful blue green eyes and then without notice fainted on his chest. Maan was scared out of his wits. He slowly got up from the ground and picking up the girl in his arms, he went inside his tent.
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Ahem ahem...keep guessing! But I dont know what really happens next :P so sorry if I unknowingly burst your balloons.
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally maan found her



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Finally he found her i hope she's fine...
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awesome update
loved it dear
finally maan found her
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awesum update...!
finally maan found her...!

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thnk god her found her.

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