Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 38

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Waiting 

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Waiting update soon

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Monday is here hoping to see an update (considering you might have finished ur vacation πŸ˜³) one update pleeessee 

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Hey All,


Got good time out, so here you all go. Happy with likes of enchanted. Please like and more comment here as well. This is tough story to bring out.


Here you go Chapter 21: Mr. Moody


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/31253

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Oh My goodness You took time and  gave the update .That is a lot for us..Thank you thank you a looottttt for giving the update...

Thanks a Lotttt ANU for this Update literally refreshing the browser for updates ...


Woo Superb Update...


Oh so maan is showing all this anger so that she can come and ask him and manofy him---so romantic..he wants her to care and pacify him..If she does i think he will immedietly melt...---Poor geet doesn't know all this ...imagining this scenario is soo good I want geet to calm him always and want to see mann being calm after.  I now  can understand maan well he is so damn good and want geet to himself.


He is so deprived of love  and care early in his life that he wants geet to fill all the void.


So much of maan's perspective is revealed in this update...  ---This is the missing part till now and you gave it with a bang...Loved maan now.


Geet thinking that he came to her as a responsibility on her ---good thing she is thinking in a right path now.(Even maan is truying to convince himself as geet is a resppnsibility).Geet should not take it as love other wise if anything goes wrong she will be the one who will be hurt the most.


Maan being moody since she didn't call him atleast once.. and Loved what yash said ---When all the family was asking her to move she didn't move but when maan said to move she without question moved---Obviously Yash will feel offended and get doubt about the whole scenario..Yash being angry with Meera is Valid.


Yash is right with all his doubts-suddenly out of no where he comes and says family and takes all on him,Meera/Brij avoiding  talking abouty geet to maan,geet obeying him.   ---wow so maan replied him back smoothly when yash reminded him about geet----So good of Maan --Love this maan now.


Aur You potrayed beautifully maan's bechainiya struggling to talk to her and get a glimpse of her.


so maan talked to pari about geet's beauty and her bossy nature so basically he is FIDA over geet's bossy nature  ah now got it he used to intentionally irritate her by showing off with pari (wah bahia wah So good Liking maan )--But back in the days all this was misunderstood by our geet and she became more gussa wali.


MAAN still remembering geet's  period time --so good and he still cares and loves her a lot this perspective says a lot about maan.( their relationhip was So beautiful confined between them , both wanting to share with each other only)--- So cute.


Now want to see how pari reacts to Geet and Seeing MAAN in furniture shop and how Geet is going to React to PARI---- πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅πŸ˜΅. πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”


Yeah Times have changed and now Geet and family thinks he is out of their league and when maan was no one Maan tought she is out of his League.


Past convo was really good she not leaving him when she is  dull.


No Words to Describe this Update.....Love you ANU for taking time and Giving us a beautiful update.

Edited by pulvi16 - 1 years ago
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Thank you sooo much the update was soo beautiful 😍 thanks for taking time out & updating you made my day with this

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 Beautiful update

                Geet shifted to apartment which Maan chooses for her someone want that apartment who is he 

 Geet knows he doing all this bz of her family and Geet family get to know about his visit they do not expect more from him Brij and Meera satisfied that Geet didn't have expectations from Maan now he is out of their league before he thought she's out of his league  

 Yash is angry with Meera on not once she talked about Maan and from his side it's look like he is very important member of family but not siblings not asking about Geet from him and avoiding taking name of Geet but he ask and taunt him but he just keep quiet but now Geet shifting bz Maan said and she without saying anything accept whatever Maan says he want to know about Maan more but he not asking from Meera 

 Maan getting irritate not getting her call he keeping him self extra busy otherwise his mind went to her he thought she not need of him now that's y she not calling him but he showed her in her first meeting he is not old Maan of her but that was his anger still she's in his heart and not leaving his mind Annie to complain about his busy schedule but he can't tell what troubling him and letting him in peace 

 Maan on Sunday just thinking about Geet and Annie saw him blankly seeing his mobile she want to spend time with him but he left saying important work and reached Geet apartment 

 Annie called Pari to have friends time her brother need break 

 Geet was so full bz of her monthly Maan came and he saw her and he immediately get to know her condition and he remembers her past conversation with him and how she only want him beside her in these days the past was lovely how both bond with each other and so close now he is angry and expecting from her to monofy him put poor Geet thinking he now not need her he not in love with her it's her one-sided love 

 Maan knows everything about her he make her get ready and took her for shopping and make her relax in car Geet get to know he knows her condition still brought her out but he knows she can't be alone in these days so he giving her company 

Pari came in shop and saw Geet and recognize her bz Maan have describe her  beauty in details to her many time and she knows his craziness about Geet and how he is in love with her that's y she consider him as best friend only she knows his heart have want only one and only Geet 

 But now how Geet will take this hope her jealousy will overcome her hesitation and  Maan get to know she still jealous of Pari it's mean she still same crazy Geet 

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 Eagerly waiting for next 🌟🌟

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Awesome part πŸ€—πŸ₯°β€οΈ,he is care for her,he remember her moods πŸ€—, nice update and thank you ☺️❀️