Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 12

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing👍🏼

Chalo aj chota update nhi tha bahut wait kiya maine iska continue soon

Thank you! Khushi hui ki aapko yeh pasand aaya!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you! I'll try to update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Amazing part

Nice conversation between dadi and guddu

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabana0786

Awesome update!.. 👌 Well whatever Akshat is planning, it better be something good because guddan seems adamant with her decision even though she still loves her Jindal family..

Thank you so much! Yes Guddan is still adamant on her decision! Let's see what her Jindal -Sahab will do!

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved the way Guddan confronted Jindal Saab👏👏

Very long and tough route ahead for our AJ😉

Thanks updating😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey guys, guess whose back! Its your girl, Pooh! Anyone missed me? Yeah.... Yeah? No? Okay.... I know, its been a long time,I'm sorry but I've been a bit busy. "Kajal",this is specially dedicated to you since you told me to update a week ago and I'm updating it now..... Anyways, let's get straight to Part - 10.

The next day, Guddan woke up next to Dadi. Her heartfelt a little at ease as now she had cleared things between her and Dadi. But what about her relationship with Jindal- Sahab? She doesn't know. Now only God knows what's in store for her now. Guddan went to her room to freshen up. After that, she went directly downstairs. Durga, Lakshmi, and Saraswathi were in the kitchen. Guddan came to them.

L: Aree, Sasumaa... Good morning!

G: Good morning Lakshmi-ji!

Du: The food will be ready soon. Aap betiye... I'll bring it there...

G: Kya? Matlab hum late hogayi! Sorry Durga-ji.... aage se aisa nahi hoga.....

Du: Guddan- Sasumaa aap kaise baat kar rahe hein? You are not late, Don't worry.... And I understand that the situation that we're currently in.... Actually we should be serving you. You have done so much for us that we all neglected it just like that... But we promise that we would gain back your trust and make you accept us, right Saru?

The three ladies looked at Saraswathi. Of course, they knew she hadn't changed a bit.

Saraswathi (S): Haan haan...... Sahi kahan aapne, Durga-di!

With that, she walked out of the kitchen with some plates.

Guddan just shook her head. She has no hopes for her. But she has to be a bit careful around her.

G: Aap log usse thoda careful rahna.... Kya pata woh ab bhi uss Antara ki saath hein...?

Durga and Lakshmi nodded. They went to the dining table and saw everyone,except Jindal- Sahab.

D:Lalla abhi tak niche nahi aaya?

G: Nahi Dadi....!

L: Sasumaa, aap une bulasakti hein?

G: OK...... JINDAL-SAHAB!!

Everyone laughed. Guddan smiled as they were a bit happy. She wanted to make them happy,till she was here.

Du: Guddan- Sasumaa, Lakshmi meant that you go to his room and call him.

G: Hum kaise.....

D: Guddan beta, please go naa.... Lalla ko lekar aana...

G: Ji.... Dadi... I'll be right back...

As Guddan turned to go fetch her Jindal-Sahab,she failed to notice the smirk on Dadi's face and the hi-fi between Durga and Lakshmi.

Guddan reached his room. In the past,it was their room. She opened the door and got inside.

G: Woh sab aapko niche nashte-----

Guddan was shook. There was her Jindal-sahab, , in just a bathrobe. She quickly turned around.

G: How indecent!

A: Indecent? You were the one that barged inside!

Guddan facepalmed. He is right! God, she's such an idiot!

G: t-Toh....! That day, you only told me that when you want to get dressed, you have to lock your room.

A: Really? Now you are blaming me?

G: I'm not blaming you! Just telling you a fact! What if someone else came here instead of me? What would they think?

Just then Guddan felt a husky voice beside her ear that made her spine shiver.

A: But you came for me,right? When you are with me,why would I need someone else?

Guddan turned around so quick and saw Akshat mere inches away from her. She was about to fall but Akshat held her by her waist. She unknowingly grabbed his shoulders. Time stopped for them. Guddan gazed at him and so did her Jindal-Sahab. It has been a long time since, they were this close. They could feel their breaths. Guddan could feel her heart beating fast and her body getting hot. She wanted to go but couldn't. An unknown source was stopping her.

A: Mein tumse behad pyaar kartha hu, Guddan!

Guddan's eyes widened. A straight confession? Now?

G: Dekhiye----

A: Pata hein, mujhe!

Guddan looked at him a bit shocked.

A: I know that I did a huge sin. I know that I didn't trust you when you needed me the most. I know that I let my past guilt affect me. I know that I failed you. I know that you will divorce me, but I also know that I love you and I always will. I will prove my love to you Guddan, and that's your Jindal-Sahab's promise, whether you like it or not, I don't care!

G: Aap ko lagta hein aap se ho payega?

A: Mujse yeh ho payega.... And I'll risk everything.

By then, the grip on her waist was loosened. Guddan stood on her own.

G: It's not gonna be easy, AJ!

A: I promised, right? Not AJ, but Your Jindal-Sahab will make it happen.

Guddan doesn't know but she felt happy hearing his words. He's going to risk everything, for her! Wouldn't everyone feel happy when the person you love wants to risk everything and be with you! But she won't let it be that easy. She wants to make sure that from now on, no third person can come between them.

G: You get ready and come downstairs.

Saying so, she went downstairs. The family was waiting.

G: Woh, Jindal-Sahab, ready ho raha hein! He'll come soon. Let's start our breakfast. App log late bhi hojayega....

Everyone nodded and started their breakfast. Akshat came downstairs after 15 minutes. Kishore, Vardhaan, and Angad had just left. Akshat sat in his seat and saw that Guddan hadn't touched her food. Was she waiting for him?

D: Beta, tumne kuch nahi khaya?

G: Woh, Dadi, hume bhook nahi lag rahatha,pehle...... Ab bhook lagraha hein!

Saying so, Guddan started eating her food. Akshat smiled. She was giving him a chance. And he will use this wisely, without any mistakes.

D: Lalla, Guddan... Tomorrow morning, the Pandit will come to decide the marriage arrangements. Everyone should be present here tomorrow. Kishore, Vardhaan aur angad se keh dena.... kal keliye...

A: Ji maa....

Akshat looked at Guddan.

Pehle adhoora rehgaya tha, ab poora karega! Yeh, mera vaada hein Guddan!

And that's it for Part - 10. Was it short? I'm sorry if it is, but I'm kinda busy these days now, and I don't want this FF to be rushed. I hope you guys liked this Part and I'll try to update as fast as I can, just not regularly! Just bear with me, please. So do keep loving AkshAn and this FF!!

Be sure to like and comment because I could use some of those right now!

Till then, this is Pooh, signing off~ Toodles!🤗

Ps: Sorry for grammatical errors and typos!


Edited by PrincessPooh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

It was good

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Its amazing as always

Jindal sahab is in mission to impress and seduce his guddiya 😆

Akshan marriage

Will wait for the next part continue soon

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