Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18

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Interesting start 

I totally agree with you that Pakhi & samrat deserves chance 

Please continue soon 

See now this is the actual way to go.

I felt sad and cried.for Pakhi.

I felt sad.for Samrat.

Pakhi isn't the only one responsible for the mess Virat is too and ig he gets a chance why not Pakhi. What's Samrat's fault? 

SaiRat and SamPatra both should be happy.

In the show obviously Pakhi is going to go from.bad to.worse but she needs layers not one dimensional.

I love the name SamPatra. 

Hey.. its really a very optimistic take on Pakhi's character👍🏼 Pakhi too is a flawed person like everyone...she deserves to be happy...loved her introspection of her past deeds and her hope of leaving it behind and starting anew👍🏼her character development and built is awesome here...pls continue and 'SamPatra' is ❤️

This is the most exciting story! Waiting for it to unfold! Update soon! 

Interesting start , looking forward.

Pls continue soon👍🏼

This is so beautiful

Pakhi here has been acting maturely of her age and that's Appropriate

A new pakhi with no hitting on virat and judging Sai at every turn would be great to read on

Loved the part where for the first time pakhi thought about samrat as her husband

The t-shirt thing was subtle yet intimate thing in one marriage

Would love to read more

Love love love this take. This is what I meant and wanted. She isn't perfect but she deserves her shot at love, a chance at redemption. I love it. Please update soon.

It’s fresh!!!

You should continue 

We’ll get to know the other side of pakhi, her desires, wishes, expectations 

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