Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 13

Love your story very much❤

Honestly I am short of words! The way you explored Bhavani's character today. I'm into tears. I just wish now Samrat comes back soon.

Arre, aap aa gaye, aap toh seriously Samru ke fan nikli,zyaada hi MIA hogayi thi aap.🤣

Waise,I loved this chapter, well balanced and amazing, loved each and every part,and each and every characters growth.❤️

Amazing,pls continue soon🤗❤

Great update ☺️

I love this backstory of Kaku , what she did is right ..if he cannot stand by his love in front of his fam.he never would in front of society . 

Looks like he is a fence sitter people pleaser type. This is the type I totally dislike as they are never consistent and you never know what they are thinking

Waiting to see will ever the fam. Will sleeve see this side of her 

Where is Sam 🙄

Thanks for writing this story. Again, I wanted this version of Pakhi. I wanted someone to write something about her where she is not a horrible person like she is on the show. I read your entire story and absolutely loved it. I loved the detailed back story for all the characters and how you have humanised them. 

I really wish Samrat returns though. I actually feel bad for Pakhi. 

Keep writing 💕🌼 Hope you updated soon 

Everyone got their share of happiness. Hope pakhi also  get.. Samrat should return soo. Loves update

Heyy.. What a story!! Amazing concept.

I read in one go

I must say you are brilliant writer👏

You beautifully portryed every charecters

Everyone has their own story

Nd Pakhi's emotions were amzingly penned down

Pakhi charecter has more layers. She moved on from past nd eagerly waiting for samrat

Sairat expressed their feelings

Loved their heartfelt convo

All are settled in their life.. U wrote everyone's journey to finding their happiness.. Pakhi waiting for samrat to start new journey.she writing for samrat was nice.. 

Over all amazingg👏

Continue soon

Finally you update 

Everything is going fine

The only problem is with Devi and Samrat 

I hope he comes back soon 

Please update soon 

After sooo long 

Beautiful amazing update ❤

Plzz cont krna

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