A Vampirical love story [ff] [Chapter 2 updated {Page 3 } ]

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola guys..first of all this story already exists in the forum as one of my amazing friends aayra24 use to update it here for me..and then the story came to a halt, credit goes to my laziness😆. those amazing friends keep requesting me each day but a sloth as i am, i again lost the track..then another of my amazing friends, Maggot16 finally pushed me here..and so i am starting it again freshly under my name (because i don 't think aayra will forgive me after what i have done😕..aah!! just kidding..she is a sweetheart..she will forgive me the minute i will update the next chapter😆) So here i am..deal with me,.till i am lost again😛..
today i will post all the earlier stuff..and will try to come back with the new chappy as soon as possible..but this time the credit for the late update will go to my exams..😆
while reading this story please forget the desi edkv, the names and faces of characters will be same but not their personalities and i may introduce some new characters...so give it a fresh start and take the personalities as i draw them..enough of my bakwaas. WELCOME THE PROLOGUE...😊

Prologue (part 1) - PAGE 1
Prologue (part 2) - PAGE 1
Chapter 1 (The White Waters) - PAGE 2
Chapter 2 (The Alien Meet) - PAGE 3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This new starting in the name of all my lovely friends..love ya guys..i know i am an awful person..but i also know that you love this person😉

PROLOGUE (PART-1)

SUMO'S POV
so here i am completely drowned in the waters of my own destroyed life.what he has done to me.i just can't believe it!!
No why can't i afterall i m as much responsible for my state as he is. No! It's not him it's just me who drove into him. oh! God but now i can't deny it...whatever it takes to be with him i m ready to give it all even MYSELF...and that's what i am most afraid of..i can give anything for him but myself...am i even ready for it...to let him STAIN my pure soul...to let him convert the most lively part of my body...my warm HUMAN heart into a COLD one just like his...why can't everything get back to NORMAL as it was with no HIM in it...oh stop it u foolish girl DAMAGE is already done wishing all to be normal won't help but neither wishing to to be WITH HIM would...it is what it is...i love him..i love him madly,passionately like no one else and in every human way possible but this is the ALIEN way in which i have to GIVE myself in the process and the QUESTION still stands as big as it was when he confessed by his cold pink lips which tastes the warmest in the universe..because somewhere this is what i wanted but..'DO I LOVE HIM ENOUGH TO GIVE MYSELF???'
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE (PART 2)

sumo was near her college, in a park. She was sitting in the grass with her legs attached through her chest. The grass was wet but not as much as her face was with tears and sweat clinging to every bit of her pale yet beautiful face. She looked at her college...to be precise she looked at her college GATE which she knew would have given many new dimensions to her life...but a dimension like this...it was unbelievable for her...the gate suddenly appear blurred not because of the night that was prevailing but because of her drowsy red eyes with kajal smudged at the edges. Even she wants this...she wanted everything to disappear...to start fresh forgetting everything but u can only do that when u cut down all the strings to your past and she didn't even want to do that...because she wanted all this to be true but now when it's waiting for her with it's arms wide open she is CONFUSED.

SUMO'S POV
I know HE would have done that for me if he would have been at my place. He would have done it, the first time he saw me, i could see it in his warm brown eyes on the day we met but that's because he had nothing to lose it's me who will lose...lose what i am...and then she went back thinking about the day she met HIM.


Ok!enough hints for shravan's character...still can't guess...look at the title...ok u will come to know...i always wanted to see shravan in this character. Ironically it's a cold character but we all know how hot shravan is..😉 And i will introduce him soon.
or confuse ho naa, accha hai chapter 1 se sab clear hona shuru ho jaayega..

Views guys??... Any type of criticism or advice is welcome..
Also tell me if you want me to discontinue..
Edited by Shri_girl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thrilling!!!
But I remember having read some chapters long ago!!
Anyway eager to read afresh
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really excited.. I have read some chapters some time back..
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue...

I think I read this earlier...Shravan is vampire right cold vampire...

Continue soon
Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start..
Continue soon...
Excitement increasing 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the immediate response guys..
and the ones who have read this before..thanks again..and as i said i am starting fresh..so deal with one more oldie update..chapter 3 will be as new for you as for everyone else..will try not to disappoint you this time😊

for maggot16 more than anyone else..
Chapter 1 ( The Whitewaters)

Flashback..

Sumo calls Pari...
Sumo-'guess what!! I got it...finally i got it'
Pari-'really??wow..i haven't got mine till now.but i am happy for u..afterall u are such a nerd. So finally dream come true..graduation from White Water International University'
Sumo-'yesss...and don't worry u will get your's soon.we both will go together as always..Ok! then i have to go and tell me when u get it..i am sure you will get it. no need to get upset ok!! now cheer up!'
Pari-'hmmm...'
--call ended--
(Pari i know u will get it. I will not go alone to TERA...not at all) thought sumo.
just then nirmala (sumo's mom) enters in her room...
Nirmala-'what happened? Why u look so worried ??..Everything ok?? Is Pari not as much excited as u'
Sumo-'noo actually she didn't get her acceptance letter till now'
Nirmala-'oh! So that's the reason'
Sumo-'no i am not worried about that. i know she will get it and then she will be super excited about it and will be eating all my head'
Nirmala-'then what is it?'
Sumo-'i am just worried about TERA. I know it's a small place.but it's far away from here and we both will be there in a week all alone'
Nirmala-'u will not be alone.u both have each other'
Sumo-'but it's a new place for both of us'
Nirmala-'oh! Don't worry. i know my girls will cast their magic there also. And all the students will be from different countries and places,so all of u will be on the same page'
Sumo-'hmmm...hope everything goes right'
Nirmala-'it will. Now stop all this gibbering and pack up. Afterall u are going to live your dreams. so i guess u don't want to be late and also u will have to help Pari in her last minute packings'

_ _ _ _ _ _ after a Week_ _ _ _ _sunday morning_ _ _ _
ah! Finally we are in TERA and as expected Pari has not shut her mouth from the second she has got her letter. But fortunately this new place has provided me a defense mechanism against the continious blah...blah...of my best friend. due to the cold weather here my ears have become numb and so my hearing power has comparatively gone down and that's really helpful for me to tolerate her.i knew it would be cool here but it is a little more than i expected. TERA was a small town with forest covers on most of it's land, very little sunlight and cool weather. also it has many hospitals(and i don't know why because there are very less people here apart from the students)and yes how can i forget it...here also lies one of the well-known international university of the world-WHITE WATERS. And this is what i came to know about TERA from google and from my journey from TERA airport to our hostel.
we reached our hostel at 10 in the morning. Most of the seniors were out for classes and some were hurrying up to go...gulping their breakfasts in the process.only freshers like us were trying to find their appointed rooms which we were given with our acceptance letter. Fortunately me and Pari have to share the same room.although any other girl can also join us because there can be maximum 3 girls in a room. so some rooms had 3...some had 2.but we really don't care about all this,till the time we both are together.
'here it is 407' Pari exclaimed
Me-'are u sure'
Pari-'yes...yes...'
I tried to open the door but it was locked from inside. i gave pari a confused look.
'I think someone has already taken our room'pari said suspiciously.
I knew my best friend and can't trust her memory, so shook my head looking at her and took out my letter, to check the room no...it was 402.i looked at her and she nodded sheepishly and then followed me to room no. 402. We went inside. It was a normal hostel room.i pulled our bags inside and went to the bathroom to freshen up and when i came out Pari started again but this time it was the complaining part.
Pari-'this is what they call a room.i mean look at the walls,they are so dull...my posters will not look bright on them'
Me-'Pari this is not home. It's a hostel'
Pari-'yes it is a hostel of one of the greatest international universities of the world..that's what i am saying'

i shook my head and started unpacking things. Pari helped me in it but her complains never stopped..
Pari-'even the food is not good'
Me-'u have not even tasted it yet'
Pari-'and i don't think i will...not soon enough.u know i can't even identify what seniors were eating in breakfast'
Me-'that's because messes here have different food themes everyday..one day it's the indian food dishes and other days the other country dishes. Since students here are from all over the world'
Pari-'watever...but thank god! Cafe and indian food stalls are nearby...they are very important for our survival here'

after the unpacking Pari freshened up and we both rushed down to the mess for the lunch.classes get over in the evening so the seniors were still not there and freshers were eating in their respective country groups.we found some indian girls sitting at the end of the table.we smiled at them and they smiled back as we sat at the other end of the table. it was some other country food day so food was unknown to us and Pari was already making faces.but i somehow managed to eat and also made Pari to eat some. however she only ate when i promised her that we will get the dinner from outside and will have snacks in the evening.
On the way back to our room i tried to give Pari a lecture on adjusting..
Pari-'ok! Will u stop now it's just one day...no not even one day and u have already started. I will adjust. but it will take time. I am not like u'
i was about to shot again..
Pari-'don't start again. I understood. I will try to adjust ok!! Plz now i am feeling really tired.let's go and have some beauty sleep...i want to check the boys soon'
my best friend can never change and i don't want her to. I love her like this only. so i said nothing and followed her to have some good since me too was tired by the unpacking and the journey. although we didn't walked much but the flight was very long and Pari never stopped talking so i really needed this. and then we spend the whole afternoon sleeping.
after getting up we had no work so we decided to go out to have some snacks and a walk around the campus
the classes will be starting from tmrw itself after the counselling of the colleges and we came a day early to adjust to the surroundings
after some walk we went to a cafe and had some coffee. as we returned back to the hostel we saw some freshers standing on the stairs and discussing something.

so guys i know it was boring since there was no shravan but i promise he will be there in next part..
do like and comment
any kind of criticism or advice too is welcome..
oh yes! you can buddy the account for pm's😊.
Edited by Shri_girl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok they are staying in hostel.. Pari is her bestie...

College life starting...

Waiting for Shravan's entry...

Good job
Vinu

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon

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