Armu FF---Dukhi-Mukhi gets Kidnap-Part 3 updated-8.5.17

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Treaser--It has been a month both armu are married and thier life was going pretty like a roller coaster ride...Rami was busy how to seperate them ...along with saanvi...but there every attempts get failed as boths relationship getting Stronger day by day both armu have developed liking for each other but both are not ready to accept it...one fine day...mukhiji has go to some other village for ...discussing ...The prolonged Problem of...WATER...scarity...
Aru--gets mad thinking when i give dukhi mukhi the idea then he rejects it and now what happened...huh dramebaz kahinkeee she thinks...khud ko bahut gyani mantey hai lolzzz😆she was blabbering just then mukhi enters and burst out into laughter..

Aru--raise her one eye ...in a confused state...

Mukhi--------gaurani-----tu khana kya kapney dhoney ke tub me pakati hai...(They were in kitchen as rami has given aru task to make afternoon meal)

Aru---matlab kya hai apkaa??

Mukhi--- signs aru to just look in down.

Aru--- was shocked she has actually put the tub on the flame...(it was of metal thank god)..
she pat her head uff yeh kyaaa...she was embrassed t hell woh main yeh she started..
(actually she was drying the clothes on terrace just then rami came and oders her to make the meal...she was thinking something and forget to keep the tub ...and she accidently put it on the flame)...
Mukhi------rehney de lagta hai fir se koi atrangi sapney me kho gayi thi...

Aru--nahinnn apkooo kya lagta hai main har timr sapney hi dekhtey rehti hun...
Mukhi--ab muh mat khulwaaa Gaurani he chukkeled ...

Aru gets angry again started balbaringgg😆

Mukhi----again started laughing...

Aru got super pissed now aap kya yahan par hasney ke liyey ayey hai to plaease jayey ... mukjhe abhi baratiyon ka khana bana na hai...dont disturb me... she made a very serious face,

Hearing..barati mukhi got serious matlabbb tuje hum sab barati lagtey hai he got pissed tough he was just pretending it and was enjoying his gaurani antics to hell).
Aru------- aur nahin to kyaaa she chukkeled and they get into a cute argument,
ultimately mukhi surrender...😆lo..
Aru dekhaaa mujset to aap nahin jit saktey ...
Mukhi ha meri maaa ...tujsey main kyun khud bhagban bhi nayi jit saktey...
and both brust out into laughing,

Rami was paasing by and hearing thier laugh got super pissed she tought...meri jindagi barbad karke khud ki jindagi abad kar raha hai rajeee main to aisa honey na dungi ...bahiu kar liyaaa maine chota motaa khel ab to aisa khel khelungi tu apni jindagi hi bhul jayega she gets determined...

Meanwhile in kitchen...

Mukhi------are ha gaurani dekh tere baton ke chakar mein..bhul gaya oj batana aya tha woh main aru cut mukhi ...and said ha haaa pata hai ab sham ko pichola gayon ja rahe hai woh pani ki samsya ka hal karney.

Mukhi----------tuje kaise pata chala..in amusement.

Aru------------in a playful huhhh apko kyaaa laga aap naihn bolo gey to pata nahin chalega...mere jassos pore gayon me bhare pare haiii Mr raidhan...she chukeled too





Mukhi-----------achaaa Dafoor dimag wali jassosss he chuckeld tooo


Aru --- kya kaha apney she rooler her eyes...

Mukhi bite his toungue kuchhh nahin tu kam kar panaaa ...main panchayat ja raha hun...kuch kam hai.
Mukhi thinks isey pehley...yeh mere haath pair toder mukhi beta nikal leyy.and he rans away.

Aru--brust out ...and said to herself...42 saal ke bacheyyy...her eyes follow mukhi lovingly!!😳

In the evening mukhi was about to leave...when uma said to aru to accompany mukhi to the jeep ...aru follows mukhi mastanaaa takes his bag..mukhi said to aru..
Ghar ka khayal rakhannnaa main subah hotey hi laut ayongaaa .
Aru---hum sabdhani se jayega aur phone jarro karna...
Mukhi nodded ...and they ;leave...aru too come back to home...

Morning at 7 0 clock...aru had just finished her bath...suddenly sh remebered...about muukhi

aru--7 baj gaye mukhi ji ko to abb tak ajana chayey thaaa 6 baje bole the ayengey aur phone bhi nahin kiya she gets tensed matana ka bhi phone nahin ayaaa.

Here mishri tooo thinknh bhailaaa abhi tak aya kyun nahin she tried mukis no ..not reacheable and mastanaa too both no are not reacheable.

Rami was in templeee ...

Aru came down and called mishri ..both were felling dizzy kailash came and console them ...mukhi will be back..dont take tension...

Aru is feeling has if something big has happen to His dukhi mukhi...
she started panikinggg...and started shouting mujheeei Pancholi gayon leke chaloo please mishri mujhe leke chal ...😲
Mishri consoles her and said to relax she is trying the phone...

Now it has been 11 0 clock since no trace of either Mukhi nor mastana.everybody gets panick...Rami started her crocodile tears...(but she was very happy from within)...uma was genuinelyyy crying and aru s state was worst...

Aru shouted hum yaha pe kyaaa kar rahe hai main ja raih hun pancholiii and she ran whole village ran after her.

Suddenly...she bumped into mastana...

Matana was in bad state his head was bleeding highhh all villagers got shocked...

Aru--mastana yeh yeh kyaaa ho gayaaa aur mukhi ji mukhiji kaha haii

Matana was not in state to say anything aru shakes him

Mastanaaa...said woh woh mukhiii bhaiii wohhh and he narrated the whole story----tough he himself was badly injured...Mishri started cryinggg but she hold herselfff somehow...everybody take mASTANa TO THE house...Kailash...mishri...umaaa arjan...all stand ;like a statue...Rami started her Actinggg she rans to temple pretending she will be on strike until his little brother is back at home safely)..

all are awstruck...aru was about to faint mishri holds her...

Villagers start whispering and crying...

TO BE CONTINUED...!!!


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Originally posted by: mannu100

Treaser--It has been a month both armu are married and thier life was going pretty like a roller coaster ride...Rami was busy how to seperate them ...along with saanvi...but there every attempts get failed as boths relationship getting Stronger day by day both armu have developed liking for each other but both are not ready to accept it...one fine day...mukhiji has go to some other village for ...discussing ...The prolonged Problem of...WATER...scarity...

Aru--gets mad thinking when i give dukhi mukhi the idea then he rejects it and now what happened...huh dramebaz kahinkeee she thinks...khud ko bahut gyani mantey hai lolzzz😆she was blabbering just then mukhi enters and burst out into laughter..

Aru--raise her one eye ...in a confused state...

Mukhi--------gaurani-----tu khana kya kapney dhoney ke tub me pakati hai...(They were in kitchen as rami has given aru task to make afternoon meal)

Aru---matlab kya hai apkaa??

Mukhi--- signs aru to just look in down.

Aru--- was shocked she has actually put the tub on the flame...(it was of metal thank god)..
she pat her head uff yeh kyaaa...she was embrassed t hell woh main yeh she started..
(actually she was drying the clothes on terrace just then rami came and oders her to make the meal...she was thinking something and forget to keep the tub ...and she accidently put it on the flame)...
Mukhi------rehney de lagta hai fir se koi atrangi sapney me kho gayi thi...

Aru--nahinnn apkooo kya lagta hai main har timr sapney hi dekhtey rehti hun...
Mukhi--ab muh mat khulwaaa Gaurani he chukkeled ...

Aru gets angry again started balbaringgg😆

Mukhi----again started laughing...

Aru got super pissed now aap kya yahan par hasney ke liyey ayey hai to plaease jayey ... mukjhe abhi baratiyon ka khana bana na hai...dont disturb me... she made a very serious face,

Hearing..barati mukhi got serious matlabbb tuje hum sab barati lagtey hai he got pissed tough he was just pretending it and was enjoying his gaurani antics to hell).
Aru------- aur nahin to kyaaa she chukkeled and they get into a cute argument,
ultimately mukhi surrender...😆lo..
Aru dekhaaa mujset to aap nahin jit saktey ...
Mukhi ha meri maaa ...tujsey main kyun khud bhagban bhi nayi jit saktey...
and both brust out into laughing,

Rami was paasing by and hearing thier laugh got super pissed she tought...meri jindagi barbad karke khud ki jindagi abad kar raha hai rajeee main to aisa honey na dungi ...bahiu kar liyaaa maine chota motaa khel ab to aisa khel khelungi tu apni jindagi hi bhul jayega she gets determined...

Meanwhile in kitchen...

Mukhi------are ha gaurani dekh tere baton ke chakar mein..bhul gaya oj batana aya tha woh main aru cut mukhi ...and said ha haaa pata hai ab sham ko pichola gayon ja rahe hai woh pani ki samsya ka hal karney.

Mukhi----------tuje kaise pata chala..in amusement.

Aru------------in a playful huhhh apko kyaaa laga aap naihn bolo gey to pata nahin chalega...mere jassos pore gayon me bhare pare haiii Mr raidhan...she chukeled too





Mukhi-----------achaaa Dafoor dimag wali jassosss he chuckeld tooo


Aru --- kya kaha apney she rooler her eyes...

Mukhi bite his toungue kuchhh nahin tu kam kar panaaa ...main panchayat ja raha hun...kuch kam hai.
Mukhi thinks isey pehley...yeh mere haath pair toder mukhi beta nikal leyy.and he rans away.

Aru--brust out ...and said to herself...42 saal ke bacheyyy...her eyes follow mukhi lovingly!!😳

In the evening mukhi was about to leave...when uma said to aru to accompany mukhi to the jeep ...aru follows mukhi mastanaaa takes his bag..mukhi said to aru..
Ghar ka khayal rakhannnaa main subah hotey hi laut ayongaaa .
Aru---hum sabdhani se jayega aur phone jarro karna...
Mukhi nodded ...and they ;leave...aru too come back to home...

Morning at 7 0 clock...aru had just finished her bath...suddenly sh remebered...about muukhi

aru--7 baj gaye mukhi ji ko to abb tak ajana chayey thaaa 6 baje bole the ayengey aur phone bhi nahin kiya she gets tensed matana ka bhi phone nahin ayaaa.

Here mishri tooo thinknh bhailaaa abhi tak aya kyun nahin she tried mukis no ..not reacheable and mastanaa too both no are not reacheable.

Rami was in templeee ...

Aru came down and called mishri ..both were felling dizzy kailash came and console them ...mukhi will be back..dont take tension...

Aru is feeling has if something big has happen to His dukhi mukhi...
she started panikinggg...and started shouting mujheeei Pancholi gayon leke chaloo please mishri mujhe leke chal ...😲
Mishri consoles her and said to relax she is trying the phone...

Now it has been 11 0 clock since no trace of either Mukhi nor mastana.everybody gets panick...Rami started her crocodile tears...(but she was very happy from within)...uma was genuinelyyy crying and aru s state was worst...

Aru shouted hum yaha pe kyaaa kar rahe hai main ja raih hun pancholiii and she ran whole village ran after her.

Suddenly...she bumped into mastana...

Matana was in bad state his head was bleeding highhh all villagers got shocked...

Aru--mastana yeh yeh kyaaa ho gayaaa aur mukhi ji mukhiji kaha haii

Matana was not in state to say anything aru shakes him

Mastanaaa...said woh woh mukhiii bhaiii wohhh and he narrated the whole stry

all are awstruck...aru was abot to fain mishri holds her...

Villagers start paniking and cryinggg

TO BE CONTINUED...!!!

Note--- Please frogive me for grammatical nd Speeling mistake coz by lappy is on ventilator and with phoneee u cant write whole things clearly...

Please Bear me!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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bear with my grammer and speelings please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waah Mannu great start 👏 ArMu funny scenes ke kehne.Aru ne tub chada diya chulhe pe ..aisa Aru hi kar sakti hai of course khoyi hogi Mukhi dreams mein 😉 Mukhi bhi kam nahi hai matlab Gourani ka leg pulling 😆 Rami ben ka bada plan 😲 seedhe sixer..kidnap karwa diya.Bechare Mukhi ke wellwishers 😭 .Ab Mastana hi koi help kar sakta hai.
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This is brilliantly written. I like how the words have a show language touch to it. In your writing, it was easier to imagine the characters and the scenarios. 👏
Mukhi ko kya hua? The suspense is killing me. I loved how you started this from the place where Mukhi and Aru are already married. Mukhi and Aru are just ☺️
Please update this soon. I am already in love with this ff! ❤️
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Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

This is brilliantly written. I like how the words have a show language touch to it. In your writing, it was easier to imagine the characters and the scenarios. 👏
Mukhi ko kya hua? The suspense is killing me. I loved how you started this from the place where Mukhi and Aru are already married. Mukhi and Aru are just ☺️
Please update this soon. I am already in love with this ff! ❤️


thxxx dear...I am glad u like it i wil try my best to post it as soon as possible...
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Waah Mannu great start 👏 ArMu funny scenes ke kehne.Aru ne tub chada diya chulhe pe ..aisa Aru hi kar sakti hai of course khoyi hogi Mukhi dreams mein 😉 Mukhi bhi kam nahi hai matlab Gourani ka leg pulling 😆 Rami ben ka bada plan 😲 seedhe sixer..kidnap karwa diya.Bechare Mukhi ke wellwishers 😭 .Ab Mastana hi koi help kar sakta hai.


😃thxx dear...
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pt- 2

Mastana narrated the whole incident to the family members...

He explained how mukhi and he was returning just then mukhi gets a call ..and he oders him to take a u turn coz there is some major problem freak out in pancholi..Mastana.. follows and they were back to the way to pancholi village just then Mukhis jeep got punctured ...and they had to stop ...When they were discussing how to proceed ...suddenly mukhi gets another call...due to signal problem ...he oders mastana to stay and see if they can get any lift...meanwhile he goes in search of signal...Matana was trying to repair the jeep ..but there was no such kit to repair and even he tries for a lift but the road was to dark for any person to roam in midnight there...20 min have passed and when mukhi doesnet return Mastana gets worried...he follows the way mukhi was headed and started shouting MUkhi bhai mukhi bhai but he found no body suddenly somebody hits him on the head...and he gets unconcious...and when he gets back ...it was all morning...and he just rannn to tell them what has happend in midway..

Hearing this whole village people...and family member...all are preplexed and gets super worry.

Mishri-- kiski himat hiu jo mere bhaila ko hath lagayaaa she oders kailash to call police immediately...but rami stops them😡

Aru is still unconcious...she is balbarring mukhis name--Dukhi mukhi apko uch nahin hoga api gaurani hai na...main un logo ko chodu gi nahin...

Uma ---tells to mishri to take aru inside meanwhile ...the family discussed what to do now...

Here in a dark old factory...we see 4 men ...tying mukhi to a chair who is unconcious...

Two of them said------------Babare admi hai yay ...bora itna bhariii
third men-------------are chup agar yeh jag gaya na to hum sab ki waat lagi nahin jantey kisko utha ke laye hai hum ..

First men --ha ha pata hai ...
third men to fir...chup chup chap ishkooo baad aur nikal le jab tak madam ke agely instruction nahin atey and thet leave from thereee...

Meanwhileee in Mukis house.

Police cam instead of ramis ranting Kailsh had called them cozzz he is adament that this is some big plaaning...

Aru in the room is cryinggg and recalling all happy moments he shares with his dukhi mukhi...

Police takes mastanas statement ...and proceed to the...crime spot...arjan kailash and some village people accompany them...

Mishri...uma ...are praying to god...all the village women o doing the same...

Meanwhile rami gets a call and is super worried...😲

TO BE CONTINUED!!








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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mast update Mannu 👏 .I like the way the story is proceeding.Loved Mishri's dialog "Mere bhaila ko .." . Aur apni Gourani blabbering "Dukhi Mukhi..." 😆 Chalo achha hua Kailash bhai ne phone kar dala police ko 😊 .And of course Aru crying & recalling her moments with Mukhi. 😭 Emotional kar diya agar show mein aisa kuchh intense emotional ArMu related scene aayaa toh humara kya haal hoga.
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Kuchi Mukhi action scenes bhi milega kya Mannu 😉

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