I was thinking about making this post from yesterday and I was curious as to all your thoughts...
The game is fairly simple... choose 1 scene to remove from the show (we'll pretend it never even happened) and explain how removing the scene would make the show ultimately better. As part of the solution, you can add mini-scenes.
For discussion's sake, no one is allowed to use the Dhara beating scene as we all want to remove the scene from the memory! Also, please don't repeat scenes! I am curious to see how many scenes we've been disgruntled over...
Here's my take:
Shiva and Dev Secretly Trying To Take Food despite Dhara telling them that they can only eat their wives' food.
My Problems with the Scene:
-These are two grown men who have been completely 'infantized' by the CV's to drive home the main message of 'Bhabi is the Best!'
-Dev acting this way is completely disrespectful to Rishita. He's loved her for 2 years. She left her family for him, but he is willing to leave her for some food? Makes no sense and makes their relationship seem a lot more flimsy with Rishita doing all the work and Dev reaping the benefits
-Thinking about it, Shiva acting this way didn't make complete sense to me either. Yes, he doesn't like Raavi and prefers his bhabi's cooking as that's all he has ever known. But, this one action seemed a little OTT to his initial character for my liking (feel free to argue). I don't mind an emotional Shiva when it comes to Dhara. But an infantized Shiva? Not really my cup of tea... Honestly his relationship with Dhara is a little OTT for my liking but that's another problem!
-Showing such a scene sets the stage that in the future, these brothers will do anything for their bhabi even if it means leaving their wives behind (I make this claim because Dev who has been in a relationship for 2 years acted this way too)
Solution to the Scene:
-Completely get rid of it. CVs should've just panned over to the 3 couples eating and Krish eating
Additions to the scene can include
-Showing a scene of Shiva eating Raavi's food while being disgruntled. He accidentally eats everything all while complaining and then they begin to argue, and after they tire out, they realize it's better to just order food. Then the CVs could've panned in on the kachori scene where Shiva makes sure Raavi eats (also, this scene could've informed Raavi just how much Shiva eats, which would've made today's dinner scene a little more meaningful as she now knows approximately what to serve him)
-Showing a scene of Dev eating Rishita's sandwiches and after a few bites, confessing that he's always preferred Gujrati cuisine over Western food. It could've been a meaningful scene where Rishita learns more about Dev's preferences (therefore, CVs could've added a dialogue of "Kheer for you Dev... because you like Gujrati cuisine" and again, tied both scenes)
I'll stop ranting now, but I am curious for all your thoughts!
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