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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Unres on PG. @ 5

Sorry am again late... The

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

This was so nuce. Very well written.

HeaRd of sibling jealousy. ..but this was new...very well portrayed.

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

hi sweet heart or should i say juju!🤣...i don't know why but this name just crack me off😛.

my apologies for not resing on destined yet maine abhi tak 20th chapter ke baad padha bhi nahi hai😛, but main pehle OS par comment karungi and destined thodha time lekar

your story was...so genuine in existence that if i see something like this happen i wouldnt be surprised😆

i mean..what more do you expect from someone who's been betrayed and abandoned by almost everyone, they tend to be very overprotective and restrictive and unsure about their relations.

but what amazes me is Sumo's maturity level in dealing with him👏

the conversation where abortion is being talked about was really vivid and of course real

but what i liked best was how you connected your nephew's (sorry if i'm not right because i suck at relations) predicament with Shravan's situation

waiting for many more of these beautiful pieces in the day to come

love

arpita

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sunain
Meiny tu destined abhi tak parha bhi nhi 😕
Cuddles dartay dartay Res kar rho hon!
Finally i unressed there!😉

Ressi res!
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Unres

Woah!!
This was something totally exceptional...but was hell Brilliant!⭐️

Shravan all conscious..jealous...scared to share his Sumo with anyone...tht part was really beautifully penned!👏

The secret Talk Daddy and Princess had was lovely!❤️

I so loved the way Suman tackled with him and the way thy sorted their issues was amazing!

U really narrated his fears his love and concern really well!👏👏

and the ending was super super cute!😳

I really loved it!
was penned Brilliantly!👏

I must say u are hell innovative and ur writings are just Mind blowing!⭐️
Everytime u surprise us with something really thrilling..wel m hoping to get some fluffy fluffy updates too n from u what say😳😉😃

Love ya...

Take Care!
Chunna❤️

Yeh dekh...Dhamki kaam kar gayi!!!! Your comments means so much to me my Lalchi!! Really miss you in here!!! Now I can relax, my best critic is here!!! Love ya!!