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Samaina ff - Page 7

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Part 2(B)

Sameer kept himself busy the whole day..he came back at 3 in the morning..and of course woke up at 6 am..


Location:Bandra
Time:6:00 am
Outside maheshwari house

Dresses in white t shirt and black track pants..

"Aaj to meri naina mujhe zarur dikhegi..aaj jaldi bhi jaa raha hun main.."

"Aaj naya din hai...aur main umeed kabhi nhi chodunga..mera dil keh raha hai ki vo mere aas pass hai..lekin chhup kar baithi hai..jab milegi na tab bhut gussa karunga main..kyu gayi thi uss din vo..bina mujhe kuch kahe..sab baatein puchunga..main na pura ek din...nhi 2 din usse pakadke baithunga..itna kaske gale lagaunga na usse..."

And he started his journey of finding naina..

Location: Agarwal house

Naina: pooja di..utho na...
Pooja di..utho bhi..
Aapne bola tha na ki aaj hum saath mein vo lodha group ka banaya hua new park mein jaaenge
Chalo na jogging karne chalte hai..
Pooja turned and covered herself in blanket..
Naina:offo..ye to nhi uthne wali aaj..main hi chali jaati hun..


Naina saw that chachaji was reading the news paper in the living room...
" baat karu ya nhi.."
Chachaji noticed naina..and he turned his face..
"Jab vo saamne se baat hi nhi karenge..jawab bhi nhi denge to kyu koshish kar rahi hun main"
Her eyes were moist..

And she went to kitchen to have some water..while going back she noticed a vessel on the stove..and wondered what it could be..
She moved towards that direction and saw tea in that vessel..
"It smells like ginger tea"
"Adrak wali chai...chachaji ki favourite"

Flashback

Naina: ye lijiye chachaji chai..jaisi aapko pasand hai..adrak wali..
He takes a sip..
Chachaji: wah naina..humesha ki tarah..
And they both say it together: ekdum perfect..

Chachiji and preeti standing in the corner adoring both of them..
Chachaji: adrak wali hai isiliye nhi ye meri gudiya ne banayi hai isiliye bhut pasand hai..samjhi..pta nhi mera tab kya hoga jab tum padne ke liye bahar jaaogi..tab kaun banakr dega mujhe ye wali chai..tumhari chachi ko to kuch aata hi nhi hai..kabhi chawal kam ubal leti hai..to kabhi roti jyada paka deti hai..
Naina giggles..
Chachiji:kya kaha aapne..
Chachaji:maine..maine kahan kuch kaha..main to bas ye chai ki tarif kar raha tha..kyu naina..
Naina: Controlling her laughter..haa chachiji..chachaji to bas..
Chachiji: haa sab samajhti hun..
Chachaji:haa sab samajhti to ho..samajhdar jo ho bhut..haina meri sridevi
Chachiji: vo to main hun..
Preeti: mummy aapko ghuma rahe hai papa..point par aao na aap mummy..papa aapke khane ki burai kar rahe the..
Chachaji: aare preeti..shaitan ki nani..fasaegi ek din..
Chachiji:bhagwan jhooth na bulaye.. preeti sahi keh rahe hai..kya keh rahe the aap btaiye zara

Chachaji: ab bas meri ye chai thandi ho jaaegi..mujhe aaram se pine do..
Chachiji: haa haa baki sab chije ek taraf..aapki chai ek taraf..dekh lena naina..jab tu chali jaaegi na padne..tab tere chachaji meri parade karva denge..baar baar chai acchi nhi hai aisa kahenge..vo kya kehte hai..peerfactt..haa 
Preeti: mummy perfect bolte hai usse..
Chachiji: haa haa.
 vohi..perfect..bolenge perfect nhi bani hai..
Preeti: mummy kya aap dono ne chali jaaegi chali jaaegi laga kar rakha hai..bol to aise rahe ho jaise humesha ke liye chali jaane wali hai..aise mat kaho..
And she hugs naina from behind..
Naina: main to aap logo ke bina reh hi nhi paaungi..


Flashback ends..

Her eyes teary with a slight smile on her face..

"Sahi kaha tha tabhi maine..na tab reh paayi thi aap logo ke bagair..na aaj reh paa rahi hun.."
"Aur ye chai to kabhi mera picha chodega hi nhi..humesha purani baatein yaad dila deti hai"
"Aaj to late hogaya iss chai ke chakkar mein..nikalti hun jaldi"

As naina came out of the kitchen..Preeti came running like a huricane and accidently bumped with naina..and fell on the ground..
Naina/preeti : aah/ouch

Chachaji ignored naina..and helped preeti

Chachaji: aare beta aaram se..lagi to nhi kahin..thoda sambhalkr chala karo..yahin agar sidiyon par girti to sar phut jaata..

Preeti: nhi lagi kahin..
She badly wanted to help naina get up but chachaji dragged her away and she kept looking at her way..

Chachaji: accha chalo idhar aao baitho mere saath..aur btao itni jaldi kaise uth gayi ye kumbkaran 

Naina tried getting up..but she slipped and again got hurt..
Till then the maid came and saw her on the ground..

Chachaji kept talking to preeti but preeti was worried about naina

Shalini : aare didi aap niche kaise gir gaye..

Naina:vo bas pair fisal gaya

Shalini: aaiye
Shalini helped her..
Shalini: aapko jyada lagi to nhi na
Naina: nhi nhi di..aap jaaiye..


Chachaji: aare preeti..kabse tumse baat kar raha hun main aur tumhara dhayan hi kahin aur hai..

Preeti: sorry papa..aap kahiye na kya keh rahe the

Chachaji: ruko main apni chai lekr aata hun kitchen se..
Preeti: ek min..aapne chai banayi
Chachaji: haa banayi to kya
Preeti: nhi kuch nhi..

Naina faced difficulty in walking..and slowly and slowly she moved out of house..


Location: park
Time: 7:00 am
Sameer: lagta hai ye new park hai..yahan aayi ho shayad..lekin aaj to 7 baj gaye..

Naina's pov

It was already 6:45..I was late..but I wanted to stay away from the house for atleast an hour so that I can stay away from the pain..No I am not running away from the difficulties..but..it is important for me to have an hour for myself in the whole day to decide what to do 
I'm so confused I don't wanna get married 
How can I share my life with any one How can I give someone that place in my life No I cannot
No one can be my priority
My only priority is my career I have to work hard and achieve more 
Only if that person will let my career be the priority then only I can say yes to marriage.
But what will I do when he will..
When he will touch me..when he will..
Ughhh..
Main kaise handle karungi ye sab..nhi main ready nhi hun abhi
Relax naina relax..I will think about it later...jogging par focus kar..
Aaj meeting bhi hai lawyer ke saath..

I started walking and observing the surrounding near me..This park was filled with people of different age groups..on one side I can see a father -daughter having a walk..I guess she is only 6 years old..they looked so beautiful together..sometimes I feel unlucky that I can never have experience of this beautiful relationship..I wish they stay the same..
Here on my left there is a group of people gossiping..hahaha..
Aunties to subah subah bhi chup nhi reh sakti hai..
And moving further I came to an isolated place..it is so peaceful here..I can feel a familiar..umm..a familiar smell..
This breeze is so familiar..it feel like..ugh..it reminds me of..it reminds me of HIM
Kya hogaya hai aaj mujhe..I think I should leave..

Sameer's pov
As I was moving around the park with naina..I mean with her photo in my hand..i suddenly felt that the winds changed..it was a familiar feeling..and I saw a girl standing at a distance..her back facing me..she looked so familiar..it felt like I know her..is she..is she naina..I looked into the photo..and then looked up..and she disappeared...and I turned to leave the park when the wind blew my photo away..the photo danced with the wind..but it blew away from me..I started running behind it..and after making me run about 500 meters it fell down beside a girl..
And I went to take my photo back..when I again felt that I was close..she was here somewhere..I started looking around..and she wasn't there...it was 7:45..
Ab to chali hi gayi hogi vo..

Naina's pov

As I reached back to the entrance of the park..a paper settled beside me..I thought to throw it in the dustbin..but I was running late so dropped the idea..and after taking three to four steps I again felt that familiar smell..I turned..and saw a man taking that paper..he will probably throw it in the dustbin..and I left..


I reached back home..I saw preeti pacing in the living room..I was already late..so decided not to disturd her and continue with my work..

Sameer's pov

As soon as I entered the house with naina in my hand..Nanaji snatched away the photo.
Nanaji..ye kya..photi vapas dijiye,I said.
Bilkul bhi nhi..tu humesha late aata hai to teri yehi punishment hai..tujhe ye photo nhi milegi,nanaji said.
Ye kya baat hui nanaji please de dijiye na vaise hi bhut kam tasveere hai, I said making a cute puppy face
Nahi ye natak mat kar mere saamne, agar jaldi se aakr mere saath breakfast kiya shoot par jaane se pehle to hi dunga photo, nanaji said
Nanaji lekin shoot ke liye late ho jaaega na, I said
Photo chahiye na, nanaji said
Haa chahiye, jaa raha hun nahane fir breakfast karunga fir hi jaaungi shoot ab khush,I said
Haa bhut khush, ab jaldi jaa teri naina ka photo main aise hi sambhalke rakhungi jaise tune rakha tha..jaa jaa, nanaji said
Haa jaa raha hun, I said


I took a bath and went downstairs..
At the dining table

Bhut khush lag raha hai aaj,kya hua, nanaji asked
Haa nanu, aaj bas accha lag raha hai..aise lag raha hai jaldi mil jaaegi meri naina mujhe..,I said
Haa aise hi khush reh to jaldi mil hi jaaegi..ye le teri naina ki photo..,nanaji said

I took it from him..rolled my paratha...hugged him.. and I ran from there..
Thank you nanu, I said
Aare nashta..nanaji said..
Kar liya maina , I said as I reached the door


The next morning..

Time: 6:00 am
Aaj main pali hill ke paas hi jogging karta hun..
After jogging for 45 mins..I sat down in the near by bench..
Naina kahan ho tum..kash maine vo galti ki hi na hoti..to mere paas to hoti tum..
I noticed a couple sitting on the next bench..a teenage couple..they looked so cute..
Holding each others hand.. they were discussing about the weather,about some random movie and what not..
He bhagwan..Aaj somvar hai..hum kaise bhul gayi,said the girl..
Aare to usmein kya hua.., said the boy
Aare aaj somvar hai matlab mandir jaana hota hai mumma ke saath..aur late hogayi to mumma dategi..main to chali tumse college mein milti hun bye..,said the girl in one breath..kissed him on the cheek and left..
Aare suno to, said the boy..


And it clicked me now..
I'm so stupid..aaj somvar hai naina to mandir gayi hogi na..london mein to mandir tha nhi to vahan nhi jaati thi..main bhi na kaise bhul gaya main..abhi jaata hun..


Lekin Ek min..kaunse mandir jaau..yahan to kitne mandir honge..shiv ji ka ya ganpati ji ka..he bhagwan ab aap hi kuch kardo..

I went to the nearest mandir..not to find her but to pray..
I joined hand closed my eyes as she had taught me..


Flashback

Sameer:naina tum yahan kyu laayi ho mujhe..main bhagwan mein nhi maanta
Naina: kyu nhi maante
Sameer: bas nhi maanta..
Naina: bolo..
Sameer: tum ye chodo na hum paas wale juice center mein chalte hai..subah subah vahan acche aur healthy juices milenge..aur khaskr avla ka..mere inn sundar balon ke liye..
Naina: ohh to ye hai tumhara raz..acche balo ka..alva..wah..ab to chalna hi padega..tumhare inn balon ke liye..lekin usse pehle yahan mandir mein darshan karenge..
Sameer: nahin main nhi jaaungi..tumhare ye bhagwan kabhi kisiki nhi sunte..unke kano tak bhi aawaj nhi pahunchti humari..
Naina: chup..pahunchti hai aawaj..kano tak bhi aur dil tak bhi..lekin dil se baat ki gayi hi tabhi hi pahunchti hai..
Sammer: accha..tumhe kaise pta
Naina: bas pta hai..jaise mujhe ye pta hai ki iss buddhu bacche ko aloo paratha bhut bhut pasand hai..
Sameer: tumhe kaise pta naina ki mujhe aloo paratha bhut bhut bhut pasand hai..kab pta chala tumhe..
Naina: jab tum kal aloo ke paratha ko aise muh kholkr dekh rahe the..aur jab tumhara muh utar gaya tha jab tumhe khane nhi mila tha..
Sameer: ohh..smart..
Naina: vo to main hun..ab chalo jaldi mandir..
Sameer: nhi..
Naina: chal rahe ho tum..bas final..
Sameer: nhi nhi nhi
Naina: dekho agar chale na to main tumhare liye kal aloo paratha banakr laaungi
Sameer: sacchi
Naina: haa baba sacchi
Sameer: chalo fir khadi kyu ho idhar..
Naina: suno..main chahti hun ki aaj tum mere liye dil se bhagwan ji se baat karo..kuch mango nhi..bas apne dil ki baat unhe btao..bas unse baat karo..please..
Sameer: thik hai..par ye sirf tumhare liye..
Naina smiled..
Naina: thank you..
Chalo..
Naina: ab aakhein band karo haath jodo..aur baat karo..

Flashback ends


(Tears flowed non stop from his tired eyes..he felt weak..he felt incomplete..he could not stand anymore and fell on his knees..

Eyes still closed..hands still joined..)

Ganpati ji..pure maharashtra mein to aapko sab bhut maante hai..khas kar mumbai mein..yahan to aapke bina koi kaam ki shuruvat tak nhi hoti hai...aapko to vighnaharta kaha jaata hai na..aap please mujhe meri naina de dijiye..
Bappa..naina ne kaha tha ki aap sabki sunte ho agar dil se baat kiya jaaye to..please ganpati ji aap mujhe naina se milva dijiye..main promise karta hun ki main usse dukh kabhi nhi pahunchaunga..sacchi..
Please bappa please..
Ab nhi hota aur..kya naina mujhe sach mein nhi milegi..aap mujhe uss galti ki itni badi saja denge..iss vajah se nanu ko bhi bhut dukh hota hai..maine apne aap ko badalne ki bhut kosish ki..aur kuch hadd tak bada bhi hai khud ko
Naina to aapse har somvar milne aati hogi na..aur maine to itne mahino mein usse dekha tak nhi hai..

After staying there for 20 mins..I wiped my tears..and left..

As I reached home I saw my mom there...she was so happy to see me..
I was meeting her after 3 months..she was here to surprise me...with my so called dad and their little daughter..but I was still not happy..

Deepika hugged me tightly..my mom hugged me..I wish I could tell her how I feel right now..

She was talking about some thing..but I don't know what..nothing registered in my mind..
My mind was only occupied by HER..
I want her back...I need her..I love her...I love you Naina..I love you and I miss you..

I took a quick shower and changed into comfy clothes..there was no shoot today..my mom wanted to spend the whole day with me..but I was not interested in anything..and refused it saying that I was not well..
At lunch..
I was not able to swallow a morsel..but had to..
Sammer hume tumse aur papa se ek zaruri baat karni hai, said mummy..
Kaho na beta , said nanaji
Papa vo vivek ke ek bhut khas dost hai..yahin rehte hai mumbai mein..bhut acche khandan ke hai..aur humara sameer abhi bada hogaya hai..apni zimmedari sambhal raha hai..main chahti hun mera sameer settle hojaaye, said mummy
I gave her a slight smile
Haa vo to hai..lekin main samjha nhi..tum kehna kya chahti ho settle hojaaye matlab, nanaji asked
Papa vo main chahti hun ki hum sameer ka rishta leke jaaye unki beti ke liye bhut acchi ladki hai..padi likhi hai..Indore se Interior designing aur london se fashion designing ki hai..usse to london main scholarship mili thi papa..uska parivar bhi bhut accha hai..aap unki badi beti ke shadi mein bhi chale the mere saath..tab to vo log middle class family ke the..lekin ab..kuch hi saalo mein itne ameer hogaye hai..jabse yahan mumbai shift hue hai tabse jab hum gaye the na unki badi beti shadi mein tab shayad vo london mein thi isiliye hun usse nhi mil paaye the..lekin vivek mile hai usse..unhe to bhut pasand hai, mummy said
The happiness was visible in her eyes..
I stood up..I cannot even think of marrying other girl and how can she even say this..before I could speak..nanaji signalled me to be quiet..
Dekho vishakha sameer abhi chota hai..aur abhi to career shuru hua hai..to filal rehne dete hai,nanaji said
Aare abhi kahan shuru hua hai..hogaye hai kuch mahine..sab thik se bhi chal raha hai..meri baat maniye aap yehi sahi umar hai shadi ki..aur vo ladki sach mein badi pyaari hai..bhut sundar bhi hai...uska naam ...,mr.somani said
Thik hai lekin main abhi shadi nhi karna chahta..samajhe aap, I said
Ye kya tarika hai sameer, humne to bas shadi ki hi baat ki hai..aur tum aise baat kar rahe ho..hum to bas chahte hai tum settle hojaao.., said mummy
 Mujhe shadi nhi karni bas..aap apna ye rishta apne pyaare rohan bete ke liye lekr jaaiye..uski bhi shadi ki umar hogayi hai..do saal se aapka business bhi sambhal raha hai..mere paas nanaji hai..jab mujhe shadi karni hogi to hum koi ladki dhundhkr kar lenge.., I said..

Sameer, vishakha screamed
And I left the house taking the car keys..
I was driving..I don't know where I was going..
Main kisi aur ladki se shadi karne ka soch bhi nhi sakta..kash main mummy ko bta pata naina ke baare mein..lekin vo kabhi nhi samjhengi mujhe..ulta kamiyan nikalengi mujhmein hi..lekin shadi to main bilkul bhi nhi karunga..while driving I didn't realised when I crossed bandra and reached santa cruz..I took a u turn to go back..and now I noticed the pertrol pump om the opposote side of the road..oh god..pehle to dikha hi nhi mujhe ye petrol pump..aaya to ussi taraf se...and I saw her..I saw naina..in a car..I got out of the car in a hurry..and while in the process I got hurt..but I wanted to go meet her..the black mercedes car..yes she was definitely naina..I tried crossing the road..and started screaming her name..but..the car left before I could reach it..

Naina's pov

After finishing my meeting in santa cruz I went to petrol pump..to refuel my car

When I started my car to go from there..I heard a familiar voice..I straightened..no...it isn't true..

Ye nhi ho sakta..mujhe uss aadmi ki aawaj kyu sunayi de rahe hai..
Ugh..I closes my ears..
Mera vehem hoga..and I left as fast as I could..


Sameer's pov

Ye naina hi thi..maine kaha bhi tha nanu se vo yahin hai..naina mili bhi aur nhi bhi mili..

I reached back home..i went straight into my room to avoid any conversation with my mom and her husband..

Aaj aise lag raha ki firse kuch kho diya maine..jaise kuch chut gaya mere haath se..

Outside my room there was definitely a conversation happening..I could hear it..

Mat jaao andar, nanaji said
Kyu nhi jaa sakti main baat karti hai mujhe usse aap mana kyu kar rahe hai, mummy said..
Maine kaha na vishakha..tumhe usse baat karni hai to kahin bhi kar sakti ho..bas uske kamre mein mat jaao, said nanaji
Lekin kyu papa,asked mummy
Accha isse chodiye..aap mere saat aaiye..aap hi btaiye mujhe ki kya kharabi hai iss rishte mein, said mummy..


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Vishakha took nanaji in the living room..
Vishakha: Ye dekhiye papa ye envelope mein ladki ki photo hai..aur ye uska bio data..
Dekhiye papa Sameer bada hogaya hai..apni responsibilities samaj raha hai..pure bhi kar raha hai..aise time par usse jeevan saathi milegi to usse sahara milega..
Nanaji: main samajhta hun vishakha..lekin
Vishakha: lekin kya papa..bhut acchi ladki hai..aur itni acchi ladki ke liye to rishton ke line lag jaaenge..itni padi likhi..btaya na maine aapko uski degrees ke baare mein Aur uske pariwar ke baare mein..kahin humare haatb se itna accha rishta chut na jaaye..
Nanaji: vishakha..
Vishakha: papa..aap ek baar aaram se soch lijiye..uski tasveer rakhiye..dekh lijiye acche se bio data dekh lijiye..aur kal subah tak bta dijiye..
Aur sameer ko bhi samjha dijiye..
Nanaji: thik hai..
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Time: 7:40 pm
In sameer's room
Sameer locked himself in his room the whole day..he could only think of naina..


Nanaji knocked the door..
He opened the door

Sameer: aapne baat karli mummy se..samjha diya na unhe..
Nanaji: sameer..mujhe bhi lagta hai ki tumhe ab shadi kar leni chahiye..
Sameer was shocked..
Sameer: nnnaa..nanaji ye aap kya keh rahe hai..aaapp to sab jaante hai haina..to fir..
Nanaji: haa beta..dekho..tum abhi 25 saal ke hogaye ho sahi umar hai ye ekdum..
Sameer: aapko mummy ne aur unke husband ne apni baaton mein fasa diya hai nanaji..
Nanaji:aisa nhi hai beta
Sameer: aisa hi hai nanaji..aapko unka hi saath dena hai na..to..
Nanaji: sammer beta..sun to..
Sameer: nhi nanaji..aap unka saath dijiye..lekin main shadi nhi karunga..main nhi karna chahta shadi..na iss ladki se na koi aur se..

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