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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Omg!! Where do you get these ideas man?

Such a innovative brain *poor jealous me* 🤣 okay sorry

But this was too good

Bichara shravan i know the pain jab koi black pehnne se mana kar de

And he was feeling akward...bichara mera Oxford grad

But this was beautifully penned

The way he took her side was so adorable

Please we need more of them...write more

Dolly😊

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

These Os of urs .. I loveee them ..

nice concept .. Mrs Malhotra sure has control over her husband .. black dress for 3 yr old .. hahaha ..

I liked the father daughter convo and sumo chachi teaming up ... would hve loved to see such a scene .. Par u r der,so no worries,sari icha puri ho jati h ..😆

Mr Hot Shot lawyer getting conscious .. hmm .. nice .. after all sbki koi na koi weakness hoti h .. I just loved Shravan closing up that girl's mouth with such an awsm reply ..

And yes the ending was romantic ..😉

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Dino!!!🤗

O to the M effing G!!!

Wht to say m literally speechless...hell astonished reading such a Splendid piece of urz!

Indeed a Spellbinding one!⭐️

The dialogues were Incredible👏...i just loved and enjoyed it to core!❤️

His obsession with Black makes me go crazy too😆

"Tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta.. Din bhar court me kala kawwa ban ke ghumte ho tumhara dil nahi bharta?"

Ohh this one got me into fits🤣...the bold one👍🏼🤣

"Tum to rehne hi do.. Tumse better choice hai meri..who wears yellow and orange to work in the blazing heat of delhi? Aisa lagta hai jaise road par se flame chal ke ja rahi hai !!"

N this one too😆🤣...Epic yar..😆

Ohh...i was all Awe struck imagining Sia n Shravan's lovely bond...n his infinte love for his adorable daughter...damn cute❤️

"Bachcho ko force nahi karte ..you are a bully"

Awwhh...😳

Shravan aur conscious😆...i found it cute..really cute😳

Ohh n the way Shraman made Ria shutup..ws lovely...Nahi.. wo Suman Malhotra hai... the girl of my dreams..she is a bully still..true.. She forced me to wear this outfit which you have so unabashedly ogled at..but she is coolest wife on the planet as she did not punch you yet for clinging on to me the way you did.."...Banda nay dil jeet liya😳

"Kya hua tumhe Malhotra?"..."Pyaar hua hai.. My rockstar"...This one indeed stole my heart...Lag ja gale Dino🤗

N the ending was hell lovely❤️

All in all i so much loved and enjoyed it..i feel like giving u trillions of huggies🤗

Love you for such a Tremendous OS!⭐️

Hope to get more such sweet stuffs soon😳

till thn...

Take Care!

Sunain❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sunain
Dino!!!🤗
O to the M effing G!!!
Wht to say m literally speechless...hell astonished reading such a Splendid piece of urz!
Indeed a Spellbinding one!⭐️
The dialogues were Incredible👏...i just loved and enjoyed it to core!❤️

His obsession with Black makes me go crazy too😆

"Tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta.. Din bhar court me kala kawwa ban ke ghumte ho tumhara dil nahi bharta?"

Ohh this one got me into fits🤣...the bold one👍🏼🤣

"Tum to rehne hi do.. Tumse better choice hai meri..who wears yellow and orange to work in the blazing heat of delhi? Aisa lagta hai jaise road par se flame chal ke ja rahi hai !!"

N this one too😆🤣...Epic yar..😆

Ohh...i was all Awe struck imagining Sia n Shravan's lovely bond...n his infinte love for his adorable daughter...damn cute❤️

"Bachcho ko force nahi karte ..you are a bully"

Awwhh...😳

Shravan aur conscious😆...i found it cute..really cute😳

Ohh n the way Shraman made Ria shutup..ws lovely...Nahi.. wo Suman Malhotra hai... the girl of my dreams..she is a bully still..true.. She forced me to wear this outfit which you have so unabashedly ogled at..but she is coolest wife on the planet as she did not punch you yet for clinging on to me the way you did.."...Banda nay dil jeet liya😳

"Kya hua tumhe Malhotra?"..."Pyaar hua hai.. My rockstar"...This one indeed stole my heart...Lag ja gale Dino🤗

N the ending was hell lovely❤️

All in all i so much loved and enjoyed it..i feel like giving u trillions of huggies🤗
Love you for such a Tremendous OS!⭐️
Hope to get more such sweet stuffs soon😳
till thn...

Take Care!
Sunain❤️