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oh the beast turned into a jaguar tonight...he had only one goal and that was to get back what was rightfuly his...it might appear that he was a thief in the night...but their was a very valuable possesion in that house and it belonged only to him...he didn't knock or ask permission...he lured his song out of her room with a bate that she could not resist...a threat to his own life...more than anything she cannot bare to see him hurt...if he got cought do to her resistance she would never forgive herself...once in his turf he had the upper hand...the beast would not spare her carelessness with her own life...the same life that was his...but at the sight of her face he remembered the moon and her beauty was unmatched...she tried to urge him to leave...but instead he managed to make his way with her around the house..through empty rooms, corners and balconies...they made witnesses of all these of too intimate moments between lovers...we could have seen the walls blush...had the lights been on...in all this our song could have easily been taken out of the house...and she would not have even noticed he had escaped with her...one day the beast will steal her away and she will be too lost in his eyes to know how she landed back in his arms...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very eye-catching Title πŸ˜† loved it
Maan chori chori chupke Mishti se milne gaya hehehe

he is now "Choro ka Raja" πŸ˜‰ always the best in anything he does hana? hehehe
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well written piece πŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sylllllllllllllllllllllllllllll .. .you did it again!!!!!!!!!!
I'm off to Maaneet LaLaLand after reading your BEAUTIFUL post!!!
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Certainly .. he was more like going in the room to get back what's rightfully his... not exactly like a thief .. but when he gets his song .. he flies away with her to every empty space in the house where he can be with her, stare at her beautiful moon-like face, tell her how much he loves her and longs for her... and she .. loving him equally let's him caress her face and stare at her .. to take in her face ..
they were playing a very lovely game of hide and seek today in which they weren't exactly being sought but hid from the rest of the world to be in each other's arms 😍
Lovely as usual Syl!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Super like! 😍

Liked the way he was stamping his intimate moments with his song in every nook and corner! And yeah you are so right, Geet was so totally lost in his eyes that she would not have realized if he had taken her out of the house! The Passionate Pied Piper! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anju7777

Very eye-catching Title πŸ˜† loved it
Maan chori chori chupke Mishti se milne gaya hehehe

he is now "Choro ka Raja" πŸ˜‰ always the best in anything he does hana? hehehe
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
well written piece πŸ˜›

i'm glad you liked it...πŸ€—....what does "chori chori chupke mishti se milne gaya " and "Choro ka raja" mean?...i don't understand hindi...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hehehe secretly Maan goes to meet his Mishti ⭐️
King of the thieves (choro ka raja)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Sylllllllllllllllllllllllllllll .. .you did it again!!!!!!!!!!

I'm off to Maaneet LaLaLand after reading your BEAUTIFUL post!!!
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Certainly .. he was more like going in the room to get back what's rightfully his... not exactly like a thief .. but when he gets his song .. he flies away with her to every empty space in the house where he can be with her, stare at her beautiful moon-like face, tell her how much he loves her and longs for her... and she .. loving him equally let's him caress her face and stare at her .. to take in her face ..
they were playing a very lovely game of hide and seek today in which they weren't exactly being sought but hid from the rest of the world to be in each other's arms 😍
Lovely as usual Syl!
Z

i loved that he sneeked into her room...it was one of the things i wanted him to do...but i wish beeji was not there...πŸ˜†...i loved to wa he kept dragging her...refusing to let her go...now he needs to steal a kiss...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasw

Super like! 😍

Liked the way he was stamping his intimate moments with his song in every nook and corner! And yeah you are so right, Geet was so totally lost in his eyes that she would not have realized if he had taken her out of the house! The Passionate Pied Piper! 😳

had nobody been awake...he probably would have made it out of the house with her...i loved that: "The Passionate Pied Piper"....i wish i had thought of itπŸ‘...i'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anju7777

hehehe secretly Maan goes to meet his Mishti ⭐️
King of the thieves (choro ka raja)

oooohhhh...i like that "king of thieves"...he's the king of many things...thanks for translating...πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@TM OMGGG i always love your posts😳 they are soo beautiful and meaningful! continue making them buddy!πŸ˜‰

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