Originally posted by: Alexia_WilsonMust say @Neera two great poetries you have posted my dear
Must say really touching especially the first one.
By looking at your poetry I realised you are free verse poet arent you?
Thank you so much di or big sis. BTW are you Indian ? Yes I am a free verse poet. I am pathetic in writing rhythmic poems. Thanks so much for your appreciation.
Originally posted by: BilliCat.@Neera : You are only 16 and you write so well. 😲 That is seriously so amazing !
Thanks, I am accurately 16.5 . I want to ask something if I want to post more poetries, should I post as separate post or include my previous post. I will try to be regular.
Originally posted by: VermilionThank you so much di or big sis. BTW are you Indian ? Yes I am a free verse poet. I am pathetic in writing rhythmic poems. Thanks so much for your appreciation.
Hi dear no need to thank me
You are such a great poetess the appreciation came by itself
Yup dear I am an Indian though my name sounds foreign😆
You can call me Alexia Di😊
Must say for free verse you are pretty good at it
Free verse is tad bit harder than rhythm in terms of meaning
But you nailed it, so good job there
Do write more like this
I have an sister in IF who is 15 she also writes like you but in rhyme
Maybe you guys can know eachother
Originally posted by: VermilionThanks, I am accurately 16.5 . I want to ask something if I want to post more poetries, should I post as separate post or include my previous post. I will try to be regular.
Nope dont post in the previous post everything
Reserve a post where the links of all your poetries will be
Keep seperate posts
And ya give the link of the reserved post to @BilliCat
Originally posted by: Alexia_WilsonHi dear no need to thank me
You are such a great poetess the appreciation came by itself
Yup dear I am an Indian though my name sounds foreign😆
You can call me Alexia Di😊
Must say for free verse you are pretty good at it
Free verse is tad bit harder than rhythm in terms of meaning
But you nailed it, so good job there
Do write more like this
I have an sister in IF who is 15 she also writes like you but in rhyme
Maybe you guys can know eachother
Sure I am eager to know about her. You can PM me about her. 😉
A dance of darkness or fright?
I dance in silent darkness of night
Singing to the shadows of fright
Passing those valleys of arch
Laying on grounds so dark
I cry myself to sleepless dreams
And listen to a victim's screams
Reminding me of my times of innocence
Before which I was pure in a sense
What was the fault done by me
Which he could but I couldnt see
He tortured my conscience insane
Ignoring brutally my pleads in vain
Originally posted by: Alexia_WilsonA dance of darkness or fright?
I dance in silent darkness of night
Singing to the shadows of fright
Passing those valleys of arch
Laying on grounds so dark
I cry myself to sleepless dreams
And listen to a victim's screams
Reminding me of my times of innocence
Before which I was pure in a sense
What was the fault done by me
Which he could but I couldnt see
He tortured my conscience insane
Ignoring brutally my pleads in vain
Really hitting straight to the heart...
Literally there is a urgent need to change people's mentality, not only in India but all over the wo World.
TBH when I got to know these type of incidents in my early teen days, my soul really got frightened. I cuss these people.
It's a great piece👏
Originally posted by: VermilionReally hitting straight to the heart...
Literally there is a urgent need to change people's mentality, not only in India but all over the wo World.
TBH when I got to know these type of incidents in my early teen days, my soul really got frightened. I cuss these people.
It's a great piece👏
Thanks my dear
IKR this world needs to change its perspective for that a difference should be made
never get scared because these hounds will feed on your fear
And yes mention the user dont qoute much if its and image or video. If its write up its ok
CURSE OF BEAUTY
A little hazel in her eyes .
Black kohl in her whirlpool deep eyes .
Dew on her lips .
A curve in her face .
Long eye lashes with nature's way .
All face crowned with goddess of beauty .
Beautiful in her way , she is .
Beautiful in people ways , she is .
She is just a girl , blessed with eminence .
But she is cursed with a blessing.
Her only scream is why she is Beautiful .
When she becomes a exception .
When she is a prize .
When she was just impressed by people,
Not befriended .
She gets frightened when people take care of her.
She gets frightened when she knows ,
That she is alone in a crowd.
Everyone wants her.
She get scared what if her beauty is ,
Just a lust for some.
She get scared when every touch she felt become strange.
She get scared when gazing turn into staring.
She get frightened when flirting turn into stalking.
She hates her beauty.
She got scared what if she was unable to identify true colours of others .
She get frightened when the city in which she born feels creepy.
She gets frightened when even her so called brothers becomes her harasser.
She gets frightened when there is no safety for her.
She cried in a corner, she can't even pray as there are million prays like her are unheard.
She holds herself everytime.
She got imprisoned in herself only.
Her truth, her innocence is captured in cages.
Even god is not able to save her.
Her screams will remain Ambrose ,
In the depths of universe.
When her roc get shuttled
In darkness of hell.
She can't smile now.
She was burned to death
By demons of humanity.
She will search for a way to
Save others.
But her attempts will go unheralded.
Her screams will gather one day
, either this humanity will destroy
Or all the offenders will burn in fire of her ire ( anger)
By Neera
Such an agony filled poem my dear
I am shocked you are 16 and so well versed
Loved every part of it and got heartbroken
But I must say its really great
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